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It's a Trap! The Deleted Scene...
A little extra scene from the story which I posted the other day: It's a trap! This takes place when Luke is walking through the desert. If you haven’t seen the whole story, or your just forgetful, the story is that Luke has been sent on a mission across the Tatooine sands to go to Jabba’s Palace. Admiral Ackbar is talking to Luke over a headset as there are traps everywhere and Ackbar is identifying them. Enjoy!
About this creation


Luke: Wow, Ackbar, this looks like a plane crash! Oh some smelly old people - my favourite!



Romoin: Look, brother! A traveller!
Luke: Urrrrgh, space vampires!



Romoin: You are quite wrong, we are Juradions. I am Romoin and this is my bearded brother Derx. Our plane got shot down here and now we're stranded.
Luke: Hey, what's that tatty old ball of material there?



Romoin: That is the shrunken head of some bloke who called himself "Space Gypsy".
Luke: Urrrrrrrrgh!



Luke: I've been quite rude, I nearlly forgot, I am Luke Skywalker and I am very pleased to meet you.
Romoin: Do you happen to have a flare in your pocket, we need to launch one and get someone to rescue us.



Luke: I do, I'll just get one out...



Luke: Ta-da!



Luke: I'll just light it with my lightsaber...
Derx: WOW! You have a lightsaber! Me too!



Derx: It's just the force isn't too strong with me. My weapon's all floppy!


Luke: I'll get you started.
*Jedi powers, jedi powers*



Derx: Cool, now it's all stiff!



Luke: Yeh, but mine's still bigger than yours!
Romoin: Now boys, don't start!



*woompf!*



*BANG!!!*



Romoin: Thank you greatly! Give me a hug my new friend!
Ackbar: I wouldn't Luke, I bet his jacket is completely lined with explosives!
Luke: Don't be silly Ackbar, this guy's a friend!



Luke: See, Ackbar...



*KA-BLAM!!!*



Luke: AHHHHHHHHHHH!!!! Aw few, I was only dreaming. I was – AH POO! I’M MEANT TO BE ON A MISSION!



Luke: BYE GUYS!



Comments

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  October 29, 2011
LOL thats great!
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  February 22, 2011
LOL Awesome!
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  February 5, 2011
Yeah that's funny! :)
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  February 5, 2011
Quoting Max Pointner I normally wouldn't comment on something like this, but that mushroom cloud is just ingenues.
Thank you, why wouldn't you comment on something like this?
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  February 4, 2011
I normally wouldn't comment on something like this, but that mushroom cloud is just ingenues.
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  January 31, 2011
Quoting Nick Barrett Great story. The flare joke was definately the highlight :-)
Thank you :D
 I like it 
  January 31, 2011
Great story. The flare joke was definately the highlight :-)
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  January 31, 2011
Quoting Flare . :D I like the Flare joke :P
:D I like the Flare comment :P Thanks!
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  January 31, 2011
Quoting Legofreak2444 . LOL! I love the floppy Lightsaber and the explosion is cool too!
It's a helmet visor if you hadn't noticed :D
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  January 31, 2011
Hehe, very nice!
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  January 31, 2011
:D I like the Flare joke :P
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  January 30, 2011
LOL! I love the floppy Lightsaber and the explosion is cool too!
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  January 30, 2011
LOL! I love the floppy Lightsaber and the explosion is cool to!
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  January 30, 2011
Quoting A minute ago ... Pretty good, your getting really good at these type-ups! XD
Thanks, what you say contredicts what W. Mark said but I guess differet people have different opinions :D
 I made it 
  January 30, 2011
Quoting Alex Mac Hum, hehe, lightsabers...Some good little sequences here, I have no idea how you created the explosion effect, but I do know the pieces included, I'm just wondering how that rubber band is held up...It serves for a really great effect.
Thank you for commenting! The technique of the mushroom cloud is a secret, and don't tell anyone if you figure it out :P
 I like it 
  January 30, 2011
Pretty good, your getting really good at these type-ups! XD
George G.
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Toa Oblivious
  January 29, 2011
lol funny!
George G.
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President Rick Archerd Federation of Lynot.
  January 29, 2011
"Do you have a flare?" *Luke pulls out a Flare* PRICELESS! Man, this is just... ROFLMAO!
 I like it 
  January 29, 2011
cool!!!!!
 I like it 
  January 29, 2011
cool!!!!!
 I like it 
  January 29, 2011
Hum, hehe, lightsabers...Some good little sequences here, I have no idea how you created the explosion effect, but I do know the pieces included, I'm just wondering how that rubber band is held up...It serves for a really great effect.
 I made it 
  January 29, 2011
Quoting W. Mark Most of this was fairly unremarkable (work on your grammar and phrasing a bit... check out LIU Atlas for a good example of how to make a write-up), but the Flare gag and the mushroom cloud technique were great.
Thank you, I appreciate comments giving improvements as much as I do comments praising my creations. I am trying to improve my grammar - I have even downloaded a spellchecker for the internet :D Thanks again.
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  January 29, 2011
Quoting Deus The Risen That's just hilarious!
So are you my friend :D
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  January 29, 2011
Quoting Matty Mason That is an epic win, especially the Flare bit. Oh, and that mushroom cloud is genious!
Thank you :D The cloud might work better in black (obtain the top bit from the disco dude figure).
  January 29, 2011
Most of this was fairly unremarkable (work on your grammar and phrasing a bit... check out LIU Atlas for a good example of how to make a write-up), but the Flare gag and the mushroom cloud technique were great.
 I like it 
  January 29, 2011
That is an epic win, especially the Flare bit. Oh, and that mushroom cloud is genious!
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  January 29, 2011
That's just hilarious!
 I made it 
  January 29, 2011
Quoting Jason Perkins Was that a raspberry on top of the mushroom cloud? :P
It's actually the clown's hairpiece facing backwards :D
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  January 29, 2011
Was that a raspberry on top of the mushroom cloud? :P
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  January 29, 2011
Quoting Matthew Novosad HAHAHAHA! Great jokes! ROFLMAO Means "Rolling on the floor laughing my but off". But I substituted a word due to the swear nature of it. ;). Anyway, great stuff!
Thanks, I see now :D
 I like it 
  January 29, 2011
HAHAHAHA! Great jokes! ROFLMAO Means "Rolling on the floor laughing my but off". But I substituted a word due to the swear nature of it. ;). Anyway, great stuff!
 I made it 
  January 29, 2011
Quoting President Rick Archerd Federation of Lynot. "Do you have a flare?" *Luke pulls out a Flare* PRICELESS! Man, this is just... ROFLMAO!
I hope Flare see's this :D What does ROFLMAO stands for? Rolling on the floor laughing making angry oranges?
 I made it 
  January 29, 2011
Quoting JC REX Wow! I like the 'Boom' Mushroom cloud
Thank you! If you would like to know the secret of how to make the mushroom cloud, you're not going to find out - its a secret :D
 I like it 
  January 29, 2011
Wow! I like the 'Boom' Mushroom cloud
 
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