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Jallmanaka, toa of fire
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toa of fire, my brother
About this creation
(layout from Skorp TS)
Species: toa
Element: fire
Mask: Yel-xion, mask of teleportation
Tools/Weapons: tri-spear, flame sword
Powers and abilities: melts things, teleports, can control flame, resist very high levels of heat, channels rage into fire
Status: alive and recovering
Current Location: ?

Biography: as a matoran, Jallmanaka's mother came home one day with a mysterious toa. Jallmanaka had seen toa before, but this one truely inspired him. he spent his many days
with the toa. later, when the attack on the archives happened, he requested to come with, but the toa didd not let him. many ears later, the toa of fire was sent away on a mission, as well as his toa of the stars. Jallmanaka begged and begged, but
the would not let him come. before they left, the toa of fire patted him on the back, and then left. the next week was dull and boring, nothing but playing konoka ball with his friends, but that wasn't enough, he wanted to become a toa. after a few weeks, his wish came true. Jallmanaka was so exited, but when the rest of the toa came home, they came grieving with the bodies of the toas of water, fire, and air. then Jallmanaka realised that being a toa is not all fun. he then decided to have the toa of the stars teach him about justice. to this day, he has kept the picture of the 3 dead toa in his mind, reminding himself that justice might be done. however, the toa refused to ever name the thing that killed the 3 toa.










Comments

 I made it 
  June 21, 2010
Quoting MacLane Mars Not bad, my only advice is that you should try to experiment with poses. In these photos your MOC looked like he was falling over. And also try to stick with one shade of red, I saw you use red rahkshi feet and the now more popular dark red. Other than those complaints he's not bad overall.
thanks, I've been expirementing with poses, but usually off camera. if you ask me, he looks more like he wants to "trust fall" into the nobody behind him. as to the feet, I couldn't find any thers, I'll probably make a v. 2 after I get all my legos sorted. thanks for the feedback!
 I like it 
  June 20, 2010
Not bad, my only advice is that you should try to experiment with poses. In these photos your MOC looked like he was falling over. And also try to stick with one shade of red, I saw you use red rahkshi feet and the now more popular dark red. Other than those complaints he's not bad overall.
 
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