Alright, you guys all realize this thing is a pain in my backside to pull together, so I just need a tad more time to get some new BL orders for the sets. Hopefully it'll pay off in the end...
About this creation
This is the preview for my upcoming comic "Xaxian Scum"! I'm very excited to create this one. This one also has to do with The Crimson Guard, the story takes place before the CG, but eventually the CG gets invented at the end of the story. Mainly the story revolves around my sigfig trying to destroy the ruler of the Xhalaraxius galaxy: The Great Xaalt, and using a new power that might do the job. Anyways, here is a line up of the main characters in my comic, and small descriptions too!
Zylo
The main character, the "Awesome Eviscerator", and the all around spiky blue haired dude with a Gatling gun. AKA Siggy Eric Figgy.
Ozzie
The scaredy cat scientist who helps Zylo out with the jobs he gets from everybody, often jobs the people won't do themselves, even when they can.
Edge
He's the half robot half human dude who lives on the edge! And the owner of the one and only ultimate weapon, the Liberator! an over-sized gun that fires heat seeking plasma missiles!
Kaaden
Kaaden has one robotic eye, and loves to shoot and blow stuff up! He can even use his robot eye as a laser pointer! which is ironic considering laser pointers aren't the best thing to point in your eyes.
Bob
An old plumber with a little life experience, mostly because he's done some plumbing in the Zewk city sewers, and there are some nasty creatures down there! You better bring a gun with ya!
Chip
Chip is a former Crimson Guard bot, that somehow found an old CG Trans-Ring and messed around with it. Apparently he jumped into the portal and it transmitted his molecules back in time! He had no idea why it transported him back in time instead of transporting him to another area. But they think it's because he's a robot. But since he met Zylo and the guys when he came out of the portal, he helps them out with jobs now.
Please rate and comment! and if you wanna be in the comic, just say! I'll try to work you in it!
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Interesting, but without the CG, it will be useless! |
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September 27, 2010 |
Quoting . Klay .
Interesting. This could be good. Pretty weird, though.
It's a lot different than the preview suggests. Actually, the preview's information is somewhat obsolete now. it doesn't particularly give the viewer the right idea of the comics true outcome. |
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Interesting. This could be good. Pretty weird, though. |
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September 8, 2010 |
Quoting Awesome-o-saurus The Not-So-Great
True, true. I gave up trying to make my sets look nice, but for future projects, I may try harder.
I wish I had the pieces to make fantastic sets, but I think I'll keep it moderately good. If I had the amount of vast pieces Phip cream, or Mark Kelso had, I'd make a life size anime girl. Ehem, I mean amazing sets for Xaxian Scum. |
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True, true. I gave up trying to make my sets look nice, but for future projects, I may try harder. |
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September 6, 2010 |
Quoting Awesome-o-saurus The Not-So-Great
You're having more trouble pulling this together than I'm having keeping Precipice on the rails! And that's definitely saying something.
Well, it's really not my fault. First of all, I need more BL orders before I can make the sets (and that's hard considering I'm saving up for a PS3 right now aswell). And secondly, I want this to really look good when it premieres. And really, the premiere episode is the hardest, the rest leading after the first episode shouldn't be as difficult. |
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September 6, 2010 |
You're having more trouble pulling this together than I'm having keeping Precipice on the rails! And that's definitely saying something. |
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July 28, 2010 |
looks interesting.... |
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July 28, 2010 |
Quoting T.K .
Great idea for a comic. I like the picture.
Thanks! |
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July 28, 2010 |
Great idea for a comic. I like the picture. |
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July 21, 2010 |
could you invite me to join the group? i would like to see more of this |
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July 4, 2010 |
Quoting Aiden Faulconer®
im already liking it lol and what is that black colored thing sludge man? lol and could i have a part in this comic?
Thanks! BTW the sludge man is The Shadow Inverse. You'll soon find out what that is. |
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July 3, 2010 |
im already liking it lol and what is that black colored thing sludge man? lol and could i have a part in this comic? |
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June 16, 2010 |
Okay, just to tell ya guys, please don't rate more than once, if you make multiple comments. |
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Hmm, "Point Zero" has something to do with this comic, just saying..;) |
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Hey zylo am I aloud to make creations for this and have you made a group for it yet? Oh do they have hard suits? I was just wondering because I just built 2 hard suits and I wanted to upload them but I didn't know what they had to do with. I hope you will be making more mocs for this. I already made a sigfig for it can i upload him? |
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Exactly. The only reason this is so popular is many people commenting to be in it. And they're making multiple ratings. |
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June 4, 2010 |
Quoting Christian Schlichting
Seems, i'll finally found out what Crimson Guard actually is. Characters sounds funny, some kind of trash-sci-fi maybe like Andromeda or so. COuld be fun if made good.
Finally someone giving something I would consider more of a COMMENT. Well, it's more based off of video game sci-fi, such as Ratchet & Clank, Jak & Daxter, or other futuristic video games. Since I don't really watch any sci-fi trash, I don't really know what ideas are in them. This series is basically the history of the CG's beginning, and the history of my character. BTW don't worry about it being good/quality and stuff, it will. I'm going to take good pictures, on sets, and add facial expressions (like on the title picture) in photoshop, along with word balloons. |
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June 4, 2010 |
Seems, i'll finally found out what Crimson Guard actually is. Characters sounds funny, some kind of trash-sci-fi maybe like Andromeda or so. COuld be fun if made good. |
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June 2, 2010 |
Quoting Commander Luigi
Is the comic almost done?
Not so much, it's very hard, so far I've written most of the story though. I need to take pictures, photoshop em, and post em. So hopefully not too long. |
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June 2, 2010 |
Is the comic almost done? |
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May 30, 2010 |
Quoting commander Ryan
Can i be in it?
Maybe! I just have so many requests, so I need to write everyone down. |
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May 30, 2010 |
Can i be in it? |
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Oh great. The first two of my comic series will be up within a week! Along with a few other MOCs. |
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May 30, 2010 |
Quoting Cyber ODST
POST THE COMIC ALREADY!!!!!
hehe, sorry, it's gonna take a while still. |
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May 28, 2010 |
Quoting Shcuz the Crimson Guard™
that is fine, Zylo
Okay, thanks! |
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May 28, 2010 |
that is fine, Zylo |
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May 27, 2010 |
Quoting Shcuz the Crimson Guard�
Oh, Zylo! I know who i'm Gonna be! I'll be a sort of underground Weapons/vehicles dealer who helps out Eric by posing as Xaalt troopers and "acquiring" stuff! Called Bristol! (yeah, thats right! Bristol!) I'll go add him to the Wiki! Say if yous has a problem with this! Here's a pic of the fig, i made it on buy-me-mizer so all pieces can be bought:
http://www.mocpages.com/image_zoom.php?mocid=&id=/user_images/40583/12749777741
Perfect idea! but may I make my own version of it? because it needs to match the Xaxian Scum style/look. And the prints and pieces you used look too old style and plain. If you let me modify it a little, I can make it match the style I need, and keep as much of the design as the one you made. |
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May 27, 2010 |
Quoting CC-1792 Commander Trixe
Cool characters Zylo! I like em! So is this going to be like the history of CG or something like that because when I first saw I had no idea it had anything to do with CG.
Yeah, actually it kinda is the history behind the CG. It starts because at the end of the story the CG will get invented. |
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Oh, Zylo! I know who i'm Gonna be! I'll be a sort of underground Weapons/vehicles dealer who helps out Eric by posing as Xaalt troopers and "acquiring" stuff! Called Bristol! (yeah, thats right! Bristol!) I'll go add him to the Wiki! Say if yous has a problem with this! Here's a pic of the fig, i made it on buy-me-mizer so all pieces can be bought:
http://www.mocpages.com/image_zoom.php?mocid=&id=/user_images/40583/12749777741 |
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May 27, 2010 |
Cool characters Zylo! I like em! So is this going to be like the history of CG or something like that because when I first saw I had no idea it had anything to do with CG. |
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May 27, 2010 |
Quoting Deviss .
Ending for me!
Cool! I'll work ya in there! |
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May 27, 2010 |
Quoting Deviss .
High Commander. The one who uberly outranks every.
Well, since the CG doesn't exist yet in the timeline the comic first takes place in. You'de have to be either a Xaalt Trooper, part of the team against Xaalt, or a High Commander shown in the ending of the series when the CG is invented. |
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High Commander. The one who uberly outranks every. |
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May 26, 2010 |
Quoting Commander Fox .
Where am I?!
Still gotta design the character, dude. XD |
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May 26, 2010 |
Quoting Commander Luigi
Yes I have a character in mind.I want my person to be like Eric.And call him Luigi.
Cool, I can do that! I might need a little more time to get Bricklink orders for this comic too, but it'll be fun to make another character like mine! |
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May 26, 2010 |
Yes I have a character in mind.I want my person to be like Eric.And call him Luigi. |
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May 25, 2010 |
Can i be in it i dont mind what i do. |
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May 23, 2010 |
Quoting Commander Luigi
Hey what about me Zylo? I wanna be in it!
Maybe! have any type of character in mind? |
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May 23, 2010 |
Quoting Deviss .
What character will I play?
uuuuhhhhh, Deviss? what do ya wanna be? |
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May 23, 2010 |
Hey what about me Zylo? I wanna be in it! |
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What character will I play? |
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May 23, 2010 |
Quoting Vanguard Lieutenant Bonno
Would I like to be a Xaalt trooper? No thank you. For the MOC-Off then: If I win, I don't become a Xaalt Trooper in your story instead I become like a main character.
If I lose I become a Xaalt captain.
But if you're not happy with these conditions I'll be a Xaalt Commander who defects to the CG after the Great Xaalt or whatever is defeated.
P.S: Who is that other guy in the main pic? Not Eric.
Eh, how about the second choice, but here's what will happen: You can be the Xaalt Trooper Commander, who is ORIGINALLY a bad guy, then turns good when Xaalt is defeated, and joins the CG that Eric makes. Wait, nevermind, that's what you said XD. BTW the "other guy" in the pic is Eric's Shadow Inverse, the demonic and spiritual, yet, controllable power Eric uses to kill Xaalt. Read up on it. |
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May 23, 2010 |
Would I like to be a Xaalt trooper? No thank you. For the MOC-Off then: If I win, I don't become a Xaalt Trooper in your story instead I become like a main character.
If I lose I become a Xaalt captain.
But if you're not happy with these conditions I'll be a Xaalt Commander who defects to the CG after the Great Xaalt or whatever is defeated.
P.S: Who is that other guy in the main pic? Not Eric. |
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May 22, 2010 |
Quoting Richie Bonno
And not just a dude who appears for like five pics, unless I can be like an Emperor.
Maybe, Richie. Would you like to be one of the main Xaalt Troopers? they're the bad guys, but they appear a lot in the comic. |
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May 22, 2010 |
Pretty nice idea, I'll give it 4/5, nice job! It'll probably be a good comic, good luck! |
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Don't you hate when someone comments on something asking people to "come check out my (insert moc name here)"? |
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April 19, 2010 |
Quoting Ryan Durant
I'd say you've reached the point of awesomeness here! This preview itself is one of my best faves, so Kudos all around! ~Ryan
Thanks so much! I also like this one the most right now! |
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April 18, 2010 |
I'd say you've reached the point of awesomeness here! This preview itself is one of my best faves, so Kudos all around! ~Ryan |
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April 17, 2010 |
Great. Love to see it! |
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April 15, 2010 |
AWESOME!!!!total E!!! can i be a charecter? |
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April 13, 2010 |
OK. Then can I be your right-hand man with an M4? |
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April 10, 2010 |
Quoting Commander Fox .
Dude, can I be a CG Cmdr. that doesn't die?
Well, actually, I wrote the preview wrong. My sigfig isn't fighting the CG, because the story takes place before the CG and when the great Xaalt ruled our galaxy. But you can be another character! |
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April 10, 2010 |
Dude, can I be a CG Cmdr. that doesn't die? |
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April 5, 2010 |
Quoting nathan long
Sweet dude! I love the Xaxian / Scum sign. And congrats on the explore page viewing! P.S the names are awesome, and I can't wait till the real thing!
Great! thanks! |
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April 5, 2010 |
Sweet dude! I love the Xaxian / Scum sign. And congrats on the explore page viewing! P.S the names are awesome, and I can't wait till the real thing! |
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Random Dan April 4, 2010 |
Cool. Can I Be in it?
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April 4, 2010 |
Quoting - Sand Ninja -
Hey, you're on the explore page!
I know! I'm so happy! |
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April 4, 2010 |
Quoting Random Dan
Cool. Can I Be in it?
Maybe, are you in the CG? |
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Hey, you're on the explore page! |
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April 4, 2010 |
Quoting £ E.K.O £
creative!
Thanks! Did you like the "awsume eviscerator" part? |
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April 4, 2010 |
creative! |
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April 3, 2010 |
Quoting Berial .
Nice!Cool build and cool characters!
Thanks! if you want, I could give you some spoiler pictures of how the characters look! |
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April 3, 2010 |
Nice!Cool build and cool characters! |
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April 3, 2010 |
Quoting jason corlett
Cool little build! I like the figs and that spiral technique looks awesome!
Thanks! the spiral is made up of 1X1 sideways clips put in a spiral shape. |
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April 3, 2010 |
Cool little build! I like the figs and that spiral technique looks awesome! |
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April 3, 2010 |
Ah, ok, cool |
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Jorge Kemper April 2, 2010 |
Very cool, I like the black guys weapon, the use of mini-figs hands is a good idea.-George |
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April 2, 2010 |
Quoting Finn C-Q
I am in both the DARX and CG groups. Are they allied? And I have no idea when I will actually get around to posting mine. Anywho, it will probably happen after a U.N.E. war story episode is posted. Although I don't always like having two comics running similtaniously. Like my Final orbit one. :P
Actually, the CG and the DARX are at war, we're waiting for them to choose a contestant in a contest of CG vs DARX. |
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April 2, 2010 |
Quoting Jorge Kemper
Very cool, I like the black guys weapon, the use of mini-figs hands is a good idea.-George
Thanks! |
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April 2, 2010 |
I am in both the DARX and CG groups. Are they allied? And I have no idea when I will actually get around to posting mine. Anywho, it will probably happen after a U.N.E. war story episode is posted. Although I don't always like having two comics running similtaniously. Like my Final orbit one. :P |
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April 2, 2010 |
Seems very interesting. I'll be sure to follow your series when it starts! |
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April 2, 2010 |
Quoting - Sand Ninja -
Wow! Looks really cool!
Thanks! I really appreciate the comment! I'm tryin' to get on the explore page! |
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April 2, 2010 |
Wow! Looks really cool! |
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April 2, 2010 |
Quoting Ben The Lego Builder
This preview is actually quite nice, just enough to give us a little bit of an idea of this comic. I can't wait to see it!
Wow, thanks! I'm still workin' on the story! BTW check out my CG tank and Shark on a plaque please! |
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April 2, 2010 |
This preview is actually quite nice, just enough to give us a little bit of an idea of this comic. I can't wait to see it! |
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April 1, 2010 |
ME WANT TO BE A CG COMMANDER WHO DOESN'T DIE!!! ~Commander Fox |
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April 1, 2010 |
Quoting Finn C-Q
Actually I plan on doing something similar maybe. If I do, could my charactor meet up with yours, or is that going too far? I don't know. But anyway...
I don't mind, so sure! are you in the CG? |
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Actually I plan on doing something similar maybe. If I do, could my charactor meet up with yours, or is that going too far? I don't know. But anyway... |
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April 1, 2010 |
Quoting Anchovy .
Mind if I use the main pic as my computer's desktop picture?
Go ahead Green! I'm happy if you do! |
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April 1, 2010 |
Mind if I use the main pic as my computer's desktop picture? |
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April 1, 2010 |
Quoting Justin R.
It sounds really good, and I'm looking forward to it! Thanks for the nice comment!
Thanks! and you're welcome, I'm just leaving nice comments everywhere today, and telling people to check my preview out. |
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April 1, 2010 |
It sounds really good, and I'm looking forward to it! Thanks for the nice comment! |
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April 1, 2010 |
This outta be good |
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April 1, 2010 |
Quoting Shcuz the Crimson Guard
yeah zylo, he means in Kaaden's profile
Oh I see! thanks! |
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April 1, 2010 |
yeah zylo, he means in Kaaden's profile |
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April 1, 2010 |
To Deviss, Shcuz, and Green: Yes, I'm hoping to put you all in the comic, but it's more organized if you tell me you want to be in it here. The story part about him trying to destroy the CG is just part of the story, it doesn't mean the CG gets destroyed, or that you're not a Guard anymore. Also, to Green: actually yes, it is spelt "shot" in Chip's profile, maybe you missread it. |
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April 1, 2010 |
Sounds cool, cant w8 :) |
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April 1, 2010 |
Cool! Can't wait to see it. |
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April 1, 2010 |
I should be in this..I'm high commander after all ^.^ |
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April 1, 2010 |
Yeah, where are we?! and the crimson guard is the good guys, why's he trying to destroy us? Check out my new stuff! |
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April 1, 2010 |
And where am I in all of this? BTW I thought it was Xalaxarian, not Xaxian. BTW it's Shoot, not Shot on one of the guy's profiles. |
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