R.E.D Zone-- part 1 Arival of the Fittest. : A LEGO® creation by Jonathan S. (aka Brick Star) : MOCpages.com

R.E.D Zone-- part 1 Arival of the Fittest.

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The drop ship came slowly t the ground and landed with a thud, As the engines powered down the troops looked out the small windows of the craft to see our surroundings. "It looks like an Apoc waist land" Lieutenant Matt P. Said with a chuckle. "You say that every time we land!" I scolded, "This is not a Apoc waist land, 4 clicks from here, gentlemen, is R.E.D Zone".

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Fort Legoredo

8:45 am

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Jon: Stay in the trucks men. I'm going to look around.

Scar: Jon said to stay in the humvee!

Ellis: I'M JUST LOOKING AROUND!! Jeez...

Kevin Smith: What do you see in there?

Tim: Nothing but ruins. Were are the monsters?

Soldier: General. -salutes-

Jon: At ease. Mind if I look around?

Soldier: The place is all yours, sir!

Scar: You get in the hummer before Jon sees you!

Ellis: Chill out! I get in soon enough!

Jon: Thats R.E.D Zone. -sigh- This will be like 2012 all over again... a slaughter.

Ellis: This place is falling apart! What a dump!

Jon: Everyone out of the hummer, double time! Time for a full briefing!

Jon: Wait... Were is Ellis!?!? That kid had better not be causing trouble!

Ellis: Why am I even here? I did not sign up for this. I signed up to be a hero! Not a rookie that gets killed on the first mission! No, I wont die, I will be the best of the team! I'll be the one who gets out alive! I will stay strong!

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Sounds like Ellis has some doubts about his team. Whats going to happen? What will Jon do to Ellis when he finds him? Find out, NEXT TIME!

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Timmy Kid

December 2, 2010

Idea: A mad explorer with one of those tall white helmets attacks Timmy, then Timmy jumps at the explorer and that roll down a hill, and when the explorer is about to slap Timmy, Timmy shoot him in the heart, and grabs the hat. And throughout the series, Timmy seems more joyful/happy/encouraged. And for an episode further in the future, the explorer comes as a zombie if he appears 3-5 episodes after, a skeleton if he appears 6-8 episodes after, a ghost if he appears 9-11 episodes after, or a haunted human if the explorer appears 12+ episodes after.

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Kevin .

December 2, 2010

uh you can just do Kevin for my name and can i be a sniper/sgt. too thanks just a few thingys and when you do my name you can just do kevin instead of sgt. kevin srry for so muchh