CYOA-Season I-Episode 1: A LEGO® creation by Eric 'Hawk' Mickle : MOCpages.com

CYOA-Season I-Episode 1

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The first episode of CYOA is finally out! I apologise in advance for you members on the plane crash you won't be in this episode, but you will be in the socond. Well lets get this started!

About this creation

This is not in comic format.
The dialogue that corresponds to the picture can be found under it.

Old Neb- Ok, I have found Dankwater Drive, now where is 2100.

Old Neb- I better not be on the wrong side again.

Old Neb- Ok the note says twenty-one-zero-zero- right… here.

Intercom- Who are you?-What day is this?-What do you want?
Old Neb- What the?

Old Neb- Um it’s me, Old Neb. I got an invitation that said to come here for some get together thing…

(Stair light flashes on) (Door unlocks)

(Party music) (Muffled talking)

CK- Finally the last sheep is herded in.
Old Neb- So you are Creem Kili?
CK- That I am. Have a seat with the rest of the guests I have to go do something.

Old Neb- What’s up with your name?
CK- I can’t say.
Old Neb- Why-?
CK- Go.

Old Neb- Hey everyone.
Everyone- Hi.
Tom- Finally.

(Party activities start to fade out)

(Clinking chain) (Unnatural quietness)

Christian Collins- There’s something weird about this night, almost like something big is going to happen.

CK- Almost like someone is behind you.
Christian Collins- Almost.

Christian Collins- Why are we here Mickle.
Eric Mickle- I am not allowed to say, but-… wait how did you know it was me?

Christian Collins- Come on, those sunglasses are a dead give-away.
Eric Mickle- Right, sure.

Eric Mickle- Well anyway, it’s good to see you. (Shakes hands) So what have you been doing up here.

Christian Collins- I have been hearing a lot of noises in that mountain range. I’ve also heard-

Christian Collins- What the? Is that plane landing or crashing?
Eric Mickle- (thinking to himself) I guess it went off earlier than planned.

//To be continued//

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Matthew "Another one bites the dust"" Voss (R.I.P. Clay G. and Others)

May 31, 2012

Hey Man sorry about not being active, I couldnt get on for a while.

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Timmy Kid

June 28, 2011

Neat.

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ninja warrior 11 .

June 9, 2011

i want to be in one of your episodes. i want to be a black ninja in it if i can be in it.

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Adrian Taylor

April 1, 2011

A great start to a great future!

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Matt The Backward One

January 17, 2011

I'm already gripped in the story. That means its great! 5/5.

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cyberfrank 2010

January 16, 2011

i love stories! i make some also, and i can appreciate the work involved, i like this intro, the scenes are great! interiors are well designed, and cool colored, i ll follow this for sure, you know how to build.