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No Refuge: Part 23- Farewell
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Previously: After surviving the crash, Jake and Smith are forced to fight for their lives against the Experiment. The Experiment was defeated using an old booby trap, but at a cost.
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Jake ran to Smiths side.

He rolled him over and propped him against the wall.

Smith: "Jake..."

Jake: "Smith! Stay with me. We need to-"

Smith: "No Jake... You need to remember what I've taught you. You-"

Jake: "What? No!"

"Stay there. I might be able to-"

Smith stopped Jake.
Smith: "Jake. You need to listen to me." There is a settlement. They call it The Refuge."

"You need to continue on. Find The Refuge, and you'll find the Resistance. You must help them restore balance to this broken world."

Jakes eyes began to water.
Jake: "But I... You can't..."

Smith grabbed Jakes hand.
Smith: "It's alright, Jake. We all have to return to Him sometime. I've done my part in this world... It's time for me to go."

With that last breath, Smith's body went limp.

Jake fell to the ground next to his friend, tears in his eyes.

Jake stood up, Smith's words echoing in his head.
"Restore balance to this broken world."




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  February 2, 2012
Quoting Iceman . The album cover or whatever for the music thing. Not sure why but it just looks really creepy.
It's a screenshot of the movie "9", which is what the song is from. Great movie, you should totally check it out.
  February 2, 2012
The album cover or whatever for the music thing. Not sure why but it just looks really creepy.
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  January 31, 2012
Quoting Iceman . Pretty good but HOLY SHNIKEY, THE PICTURE OF THE MUSIC THING SCARED THE SNOT OUTTA ME!
What do you mean?
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  January 31, 2012
Pretty good but HOLY SHNIKEY, THE PICTURE OF THE MUSIC THING SCARED THE SNOT OUTTA ME!
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  June 4, 2010
sad,epic,but yet it's so FREAKIN' AWESOME! Another episode well done, friend. 5 thumbs up.
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  June 3, 2010
lol called it! this just gets better and better, but something will happen to refuge! hence the name, or their wont really be a refuge, but that would be kinda lame, but meh, what do i know?
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  June 3, 2010
Very nice. looks good and makes it seems like Jake will be more driven now. keep it up.
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  June 3, 2010
Great. But The Refuge. Somehow I think there is No Refuge.
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  June 2, 2010
i've been silent up until now pretty much, but i really like your series:) the scenes are good, and the sets, and pretty much everything.
  June 2, 2010
And hopefully we won't see characters reviving so often like in Mythada :)
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  June 2, 2010
Quoting zach mills haha, i swear this is like the 4th time you have used the line line "and with his last breath his body went limp."
Mmm... no, I dont think so. This is the first time Ive had a dramatic death scene in this series. I may have used the line once in the Mythada series, but thats it.
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  June 2, 2010
i cant wait till 24.hey,i just thought of something bizzare.what if the experiment is kira.it would make sense...btw,i made some comments on some other parts.just to let ya know.
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  June 2, 2010
haha, i swear this is like the 4th time you have used the line line "and with his last breath his body went limp."
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  June 2, 2010
Wow. Count Dook- err... I mean "Smith" died. Extremely creepy how we both killed off a character in both our series a person named "Smith". I'm looking forward to where the series goes from here. I have a feeling that the experiment is not dead...
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  June 2, 2010
I look forward to seeing what happens! I hope you have Smith come back in to the story later. The music went along with this part well!
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  June 1, 2010
Oh, there're a lot of big stories with religious touches. I thought, Smith would die somewhere but hoped that he would do more to the story before. Sad, he was an interesting character or better said, liked the Lincoln-style.
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  June 1, 2010
Great!I like Smith talking about God, it makes the story seem realistic
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  June 1, 2010
Great!I like Smith talking about God, it makes the story seem realistic
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  June 1, 2010
Quoting Darth Vader# Nice part. Poor Smith. And, I''m glad to see another reference to God. XD
Ya, it seems like not a lot of people have the guts to put religious references into stories anymore. Im trying to break that trend.
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  June 1, 2010
Nice part. Poor Smith. And, I''m glad to see another reference to God. XD
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  June 1, 2010
Aww... Poor Smith. Nice music.
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  June 1, 2010
Aww... Poor Smith. Nice music.
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  June 1, 2010
Sad. Nicely written.
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  June 1, 2010
*Sniffs* Look what you made me do, I'm Sad that Smith died.
 
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