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A Story Reborn Chapter 2 BARA MAGNA
Chapter 2 BARA MAGNA
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All of our friends have entered the mysterious Rahkshi Portal, Not knowing where it will take them! Takanuva is the last to enter the portal and is awaiting his friends and the dangers of where ever they may find
themselves!





(Takanuva arrives and his Toa friends are waiting for him)
Cossy: Ah! Takanuva youíve finally arrived!
(The portal closes as Takanuva lands on the floor in front)
Takanuva: Hello boys!



Takanuva: Well Cossy, did everyone survive the trip?
Cossy: Were all good, but I think you should have a look at this.
(Takanuva turns around and gazes upon what everyone else is looking at)



Takanuva: W...What is it?
Lewa: Were not sure but it kinda looks like a massive foot.
Cossy: Similar to the foot of the Giant robot body that Makuta now controls!
Takanuva: Wow...you donít think it could be...
(Tahu interrupts Takanuva)
Tahu: No way, Makuta stole that body from Mata Nui, it canít be one of Makutaís friends
Cossy: It could be a prototype body? It does look very damaged.
Takanuva: Hmm...I guess.
Raxonax: Cut the chit chat guys we got company!

(Raxonax and Lewa are quick to act and start firing at one of the Rahkshi)



Cossy: Oh great thereís Rahkshi on this planet too!
Tahu: Lewa! Raxonax! You two take down that one, Iíve got the pack leader!
Raxonax: Whatever you say! As long as I get to kill something!



(Raxonax steps on the Rahkshi and fires at his chest, While Lewa fires at his face)
Raxonax: NOW GET UP SO I CAN KILL YOU AGAIN!



Tahu: Thisíll be quick!
(Tahuís shield is suddenly surrounded by fire and quickly engulfs the Rahkshi!)
Rahkshi: Reeeii!!!



Cossy: WOAH, Tahu! Whatever that was it was SWEET! You gotta show me how to do that!
Tahu: Yeah, sure no problem!
Takanuva: Nice work but how about next time you let Cossy and me kill one of them!
Raxonax: Wait I did save you one, I thought there was a third?
Takanuva: Hmmm.... yeah now that I think about it your right, there was a third!
Lewa: These Rahkshi are dead guys, and I donít remember seeing him, it must have been in your heads!
Raxonax: I guess youíre...
(Before Raxonax could finish an oddly familiar voice interrupted him)
???: HALT! State your business outcasts!
(Everyone turns to look at where the voice is coming from)



Mossdeep: I said state your business!
Cossy: Whoa, Calm down! Where all friends here are buddy!
Gelu: Tell us who you are and where youíre from!
Cossy: Fine, You wonít believe us but, we are...
(As Cossy starts explaining Gelu crouches down to get a closer look at the dead Rahkshi)



Gelu: What the heck is this! It looks like no Vorox Iíve ever seen!
Lewa: Thatís because itís a Rahkshi, beasts that followed us here from our home world.
Gelu: Hmmm...
Mossdeep: Wait, Wait stop! Start again you lost me.
Cossy: *Sigh* Fine! Weíre Toa, from another world called Aqua Magna, We fight for Mata Nui and hope to put a stop to Makuta, the evil that has enslave our friends...Happy?
(Gelu gets up)



Mossdeep: Wait, did he just say?
Gelu: He did, how about you go get him.
Mossdeep: Will do!
(Mossdeep runs off)



Cossy: Whereís he going?
Gelu: HA HA, youíll find out in due time!
Takanuva: I think itís in your best interest to tell us NOW!
Gelu: Hey, hey calm down! Heíll be back soon!



Gelu: Are these the Glatorian your looking for?
Cossy: MATA NUI! We...we...
Takanuva: We thought that Makuta had killed you!
Ackar: Mata Nui, Do you know these outcasts?
Mata Nui: Theyíre no outcasts, they are friends from my home world!
Kiina: More other worlders! Do you think they might be able to get you and me back to your home world, like you promised?
Raxonax: HA you donít wanna go back there! Itís a Makuta infested Rat hole now!



Mata Nui: My friends, I think itís time you all introduce yourselves, after all youíll be seeing each other a whole lot more!
Takanuva: I agree.
(The Glatorian and Toa get into mixed groups and start introducing themselves)



Raxonax: Sup! The names Raxonax, yours?
(Ackar shakes Raxonaxís hand)
Ackar: Ackar, Nice sword! Maybe later you can show me what you got in a...ífriendlyí fight?
Raxonax: HA sounds great!
Cossy: So wait let me get this right, your Kiina, Gresh, Mossdeep and...
Mossdeep: Heís Gelu, one of the best Glatorian I know.
Cossy: Gelu! I think I got it now! And urgh...whatís a Glatorian?
Gresh: According to what Mata Nui says itís pretty much the same thing as a Toa but, we used to fight in...different ways.
Cossy: I see!
Gelu: HA HA
Cossy: Whatís so funny?
Gelu: Your armour
Cossy: What about it?
Gelu: Itís not looking too good! Mossdeep is pretty good with that kinda stuff, Heíll fix you up with new armour.
Mossdeep: Will do!
Cossy: Alright, I guess!



Lewa: This is...amazing! We all thought you were dead.
Mata Nui: It sure is good to know that some Toa survive Makutaís Takeover!
Takanuva: Agreed! Youíve gotta tell what happened to you!
Mata Nui: Well itís a long story but alright!
(It appears thereís someone else who wants to listen!)



Mata Nui: Itís name echoed my rebirth! The mask of life! [The Legend Reborn FTW XD]
(Lewa interrupts Mata Nui)
Lewa: Wait! A Rahkshi!
Takanuva: Iíll handle this!
(Takanuva leaps forward...)



(...And tries to tackle the Rahkshi before it goes into the portal!)



(The Rahkshi enters the portal and it closes)
Takanuva: DAMN IT!
(As he says this he slams his fist on the ground)
Lewa: Oh crap
Mata Nui: I take it this is not good
Tahu: No...no itís not




(While Tahu and Lewa help Takanuva up, Mata Nui goes over to were the others are)
Cossy: Ah good Mata Nui your here now I can explain to all of you why this is a VERY bad thing
Gelu: I donít see how this can be that bad, I mean that...thing just when through some portal! What harm can it do?
Cossy: *sigh* you donít understand! That thing is gonna go back to my home world and tell Makuta that were here!
Gresh: I donít understand
Mata Nui: Remember when I told you about that evil that took over my planet and enslaved my people
Kiina: Yes
Mata Nui: Well that Rahkshi is going to tell this evil ,whose name is Makuta, that our new friends are here
Cossy: Not only will the Rahkshi tell Makuta about us, heíll tell him about you guys! All of your lives, Heck this whole planet is in danger, Makuta is coming!

To be continued!

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PLEASE READ
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Sorry that I havenít posted anything of a while, My camera needed to be fixed and I couldnít take any pictures to post, but now that itís fixed Iím be posting more stuff, Speaking of posting stuff the next stuff Iím posting is
My Coruscant Diorama
And all my new Bionicle MOCís including my version of TeagleStrike xís self MOC and all my new vehicles :D
Also the Rahkshi that Attacked Cossy and the others were on patrol to scout around Bara Magna, to search for life on the planet, so that Makuta knew if it was inhabited and posed a threat to him.
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Well I hope you enjoyed Chapter 2, Chapter 3 will be up a lot sooner this time :D
Donít forget to rate and comment!



Comments

 I made it 
  August 11, 2013
Thanks all ;)
 I like it 
  April 26, 2012
Hey Ben, if you want another figure thats fine! Just give me the usual info and I'll sort it out. His surname will obviously have to be Anaron though
 I like it 
  July 24, 2011
nice! I just noticed that you didn't just use the official models, but slightly upgraded them.
 I like it 
  July 3, 2011
Nice story! It all makes more sense and matches to the bionicle world. My story just has my mocs coming in a small but legendary war later, but this, almost anyone knows it. This story will have total epicness!
 I like it 
  June 23, 2011
awesomesauseandimwithlegobobthisIScrazygah! (awesomesause and im with legobob this is crazy!)
 I like it 
  May 28, 2011
eh, it's ok, but i know it's gonna be an epic story!
 I like it 
  April 22, 2011
What? I haven't commentend on this? THATS TERRIBLE! Nice chapter even though it's so old now! XD
 I made it 
  April 12, 2011
I totally agree with you there, too bad they won't be doing a 5th movie :/ Aparently they were going to, but then they stopped bionicle :/
 I like it 
  April 11, 2011
well, it's alright, its just that the ending was screwed up a bit.
 I made it 
  March 25, 2011
Hmmm...Now that I think about it I agree with you, It wasn't the best movie, still it was the last bionicle movie so that made it good :) Thanks for commenting bro ;)
 I like it 
  March 25, 2011
one thing, i don't like the legend reborn, since it's a short film, the ending was cheesy, Berix got on my nerves, the villans were worse than useless, and it seemed very discriminating against the ice tribe, since both Strakk and Metus were bad guys, and Gelu wasn't included... sorry, i just needed to get it off my chest, and you have your own opinion.
 I made it 
  March 20, 2011
HAHA Thanks guys :D Nice jokes :P
 I like it 
  March 19, 2011
Mata Nui, its Mata Nui!
 I like it 
  January 28, 2011
Well i liked that...(ducks)... but i couldn't...(jumps to side)... pay too much attention because i was fighting ackar (BOOM!) aiie!
 I like it 
  January 28, 2011
Why didn't they realised that the rahkshi became chibi XD
 I made it 
  January 26, 2011
Again thanks everyone for your comments :) btw Callan, you'll be appearing in Chapter 7, which will hopefully be up soon, and Chessy Q you'll be appearing in the next chapter, not in person, (Since HF 2.0 doesn't come out till Feb) but you'll kinda see yourself, If that makes sense :P , I don't want to give too much away, but I'm happy to say you'll be in it :D
 I like it 
  January 26, 2011
I WANT MORE!! XD And if you want to add Callan in the next episode, that's fine with me! If not, it certainly won't take away from this amazing story! :D
 I like it 
  January 26, 2011
wow, awesome chapter! can't wait for the next one!
 I like it 
  January 26, 2011
You're really good at the special effects!! I love how the glatorian met the toa! And thanks for commenting on the tons of my mocs!
Ben Cossy
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Cheesy Q
  January 25, 2011
Cossy your a mind reader! that's exactly how I wanted him to be! :D
Ben Cossy
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Cheesy Q
  January 25, 2011
Nice big chapter with a great cliffhanger. well done. :D Probably because of all that time between chapters.
Ben Cossy
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S.E.D. (The Editor)
  January 25, 2011
Great story :) I also like the updates on Tahu Nuva.
 I like it 
  January 25, 2011
Awesome!!!! I love the comic and it was much better the second time. The only thing is that that box doesnt look much like a foot ;P
 I like it 
  January 25, 2011
Awesome story! I can't wait to see Chapter 3, and the BARON making an appearance! You're the first to actually make my self-MOC, so many thanks! And to include him in this awesome story is even better! Thanks!
 I like it 
  January 25, 2011
COOL! I never thought of making something like this! Great work!
 I like it 
  January 25, 2011
Awesome, cant wait to see the next one.
Ben Cossy
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Toa Oblivious
  January 24, 2011
awesome it is so cool FYI plz dont cuss.
Ben Cossy
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Peter Crasher the Powerlord
  January 24, 2011
Wicked! I want more of this story! Its getting better and better! :D
Ben Cossy
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Chaos Master
  January 24, 2011
awesome chapter! this story keeps getting better and better! and it's only chapter 2! also, nice gang of glatorion sets you have there. i only have 2 bionicle sets together anymore...and both of them are stars. but i refuse to take apart my HF guys, minus surge, of whom i took apart to make cossy.
Ben Cossy
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Cheesy Q
  January 24, 2011
I take it that chapter 2 or 3 is in feb.?
Ben Cossy
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Cheesy Q
  January 24, 2011
oblivious, I'm with you. Ooh! something just came to my mind! Does cheesy fly in on his jet pack? Is he a good guy?
 I like it 
  January 24, 2011
Nice story so far,keep it up.
 I made it 
  January 24, 2011
Thank you everyone for your comments :) Btw Chessy Q I plan on making your self MOC be a portal guardian who betrays Makuta and joins the Toa...I've already said too much :P Anyway, Choas, I'm sorry to hear that :/ Hey there's always ebay :) And Toa Oblivious sorry bout that I'll try not to again.
 I like it 
  January 24, 2011
Cool. Great Cliffhanger
 I like it 
  January 24, 2011
This is awesome! I love both parts of the story! Can you check out this mech? http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/249064
 I like it 
  January 24, 2011
I don't know much about the Bionicle Story... but your story is cool. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
 I like it 
  January 24, 2011
Cool! Can't wait till the next chapter!
 I like it 
  January 24, 2011
Great! you managed to get introduction into action, which is great! love the cliff hanger as well!
 I made it 
  January 24, 2011
Thanks Peter! Don't worry more will be up soon :D
 
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