Quoting Harvey Cu OK. First of all welcome to Mocpages. For your first moc, it is not the best that I have seen here but nevertheless its ok as color combination, form and build is good. Pictures are good as well although close up are not necessary. Its better to get full body action pictures instead. Make a story as well. Lastly, don't be desperate if no one comments. You'll get more comments as you get by here and get to know the other mocers and improve your mocing skills. Learn from seasoned mocers as well. Also join and participate in Bionicle Display Group, the biggest pure bionicle mocer group here.