Jerico Chapter I, Less than Corgal: A LEGO® creation by Eric 'Hawk' Mickle : MOCpages.com

Jerico Chapter I, Less than Corgal

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Chapter I of my Sci-fi series Jericho.

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Give me his file.
Yes sir.
Hmm 327 we have had problems with him in the past. First the downed ship and now the complete abandonment of this organization.
Sir Fargus is here to see you.
Good send him in.
My lord I-
Quit with the formalities you have a job.
Yes sir.
You have a good record. Destroying the Guild that was pretty impressive.
They didn't suspect a thing sir.
Your new job is simple, find and capture the cyborg 327.
It will be easy sir.
Don't get overconfident this one knows how to evade. And remember... don't underestimate his strength. Now get out of my sight.
Yes sir.

//4 days later//

/Fatius is eagerly awaiting the return of his hit-man/

LOL- My lord, Fargus has returned.
Fatius- Very good send him in we must interrogate 327 at once.

Fargus- Lord Katashus I have found him.

Fatius- Take those shackles of they are unneccesary for this discussion.
Fargus- Sorry sir.

Fatius- Follow me 327, we shall have a drink while we talk.

Fatius- 327 do you see what happens to those who disobey.
327 (Wolf)- Yes.

Fatius- Please 327 sit down you must be tired.
Wolf- Uh... sure.
Fatius- LOL fetch us some drinks.

Fatius- Im sure you know that disobedience is unnacceptable? Or am I mistaken.
Wolf- I beleive you are mistaken... sir.

Fatius- Now fetch 327 a glass. We don't want to be rude to our guest.
Wolf- Sure send this guy to chase after me and say I am your guess that makes perfect sense.

Fatius- But surely you dont think your behavior was acceptable?

Wolf- Maybe.

Fatius- Whether you think you did wrong or not you shall still be punished.

Wolf- No I was thinking of being set free.
Fatius- Now, now thats not gonna happen.

Wolf- Now your mistaken.

Fargus- What the?!?!

Fargus- Yaaah!

Fatius- Gaurds stop him!

Fatius- Auch!

Wolf- Oh no you dont.

Wolf- Wait... manicans can move.

Fatius- Oh my chest.

LOL- Sir your not dead, but how it was point blank?
Fatius- Whenever a prisoner comes I wear a bullet-proof vest.

Fatius- (Sigh) Its gonna take hours to clean this up. Well get to it LOL.
LOL- Ugh.

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Commander Gree

March 17, 2011

Sweet! Great job!

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Wylde Card

October 26, 2010

Very cool setting for the story. Love the glass floor! Good work!

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Nicks Bricks

October 23, 2010

Wow, great story, and awesome builds, keep up the great builds~Nick

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Eric Mickle

October 12, 2010

Quoting Max Kester (formaly Blue Shadow) Sorry i didn;t notice this before, but its great! I like the moves and stuff. Also for my halo comics can i use that "mission log" kind of thing, like you did: //4 Days Later// thats cool can i use it?

Oh ya sure.

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Max Kester (formaly Blue Shadow)

October 12, 2010

Sorry i didn;t notice this before, but its great! I like the moves and stuff. Also for my halo comics can i use that "mission log" kind of thing, like you did: //4 Days Later// thats cool can i use it?

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MR. LEGO

September 29, 2010

I really like this!

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A. A. (A.K.A Noname)

September 27, 2010

Very mysterious and interesting. I'll look at the other comics later today. Speech bubbles would be great.

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George G.

September 27, 2010

The shark pit is the best!

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T.K .

September 25, 2010

Great comic! I might have a go at a coic myself. Could you comment on my latest moc. Thanks.

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Eric Mickle

September 13, 2010

Quoting Mister Bones Some nice set design, the action scenes could be a bit more refined, but the storyline is pretty good. So where does he go from here? A series where they hunt him down and he dispatches all the would be assiassins?

Its a story about the downfall of Fatius, But there are many consperasies and plots that the main character will have to figure out. Plus it wont all be centered around Wolf's activities many Characters have yet to be introduced.

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Mister Bones

September 13, 2010

Some nice set design, the action scenes could be a bit more refined, but the storyline is pretty good. So where does he go from here? A series where they hunt him down and he dispatches all the would be assiassins?

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Captain Matthew Vos

September 12, 2010

when is episode 2 coming out?I havent asked in a while.

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bluefett 305

September 4, 2010

this is great.

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Ced The Clever

August 31, 2010

Oh! The old cup in the face trick! The Shark and skeleton in the floor is a nice detail, perfect for any evil genius' lair. You have my attention, lets see where you can take it. Thanks.