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Star Wars the Clone Wars: The Chosen Legion- Part 1
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Yavin IV Clone Training Center


Commander Breona- General Kydan? Are you sure this a very good idea of having rookies to the army>

Kydan- Yes it is. We can't always rely on our elite troops on every little thing there is. I mean, if any of them was destroyed, who
knows what would happen.

Commander Breona- Yeas, but still............ I don't think rookies are not cut out for these kind of missions.

Kydan- Calm yourself down Breona.




Kydan- Besides, I know what I'm doing and its the right choice.

Coomander Breona- I still don't think having rookies to the legion is a very good idea.

Kydan- (sighs) Breona? Do you remember what it was like when you were a rookie to the Republic?

Commander Breona: Yeah. What about it?





Kydan- I chosen you because I saw a wonderful soldier that will one day be a commander of an entire legion,
and now look at you.

Commander Breona- So whats your point Kydan?

Kydan- My point is that I chosen these soldiers for a special purpose.




Commander Breona- What kind of special purpose?

Kydan- I mean the kind of purpose that can probably stop the war finally.

Commander Breona- Hmmmmm.......... That is a interesting theory.

Kydan- Breona! I'm being serious about this.

Commander Breona- I'm just joking sir. I know what you meant.




Commander Breona- Well, are you ready Kydan?

Kydan- Sure am. Lets do it.

Commander Breona- Kydan?

Kydan Yeah?

Commander Breona- May the force be with you on this on.

(Kydan smirks at Breona)




Kydan- May I have everyone attention please? Thank you. (coughs a little) Welcome to the Clone Training Center on Yavin IV.
You are here today because of a purpose. A purpose that can probably stop the war against the Seperatist Army. Now you may think,
" How can I stop a war myself ?" Well, its not just about you. Its about all of you in this room today.

Kydan- But getting to the point. Since you are new rookies to the army today, you'll be put into a team......a team that is very unique
and highly classified skills. You will be tested by your skills and smarts. This team is the 1st Legion. But the real name for it is the Fedenare Legion. Now that is out of the way, I would like to know your names. Not your ID names, your nicknames.

Rookie- Um sir? We don't have nicknames.




Kydan- Then in that case soldier, I'll give you all nicknames myself. I can see in you that you will become a great captain, so your
nickname will be CAPTAIN Sting. You! I can see some good skills in you, so your name will be KAJ pro. Now here, I can see you as
a wonderful leader and is always in the battlefield, so your name will be Frontline. Now you. I can see that you will be very focused on the battle and has a bright future ahead of you, so your name will be Sparks. And last but not least, you. I can see wonderful things within you.
I can see that you will become a great general like myself and command a legion of your own, so your name will be Jaden....... Hyuga.

Everyone at once- THANK YOU SIR!



This was the first story of the Fedenare Legion. I'm planning on making more and hoping to get good ratings and comments from others. I hope you enjoyed what I have to show you all. PLEASE COMMENT AND RATE :)



Comments

Jedi/Dark Mercenary Kydan Witress
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Connor McGinnis
  January 14, 2011
Pretty cool.
 I made it 
  January 13, 2011
Quoting pedro eduardo where is the sing up topic?
It has been deleted By Chris, the administator. It is now a group and you can still join. I have already sent a invite to the people that are in the story so far. I have already invited you too.;D
 I like it 
  January 13, 2011
here is the sing up topic?
 I like it 
  May 14, 2010
Oh right. Thats a pretty good idea! But I dont need to use it, thank God.
 I made it 
  May 10, 2010
Quoting Commander Surge That comic is unique, original and great! definite 5/5! But why use stormie helmets???
I used the stormies because I don't have that many clone wars troops (I only have at least 10 and thats including Captain Rex). So I thought I can use stormies for rookies and for seargents. Then they would be upgraded to any clones they want.
 I made it 
  May 10, 2010
Quoting Commander Surge That comic is unique, original and great! definite 5/5! But why use stormie helmets???
I used the stormies because I don't have that many clone wars troops (I only have at least 10 and thats including Captain Rex). So I thought I can use stormies for rookies and for seargents. Then they would be upgraded to any clones they want.
 I like it 
  May 10, 2010
That comic is unique, original and great! definite 5/5! But why use stormie helmets???
 I made it 
  May 8, 2010
Quoting KAJ pro AWSOME! Very nice intro, I really like bearona, (hope I spelled that right) and your fig...How did you get the visors onto the stormtrooper helmet? 100/5!
I took a small knife and made it good enough to fit the vizors into it. And thanks for your comments everyone! I'll have my next comic on May 21st because on May 16th I'm gonna be working on it.
 I like it 
  May 8, 2010
AWSOME! Very nice intro, I really like bearona, (hope I spelled that right) and your fig...How did you get the visors onto the stormtrooper helmet? 100/5!
 I like it 
  May 7, 2010
i didnt know i was in this and....i "sting" was born way before the battle of geonosis even before the galaxy knew about the clone army but that dosent matter.nice comic!
 I like it 
  May 7, 2010
i like the main pic that is good!! and the idea of the comic is excellent i think i might make 1.....
 
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