The Visitor
About this creation

One eerie and dark night, Kevin was the last one to leave the office.

After locking all the doors, he noticed a bright light coming from under the back door.

Curious about the light, Kevin walked closer, almost touching the door knob.

He turned the door knob, not knowing what was out there.

Kicking the door open, the light illuminated the room.

Kevin could not see anything out of the door, so he decided to go out.

Now that his eyes were accustomed to the light, he saw something move outside.

It was a black figure, moving closer and closer to him.

The figure was now a few feet away from him.

Kevin was now petrified, pleading that the figure would go away.
But it came closer and closer and closer and then......

"Cookie?"

"AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

Kevin fainted and fell to the floor.
Vader:"Oh man, that's the third one this week!!! All I want is a friend....Maybe its the cookie that scares them....

"CUT!!!!!!"

Director:"Good job Vader"
Mutt:"Could I have my hair back?"
Sigh. Look at the Horror movies they make now a days....
Not scary at all.
Coming Soon to a theater near you!
The Visitor!
Critics gave it 0.5 out of 5!
Mocpages news editor, Mark Bricksman:"This movie is as exciting as a bowl of custard."
Starring Kevin Dinkleberg and Darth Vader!
Directed by a man who forgot his name!
Coming this Summer!
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this movie is as boring as a bowl of custard RFOL! |
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April 10, 2010 |
I thought Vader was holding a thermal detonator.
"Cookie?"
While Kevin screamed I went, "LOLOL" |
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April 2, 2010 |
Very well done Michael, the photography is extremely well !! |
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March 30, 2010 |
Nice buildup with the dark ambiance! Then explodes with hilarity! That's one burnt cookie! |
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March 27, 2010 |
"Cookie?" Lol, that's funny! |
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March 27, 2010 |
That was very funny! I like the climax of the play, it's pretty cool! ~Ryan |
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March 27, 2010 |
Haha! That was really funny i thought Vader would kill him. The cookie part was ingenious. |
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March 27, 2010 |
This is great! Love the lighting effects, and the ending is really funny. |
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March 27, 2010 |
AHAHAHAHAH!!! u got a lot of tan pieces and is his faces from the agent sets? |
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I made it |
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March 26, 2010 |
Quoting MOODSWIM <>
LOL! This is great! I love the lighting effect through the door. That fig is a pretty close resemblence to me too:)
Starring Kevin Ryhal! The Visitor! HAHAHAHAHA! |
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March 26, 2010 |
LOL! This is great! I love the lighting effect through the door. That fig is a pretty close resemblence to me too:) |
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