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The Rift Chronicles - Prologue
Well, here it is. The wait is over! I have yet to post Skorcol and Irohs, but they WILL be on the pages before episode 1.
About this creation



Kenaz: Hello traveler.
Matoran: Oh, I wasn't aware that people still traveled this path.
K: Relax. I'm alone. *starts playing guitar*

Matoran: My name is Boreal. I'm a chronicler, and I'm looking for the Temple of the Rift. Do you know where it is?
K: The Temple of the Rift, eh? I didn't know it had a temple..
Boreal: Excuse me?

K: Why do you want to go there?
B: As I said before, I'm a chronicler. I'm trying to collect myths for a book, The temple is surrounded by a great my-
K (yelling): WHAT?!?!?
B: *jumps*

K: I'm sorry. I got a bit worked up hearing about the Rift and a... myth..
B: What?
K: You said you were collecting myths for a book?
B: Er, yes.
K: Well, if it's myths you're looking for, the Rift is best left forgotten.
B: What do you mean?
K: Tell me about the "myth" that's supposed to be surrounding that place.
B: What? You're confusing me.
K: Just do it, please.

B (coughs): Ahem. The tale goes.. "Long ago, there were Nine Great Warriors, each a master of their own territory in space. Their leader, a Toa of Fire named Callan, was cursed in battle, and only a wisp of his fire, imbued with his spirit came back from the fight. The fire was sealed inside a stone slab made for containing such powers as Ice and Fire. The remaining Eight warriors, brought together by the Great Dimensional Rift, went on a valiant quest to-"
K: Stop there. The myth has the beginning right. Although Callan wasn't the leader.
B: What..?
K: I feel inclined to tell you, being I as a bard, and you as a chronicler, that the story of the Rift is not a myth. It is solid truth. I would know. My name is Kenaz.

B: WHAT?! YOU'RE KENAZ?! THE LEGENDARY HERO WHO FOUGHT AGAINST CORRUPTION ITSELF?!?!
K: That's me.
B: Oh my gosh!! I can't believe this! I've heard so much about you!!
K: Man, you're starting to sound like a Mom meeting her daughter's boyfriend for the first time.
B: This is amazing!! A real member of the Rift Heroes, right before my-
K: Would you like to hear how the story REALLY goes?
B: What?? Of course!!
K: OK. I hope you have a good memory, because I want you to tell this story to Matoran wherever you go, so people will know that what happened wasn't just a story. This is a tale of Heroic Bravery, Tragic Loss, and Epic battles.
This is how it began.





Comments

 I like it 
  January 30, 2011
Oh...my...gosh! This is an EPIC start to what looks to be a epic comic, I'm definiately gonna keep reading! :D Oh and I like the part- 'Man, you're starting to sound like a Mom meeting her daughter's boyfriend for the first time.' XD nice line buddy ;)
 I like it 
  January 21, 2011
Cool,I'm looking forward to see where this goes.
 I like it 
  January 1, 2011
This is pure epicness.
 I made it 
  December 23, 2010
Quoting Alpha AI Tel est la vie.
Que?
 I like it 
  December 23, 2010
Tel est la vie.
Owen Netzer , Bishop of the White Night
Toa Oblivious
  December 21, 2010
can i be a secret character that helps them on 1 of their missions/ part.
 I made it 
  December 21, 2010
Quoting Toa Oblivious Can I be a secret character that helps them on 1 of their missions/ part.
Heh.. Yeah.. You missed the sign up. Sorry, I can't include you in the story, plus I have absolutely 0 tan masks.
Owen Netzer , Bishop of the White Night
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Toa Oblivious
  December 20, 2010
can i b in it?
 I made it 
  December 20, 2010
Quoting Toa Oblivious Can I be in it?
Sorry, I already have all the team members already planned out, and the series has already begun.
 I made it 
  December 8, 2010
Quoting Skrall Razor Awesome story i guess
You guess?
 I like it 
  December 8, 2010
Awesome story i guess
Owen Netzer , Bishop of the White Night
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Peter Crasher the Powerlord
  December 7, 2010
Sweet episode of the Rift Chronicles. I like the part where Kenaz said "Wow. You're starting to sound like a mom meeting her daughter's boyfriend for the first time". That was really funny.
 I like it 
  December 7, 2010
Meh. You already have one robot. And besides, thaks to you, I have three faves! :D
 I made it 
  December 7, 2010
Quoting Gringat the Repugnant This looks brilliant so far. I'm also kinda glad Gringat isn't one of the lead characters - there's no way he's in control of his own sphere. In fact, none of my characters are.
Ha ha, that's kind of true. I was considering making D-7, but I decided against it.
 I like it 
  December 7, 2010
This looks brilliant so far. I'm also kinda glad Gringat isn't one of the lead characters - there's no way he's in control of his own sphere. In fact, none of my characters are.
 I like it 
  December 7, 2010
Great prologue. I agree with Crasher, that joke was funny =)
Owen Netzer , Bishop of the White Night
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L. Nguyen
  December 6, 2010
nice prologue cant wait for ep 1
Owen Netzer , Bishop of the White Night
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Chaos Master
  December 6, 2010
great start! i can't wait to see more. this is great!
Owen Netzer , Bishop of the White Night
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A.D Lord of Darkness
  December 6, 2010
That's mawesome!
Owen Netzer , Bishop of the White Night
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Ahollow Darkfiend
  December 6, 2010
Can't wait for episode 1
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  December 6, 2010
Tragic loss? Sounds ominous..
 I like it 
  December 6, 2010
Wow! That's awesome! But I'm not the leader? What's up with that? XD Totally kidding, cause this is AWESOME! :D :D :D
 I like it 
  December 6, 2010
Cool! Can't wait for the real series!
 
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