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Empire of Darkness: Chapter 16
Empire of Darkness:Chapter 14- Jedi Rescue.
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EMPIRE OF DARKNESS: CHAPTER 16
The Jedi Knights Ricky Seneria and Rob Rotgers have raced to the rugged, rocky island filled planet of Bestine to save three other Jedi from an almost certain doom at the hands of the maniacal, thoroughly evil Darth Kalos…


“We’re here,” says Ricky as he and Rob pull up in a landspeeder.


After walking to a door, Ricky knocks on it loudly.


The three Jedi knights on the other side sense the presence of the light side of the Force and allow th two other Jedi to enter.


“What is it that you require, fellow Jedi?” asks the green-skinned alien.
“The Empire knows of your whereabouts. We have arrived mere minutes before them, you must leave this place,” answers Ricky in a macabre tone.
“Well, we knew this was coming. Let’s go, now,” says the orange-haired Jedi.


On the other side of the door, a blast from the Imperials destroys a landspeeder.


Hearing the explosion outside, Ricky urgently says, “Quick, there is no time to waste. They’re coming, now!”


“We have speeders at the other side of the cliff. We knew this would happen eventually.”
“I’ll stay here,” says Rob.
“That’s suicide Rob!” yells Ricky.
“I’ll make sure they don’t get to you. I’ll catch up at the landing zone.”
Seeing Rob’s decision is made, Ricky agrees.


The four walk out onto the balcony and prepare to jump off to the cliff.


Rob ignites his lightsaber, ready for the forces of the Empire.


After going to the other side of the balcony, the four prepare to scale down the cliff.
“I never caught your names,” says Ricky.
The green-skinned Jedi says, “I am Kilij Harun.” He then points to the woman, saying, “this is Tamar Ashot,” and finally the orange-haired Jedi introduces himself as Callos Benik.
“Well I’m Ricky Seneria, it’s nice to finally know who you are.”


They begin to scale down the cliff.


They reach the bottom of the cliff, and Ricky says, “I’ll wait for Rob.”


“No, we need to go now,” says Kilij.
“No, he can stay Kilij. It is his choice,” says Callos. “We need to ready the speeder anyway, so we can wait.”



Kilij and Tomar jump into the speeder as *orange and Ricky ready it.


After the Stormtroopers arrive, they stand aside as Darth Kalos strides by them.


He strides in and sees the man who almost cost him his life, and put him in the prosthetic suit he must wear, much like his mentor Darth Vader before him.
Igniting his lightsaber, Kalos says: "Your final hour is at hand, Jedi. A dignified death is above the likes of you."


Kalos jumps in the air, saying, “You Jedi have polluted this galaxy enough with your archaic and blind ways! There is only one true path, and I have found it. With the Empire at my side, your evil will fall!”
“Evil? Kalos, it’s the Empire that is evil! Your true path is the false one! They’re manipulating you!” replies Rob.


Kalos slices Rob’s entire arm off as he falls to the ground.
“NO! You lie Jedi! And now you will pay the price for your treachery!”


Kalos throws the noble Jedi across the room with a wicked blast of the Force.


He then electrocutes the Rob with the energies of the Dark Side of the Force.


After electrocuting him, Kalos lifts Rob into the air and starts to pull apart his body with the Force.
“Don’t listen… to the lies of the emp… ire…,” Rob says feebly as his life comes to a close.
“The only lie here is you,” Kalos stated.


Rob’s torn body falls to the floor, as Kalos watches his blood spill out.
“It is finished,” says Kalos darkly, a hint of satisfaction in his voice.
Kalos presses a button on his suit and a comlink comes on. He asks Colonel Ralan and Commander Spectre to come in.


Colonel Ralan and Commander Spectre walk in.
“Hurry Commander, you might be able to shoot the Jedi as you escape!”


Spectre rushes to the balcony and takes a shot at the Jedi.


The shot misses the Jedi as Ricky watches.


Knowing that Rob is dead, Ricky yells, “We need to go, now!”


As they drive away, he takes one last look at the final resting place of his friend.


Kalos walks out to Spectre on the balcony.
“Sir, I was unable to hit them, but we can track them. I got a tiny tracker on them, but its range is very short. We’ll need to go, now.”
“Good work Spectre.”


Kalos walks back in and consults with Colonel Ralan. “We can follow the Jedi. Ready your troops and we must leave now.


Thrace, the man with the heavy cannon says to Davis, “are you sure they’ll be here on time?”
“Ricky’s never late. I trust him entirely. Don’t worry Thrace, he’ll be here,” replies Davis.


Hearing the sound of the speeder, Davis gets up, saying, “See, here he is right now. I told you to not worry.”


Ricky and the other Jedi pull up in the speeders.


They jump out and run towards the other rebels.


“Quick! Stormtroopers, they’re coming!” yells Ricky.


Davis sighs and says, “See what I mean? Troops get in defensive positions.”


The four Jedi arrive and Ricky instructs a trooper to take them into the ship.


The stormtroopers arrive, blasters blazing at the rebels.


The battle begins, both sides taking merciless shots at the other.


Kalos, Colonel Ralan, and Commander Spectre arrive.


Ricky and Kalos jump at each other in the middle of the battlefield.
“Now killing you will be as easy as the other!” says Kalos in a taunting way.


Ricky simply pushes Kalos away with the Force and continues on to the troops.


Blocking a few shots, Ricky prepares his attack on them.


He jumps to them, slicing one on his way.


He then pushes one behind him as he continues to Colonel Ralan.


He throws the blaster out of the Colonel’s hands with the Force.


Then Ricky throws the Colonel himself away.


Spectre then shoots Ricky with a stun blast.

After Ricky gets up, Spectre is gone and he walks to the rebels.


After Ricky gets up, Spectre is gone and he walks to the rebels.
“What happened?” he asks.
“Spectre shot you with a stun blast and then got away on the speeder bike.”
“We should go now, before more Imperials show up.”


Hours later, Spectre arrives to help Kalos and Colonel Ralan.


He then wakes Kalos and helps him up, as another trooper does the same.


“We need to get to the ship. We’ll catch that rebel scum!” says Kalos.

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And thus ends Empire of Darkness: Chapter 16. Hope you enjoyed it, and please leave a comment or rate it, it takes a lot of time and effort to make these. Sorry I didn't put any music on it, I was lazy... and also for the wait.



Comments

Rocky W.
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Admiral Varkov
  January 30, 2012
Great Comic! Nice Job!
 I like it 
  October 19, 2010
Nice battle!But are you going to continue this?
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  September 8, 2010
Really nice work Rocky, this is a really good comic! I really like the battle scene at the end, especially the barbed wire technique that you picked up on.
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  August 31, 2010
Awesome story!I've been following it for a really long time and I think its great!
 
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