Finally the next chapter in my exiting new Sci-Fi series.
About this creation
In the skies above Jericho.
Pilot- ETA to Saxurt tower is thirty minutes.
Mathew Voss- Aw he said that ten minutes ago.
Crew Chief- Relax, we are just taking measures to avoid the Fatius International spire.
Bounty Hunter 2- Why?
Crew Chief- Trigger-happy idiots will shoot down any ship that gets close.
Bounty Hunter- Well seeing we have some time: what is the story with your arm?
Crew Chief- That is a long story, but we do have time.
Bounty Hunter- Please enlighten us.
Matthew Voss- *yawns*
Crew Chief- I was at the bar called ‘the Red Death.’ Very rowdy place with some real dangerous people, I have even seen gang leaders there.
Mathew Voss- Get on with it!
Crew Chief- Okay just calm down, I told you it would be a long story. So I went in for a ‘Triple Throat Sore,’ heavy drink, and I stumble over to this guy. Now this guy wasn’t your average ruffy, he was a Cyborg I could see the serial number on his neck 117…
…so I stumble over and accidentally spill my drink all over him, next thing I know he is up and on me like a cop. Then guess what happens… *pauses for dramatic effect*
…then pop he pulled my arm clean off. Then dazed on the floor Ihear a gunshot and there is another Cyborg there, but this one was called 327. They fought but before I could make out a victim I passed out.
Bounty Hunter 2- Is that it?
Crew Chief- Pretty much, I awoke in a hospital with this prosthetic.
Matthew Voss- Sucks for you.
Bounty Hunter- It would suck for you too.
AI- Missle lock
Crew Chief- Stanson!
Pillot- I heard! All hands prepare for evasive maneuvers!
Crew Chief- Where did it come from we aren’t even close to the tower.
Pilot- Hell if I know but we aren’t going down today. Hold on!
Missle hits the tail causing an explosion that fails most of the ships systems.
Crew Chief- Curse the company! We only have one parachute.
Mathew Voss- That’s just great.
Pilot- Impact with the Sonviet Center in 70 seconds!
Crew Chief- Take it, protocol dictates that in the event of a crash only one bounty hunter can be saved.
Bounty Hunter- Wait! We can get out of this.
Pilot- Course corrected Im heading for the slums.
Crew Chief- The slums! No way am I going down there again!
AI- Decompression alert.
AAAAAHHHH!
Pilot- Crash in thirty I suggest you strap in!
Ship shudders and crashes into the slum.
To be continued…
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May 7, 2011 |
Quoting Yapdap "Cyber-Tiger" The Unggoy
Whens the next one coming?
A while unfortunately. I am thinking of doing a four part mini-series this summer. |
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May 7, 2011 |
Whens the next one coming? |
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April 26, 2011 |
Great job man!!!!! :) |
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March 17, 2011 |
I LIKE it! |
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Jarod Waltz October 29, 2010 |
You should realy add my sig fig, then it won't just be ausome it will be EPIC!
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October 29, 2010 |
I got a camera so expect more MOCS. |
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October 26, 2010 |
Very cool story! I liked the decompression effect! The dropship was pretty cool too. Good job! |
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October 25, 2010 |
Quoting Hellion Reaper
is it going to be on tonight?
Go to the group to find your answer. |
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October 25, 2010 |
is it going to be on tonight? |
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October 25, 2010 |
Hmmmmm intresting words for describing slums. |
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October 24, 2010 |
Quoting Hellion Reaper
I take it its going to be posted tomarrow?the other episode that is.
Yes, it will show how truly wonderous the slums are. The crew cheif foreshadowed how bad they are. |
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October 24, 2010 |
I take it its going to be posted tomarrow?the other episode that is. |
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October 24, 2010 |
lol
get on with it! |
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October 24, 2010 |
Quoting Sebeus I
Very nice, you really should try some photoshopping, the shot with the missile following the craft could make an awesome image, really, try it
Im downlaoding some of that software later today so that the action scenes can be the best quality. |
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October 24, 2010 |
Very nice, you really should try some photoshopping, the shot with the missile following the craft could make an awesome image, really, try it |
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October 24, 2010 |
Quoting Green Man
Make the halo refrences less obvious next time. 4/5! ~Stay green my friends
There is only one painfully obvious one. |
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October 24, 2010 |
Interesting story :) |
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October 24, 2010 |
Make the halo refrences less obvious next time. 4/5! ~Stay green my friends |
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October 24, 2010 |
Quoting Matthew "Silencer" Voss
When will that be out?
Hopefully today. By today I mean 10/24/2010 or tomarrow. |
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October 24, 2010 |
When will that be out? |
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October 24, 2010 |
Quoting Matthew "Silencer" Voss
Do I die!?
Wait for part 2. |
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October 24, 2010 |
Do I die!? |
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Nicks Bricks October 23, 2010 |
Wow, this is coming along really nice, i love the ship you've built, this has got to be your best build yet...i think. There all great who am i kidding~Nick |
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October 23, 2010 |
Quoting Matthew "Silencer" Voss
FINALLY ITS HERE!!!!Nice comic. does the crew chief die?
Probably, he wouldnt make it through the slums a second time if he survived the fall. Youll see what I am talking about later. |
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October 23, 2010 |
FINALLY ITS HERE!!!!Nice comic. does the crew chief die? |
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October 23, 2010 |
FINALLY ITS HERE!!!!Nice comic. does the crew chief die? |
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October 23, 2010 |
Quoting Benji Man
327!?!?!? ZOMG is that MY Spartan!?!?!
Its actually Wolf. |
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October 23, 2010 |
327!?!?!? ZOMG is that MY Spartan!?!?! |
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October 23, 2010 |
Nice, cliff hanging episode! Nice job. Awesome plane design too. |
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