Heres my entry! Enjoy!
Note: It Was Disqualified over a link, soooooo.... It sucks 5 hours of my time wasted :'(
About this creation
Shane Go to bed! Shane: Just a sec!
I MEAN NOAWWW!
Shane:Wow this is wierd im asleep but awake at the same time!
Shane: Is that John snoring next door? hmmmm....
I wonder... Whoosh
Shane: Wow im in his dream? Must be dreaming about Screaming Eagles No. 10
Hmmmmm... whats this? a hand grenade, OOoooooo
Lt. John Harland: HOld this position!
Zzzzzzz Mr. Fredrickson? hmmmm...
Ive always wondered what Mr. Fred Dreams about
dangit theres bars!
Cool i can go through walls
Mr. Fred: Kill EM!
Shane: Hi there Mr. Fredrickson!
Mr. Fred: What how... Never mind, grab that machine gun and start shooting these zombies! Shane: OK Mr. Fred!
Shane: This is interesting, Bang bang bang bang!
I killed one Mr. Fred!
Mr. Fredrickson: AHHHhwhoaHWha? What the?
Shane: Snoring from Mr. Kelso's House, I dont even want to know what he dreams about!
Shane: Ive had enough fun tonight, im going back to bed.
Zzz...Knock! Knock! Knock! Shane: No i dont want to wake up, i wanna ride the pony!
Knock! Knock! Knock! Shane: No i dont want to wake up, i wanna ride the pony!
Hope there still there!
Hello? oh crap...
John: Dude seriously i was thinking of what to do for No. 10 and you just completely ruined it! stay out of my dreams!
Mr. Fred: Hey i was preparing for the Zombie Apocalypse and you just totally ruined it! Grrrr...
Mark Kelso: Hey Guys, have you seen my....
I could point you to a ton of rules, comments and advices each answering your question, but seen as you ignored them before I can't see the point.
For the sake of peace, though, I'll tell you 2 things: 1- yes, editing your entry AFTER it's been judged changes nothing 2- even if it did, you still didn't put an active link, which is a basic requirement to qualify for the next round.
Your MOC Olympics experience is over for this year. Nothing I can do about it, these are the rules and as far as I'm concerned they are the same for everyone.
Don't be a stranger though, there's still going to be plenty of fun for you and the others :)