Previously: After surviving the crash, Jake and Smith are forced to fight for their lives against the Experiment. The Experiment was defeated using an old booby trap, but at a cost.
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February 2, 2012 |
Quoting Iceman .
The album cover or whatever for the music thing. Not sure why but it just looks really creepy.
It's a screenshot of the movie "9", which is what the song is from. Great movie, you should totally check it out. |
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The album cover or whatever for the music thing. Not sure why but it just looks really creepy. |
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January 31, 2012 |
Quoting Iceman .
Pretty good but HOLY SHNIKEY, THE PICTURE OF THE MUSIC THING SCARED THE SNOT OUTTA ME! What do you mean?
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January 31, 2012 |
Pretty good but HOLY SHNIKEY, THE PICTURE OF THE MUSIC THING SCARED THE SNOT OUTTA ME! |
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June 4, 2010 |
sad,epic,but yet it's so FREAKIN' AWESOME! Another episode well done, friend. 5 thumbs up.
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June 3, 2010 |
lol called it! this just gets better and better, but something will happen to refuge! hence the name, or their wont really be a refuge, but that would be kinda lame, but meh, what do i know? |
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June 3, 2010 |
Very nice. looks good and makes it seems like Jake will be more driven now. keep it up. |
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June 3, 2010 |
Great. But The Refuge.
Somehow I think there is No Refuge. |
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June 2, 2010 |
i've been silent up until now pretty much, but i really like your series:) the scenes are good, and the sets, and pretty much everything. |
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And hopefully we won't see characters reviving so often like in Mythada :) |
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June 2, 2010 |
Quoting zach mills
haha, i swear this is like the 4th time you have used the line line "and with his last breath his body went limp." Mmm... no, I dont think so. This is the first time Ive had a dramatic death scene in this series. I may have used the line once in the Mythada series, but thats it.
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June 2, 2010 |
i cant wait till 24.hey,i just thought of something bizzare.what if the experiment is kira.it would make sense...btw,i made some comments on some other parts.just to let ya know. |
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June 2, 2010 |
haha, i swear this is like the 4th time you have used the line line "and with his last breath his body went limp." |
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June 2, 2010 |
Wow. Count Dook- err... I mean "Smith" died. Extremely creepy how we both killed off a character in both our series a person named "Smith". I'm looking forward to where the series goes from here. I have a feeling that the experiment is not dead... |
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June 2, 2010 |
I look forward to seeing what happens! I hope you have Smith come back in to the story later. The music went along with this part well! |
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June 1, 2010 |
Oh, there're a lot of big stories with religious touches. I thought, Smith would die somewhere but hoped that he would do more to the story before. Sad, he was an interesting character or better said, liked the Lincoln-style. |
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June 1, 2010 |
Great!I like Smith talking about God, it makes the story seem realistic |
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June 1, 2010 |
Great!I like Smith talking about God, it makes the story seem realistic |
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June 1, 2010 |
Quoting Darth Vader#
Nice part. Poor Smith. And, I''m glad to see another reference to God. XD Ya, it seems like not a lot of people have the guts to put religious references into stories anymore. Im trying to break that trend.
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June 1, 2010 |
Nice part. Poor Smith. And, I''m glad to see another reference to God. XD |
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June 1, 2010 |
Aww... Poor Smith. Nice music. |
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June 1, 2010 |
Aww... Poor Smith. Nice music. |
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June 1, 2010 |
Sad. Nicely written. |
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June 1, 2010 |
*Sniffs* Look what you made me do, I'm Sad that Smith died. |
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