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No Refuge: Part 28- Treason
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Previously: A lone pilot watched The Prophet's meeting, and went on to sabotage the vehicles in the courtyard of the base.
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Two Raven Pilots entered the courtyard.

"Hey! What do you think you're doing?"

The saboteur ran at the man...

and shoved the wrench into his stomach.

The other pilot got on the intercom.
"We have a situation in the courtyard. I repeat: We have- Agh!"

The Raven pilot fell against the console.

Just then, the door to the building slid open.

A group of soldiers and pilots came running out.



They began shooting at the pilot...

who had taken cover behind some crates.

Two soldiers tried running around the crates...

but were immediately shot down.



The pilot got up and started running, shooting two more soldiers while doing so.



The pilot then slide under the wing of the Eagle fighter...

ran along the wall...

and shot the remaining soldier.

The man fell over in pain.

The pilot ran toward the Sparrow scout fighter, leaving the gun behind.



One remaining man ran toward the turret.

The Sparrow flew into the air.

The man fired the turret at the fleeing vehicle...

hitting one of the thrusters.

The Sparrow began to smoke and fall out of the sky.


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Comments

  June 17, 2010
hey nuf, this is just a responce to your comment you left on the prolouge. yea, your right. i did rush the spelling allot. But i do have a reason about the very little info. That reason is that the soldiers are going to find it all out latter in the comic. this first episode is meant to leave a massive cliff hanger, something that will make you come back and read more. if you do you all of your questions will be answered.
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  June 16, 2010
Quoting Christian Schlichting If this is confusing so much people i begin to understand why only a handful on earth can understand LOST :) I'm not confused yet, ther're just some open questions left. Nice chapter by the way. Good idea not to start the season with Jake directly.
Ya, there are going to be open questions pretty much through the whole story. Its just how I roll :)
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  June 16, 2010
If this is confusing so much people i begin to understand why only a handful on earth can understand LOST :) I'm not confused yet, ther're just some open questions left. Nice chapter by the way. Good idea not to start the season with Jake directly.
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  June 16, 2010
Quoting michael wimer his wife, girlfriend was taken by the soldiers so maybe the prophet is his girlfriend, am i right becuase this is starting to confuse me so much going on and so little brian processing so many possibilities were just going to have to see how it all turns out and are you doing a season 4?
Wait, is the story itself confusing you? Or just the mystery of what happened to some characters and who the Prophet is? And yes, there will be a Season Four. Its gonna be epic :P
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  June 16, 2010
his wife, girlfriend was taken by the soldiers so maybe the prophet is his girlfriend, am i right becuase this is starting to confuse me so much going on and so little brian processing so many possibilities were just going to have to see how it all turns out and are you doing a season 4?
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  June 16, 2010
Cool. Nice action. I like the turrent and the smaller fighter plane.
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  June 16, 2010
Quoting Destiny of darkness (liam ross) great work on season 3 so far. and i have a therie, the pilot is not jake! how could it be when at the end of season 2 jake fainted? what is probibly going to happen is that the pilot is going to the refuge as well and will find jake dead (kind of) and take him to the refuge. if im kind of right please let me know. moving on, please please please with a huge cherri on top join the group 2014, i could really use your help with the comic im making, here is the link. http://www.mocpages.com/group.php/12190 and ill send you and invite so if you dont want to join the group just decline the invite so you dont need to be all like, " i dont want to join you group" i could really use your help. :)
Hmm... No,youre not right. Sorry. And youve tried inviting me to your group like three times already. Until I see some mocs in there, I wont join. Sorry.
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  June 16, 2010
Hey, Nufalak. I want to make a Post-apoc contest in October. I want you to judge it. Are you Ok with that?
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  June 16, 2010
great work on season 3 so far. and i have a therie, the pilot is not jake! how could it be when at the end of season 2 jake fainted? what is probibly going to happen is that the pilot is going to the refuge as well and will find jake dead (kind of) and take him to the refuge. if im kind of right please let me know. moving on, please please please with a huge cherri on top join the group 2014, i could really use your help with the comic im making, here is the link. http://www.mocpages.com/group.php/12190 and ill send you and invite so if you dont want to join the group just decline the invite so you dont need to be all like, " i dont want to join you group" i could really use your help. :)
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  June 15, 2010
I like the look of what you have here -- great action. If I may, I'd like to suggest that you don't need to describe the obvious (i.e. "He hid behind a crate.") and focus more on letting your dialogue work harder for you. Again, as mentioned earlier, your builds and action are great; you have a good story going here too, so let those great images do the heavy lifting whenever possible. Keep at it!
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  June 15, 2010
Nice action! I like the turret! I can't wait to see what happens!
  June 15, 2010
Awesome action! =)
 
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