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This is my Entry for round 2 of the King of the Hill contest. As I had a VERY little amount of time to do it, (I was busy with school, etc) it's not my BEST best.... but I hope you like it, anyway.
About this creation

Ok, so. This is my Entry for the King of the Hill contest entry.


Something you should probably read:

I spent all day Saterday (today, in other words) making it, editing it, photoshopping it, etc. Due to my VERY limited time, it's not the absolute greatest I could do.. :( but I'll definitely do beter in the next round, if I pass.

So. Also.

The 'Melting/bending metal' effect was not created by me. It was created by Sebeus I Thanks!


The effects processor/machine, whatever you want to call it that I used is a demo version. (The real, full version is like 500 bucks, so I can't POSSIBLY afford it.) And this demo has the gull to slobber it's name all over the image... so whatever words you come across in the various effected images in this entry, just... ignore. Sorry, there is nothing I can do about that... D':




So...




...you're driving your new Dodge Viper...




...speeding down the road, when all of a sudden...




...you see a sign.




"Uh-huh..." you say, and just continue driving.




*speeding car noises* Then, all of a sudden...




"Ahhhhh!"




"What the..."




You slam on the breaks...




*skidding car noises*




*more skidding car noises*




*even more skidding car noises*




*last couple of skidding car noises*




*...*




You grind to a halt.




Slowly...




Slowly...




Slowly...




Finally, you stop.




"What the heck...?" You throw you're hands over your eyes, to shield yourself from the blinding light.




Dun dun! You look, and see...
"What," you say. "What is a man doing in front of a light?"




You decide to check it out, so...




...you kick off the roof (since there really is no other way to get of the Viper)...




...and, none too gracefully...




...you...




...plop out.




You get up.






Hey!




What the....? Watch it!




You stand up.




Finally...




You start walking over...




*walking noises*




*more walking noises* NO! I'm not going to just sit here all day and write 'footstep,' footstep.' Hmmf.




You try climbing down the cliff, and...




...fail. Poor you...




You get up...




...again...




...you can do it...




...come on. Just stand up now.




Ah. there we go.




You continue walking over over, with only two fails-- uh, mishaps.




1) ^^




2) ^^




Finally, you're face-to face with him. Well, actually face to feet, but, anyway..




His voice rings out. "Hey...




...you didn't crash!"




You stare at him, petrified. "W-was I s-su-p-p-posed to-oo? You manage to stutter.




"Well..." he trails off.




"Oh..." You start.




"...and..."




"...who ARE you? And why the HECK are you shining? And why are all these cars crashed around here?




"What?" *his jaw drops*




"You don't know who I am?"




*slams his forehead with the palm of his hand*
*palm-of-hand-slamming-into-forehead noises*




He starts to explain. "I... am..."




"...Slick Rhoads!!"




Huh? You stare at him. Subconsciously, you think: oh, so THAT was what the sign warned me about... You sigh, inwardly, while outwardly you appear petrified.




Unperturbed, he continues. "And I am shining because of my AWESOMENESS!! See?"




Oh, boy. He starts singing. "I've been working on the railroad..."




"...just to pass the time a-way..."




"YEAH!"




Again, huh? You just stare at him, unable to comprehend what the HECK he is doing...




Finally, you come to a conclusion. With a snug smile on your face, you think to yourself: Ah, this guy is a loon.




You shrug your shoulders.




...




... (Sorry about the pic... I don't have a clue why it became like this.... :P)




You turn away...




...




...and...




...front flip over the puddle/ruined part of the road.




Wheee!




That's my boy! Er... girl.




Oh, yeah. You can really flip to make a guy proud.




Ooh, the...




...smoothest landing planetside!




Your flip was beautifully graceful, compared to your entry of the car...




Oy... :P


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I can't look... *throws hands over eyes*




*peeks through fingers*




There you go. Back in your seat.




You drive backwards...




...oblivious to the hood still left on your hood. Oops...




You, uh... drive...? back onto the road...




...yup...




...and hightail it outta' there!




All you see are your rear lights...




Shining dude Er... I meant 'Slick Roads': "Aww.... all my fans are gone!" Yeah. ppffft! As if you ever had any....





THE END!!


So, that was it. I hope you enjoyed it, got a laugh or three out of it... Next time (if there is one) I will start early, and really take some time on it.

So... yeah.

Please tell me whutcha' think. :D



Comments

 I like it 
  November 26, 2010
I am sorry I didn't judge this. Good build, and odd story. 19/20
 I made it 
  November 15, 2010
Quoting Nathan B Great work. I like the story.
Thanks. It was... er... improvisation... xD
 I like it 
  November 15, 2010
Great work. I like the story.
Athanasios Lazarou
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Espen Stålder
  November 14, 2010
Her name should be Grace, methinks. 18/20 since I love that car!
Athanasios Lazarou
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A. A. (AKA Noname)
  November 14, 2010
18 points, really odd story.
 I made it 
  November 13, 2010
Quoting magma guy Strong entry! It's going to be very hard to win. Good luck.
Thanks. You too!
 I like it 
  November 13, 2010
Strong entry! It's going to be very hard to win. Good luck.
 I like it 
  November 13, 2010
It's good but wierd...18.5 points!
 
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