Quoting Silver Fox
'tis good. However your sig is always the leader of an army. In all your comics. No offence, but it seems a bit.... Unoriginal. Next time maybe start with him joining an army and working his way up through the ranks. E.g. In my comics my sig will be a pilot in training. He will never become a lord, general, elite commander and you get the picture. Just a thought.
Yeah. I hadn't really noticed but in this particular one I need to be the leader because it is my Empire.