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Invasion: Prologue
Here we go! After over a month of working and procrastinating, I finally present the first installment of my sci-fi story! Bon appetit!
About this creation
A Random Thoughts Production

Of a Jeffrey Donlon story

Written by Jeffrey Donlon

In association with Random Thoughts Production Studios

Invasion


















































For those of you who are interested, here is the group associated with the Titanian Confederacy. Feel free to stop by and have a look round!

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Comments

Jeffrey Donlon
 I like it 
Paperweight .
  February 15, 2011
Wait, this is the beginning? I hope you make more episodes! This is great!
 I like it 
  January 6, 2011
Good story do far the speech bubbles are a little hard to read but it is a good story.
 I made it 
  January 3, 2011
Quoting Eric 'Hawk' Mickle Im a little confused on what is happening. And the speech bubbles could be bigger and less frequent. Other than that it looks good. >Eric
Quoting Caleb Cutlass-Crocodile Blanchet Some darn-fine dialogue throughout, very nice work! I would recommend perhaps using a font-size a bit larger, but that 'tis my only objection. Great work!
Yeah, the Prologue was more or less an experiment to see exactly how things would have to roll. Thanks for the input on the word bubbles. I have yet to start on the first actual episode, but the general plan of it is ready (major plus side: The first and second episodes take place in the exact same place, so I might be able to post them one after another. If I get my lazy behind in gear that is. . .).
 I like it 
  January 3, 2011
Some darn-fine dialogue throughout, very nice work! I would recommend perhaps using a font-size a bit larger, but that 'tis my only objection. Great work!
 I like it 
  December 21, 2010
Im a little confused on what is happening. And the speech bubbles could be bigger and less frequent. Other than that it looks good. >Eric
 I like it 
  December 21, 2010
Wow, you have a lotta good parts. Anyway, this seems very interesting
 I made it 
  December 21, 2010
Quoting Night Hawk _ Are you submitting anything to my contest? Just wondering.
I'm out of town at the moment, so I will be unable to add anything. Sorry that I didn't add anything. If I have time after I get back (tomorrow afternoon/early evening) I might be able to add something, otherwise count me out. Once again, apologies.
 I like it 
  December 21, 2010
Are you submitting anything to my contest? Just wondering.
 I made it 
  December 21, 2010
Quoting Night Hawk _ I like it but I'm a bit confused on whats going on though.
Well, the prologue actually occurs after the story, so the lieutenant will actually feature in the story again at some point. He meets Knife Team and fights alongside them (on Renegade's Peninsula). The events of the prologue happen on the planet Tiberius (the bad guys' homeworld). The Titanian Confederacy is retaliating for an attack launched on their main military base in the Helios system. The main story line will focus on the military operations on the planet Praetoria during the invasion (hence the name). Hopefully this sheds some light on the story. If you want more information, I can provide a forum in the group.
 I like it 
  December 21, 2010
I like it but I'm a bit confused on whats going on though.
 
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