Welcome to the The Obstacle Course of Doom, the only illegal sport in the world! Seats are on the right, the concession stand is on the left!
And our prisone-er-contestant for today is...Omega Pie! So Pie...are you ready? Oh, wait, no need to awnser. There's no way down! So of course he's ready!
First, he makes his way on a very thin board across the pit of flames!
He loses his balance! Could this be the end for Pie?
And he gets back up! But can he survive the Machine Gun Platform?
...and he starts running! He's off to a good start...
...but he trips!
He gets back up. But whats this? He's been shot in the arm!
Now he starts across the board of thugs! Can he avoid the projectiles thrown by the thugs?
And he's hit by a trident!
He pulls it off, and throws it! He's not done yet.
He's going well...
And he's hit in the shoulder by a sword!
And a lightsaber finishes him off! Give a round of applause!
I can see a very nice start here, but here's some tips for improvement.
1: Add detail to the floor. You can add a milling crowd (with weapons?), some animals/vermin, random rocks, etc-anything that will spruce up the background.
2: Make the boards and surrounding area nicer. The upper level is very bare-some tiling would help, or just a little bit more detail.
It's a nice start, and it made me laugh!