Our friends have spotted a meteor heading towards Bara Magna, However this is no meteor! It is Makuta Teridax himself! Mata Nui has devised a plan to take down Makuta, It involves hiding the remaining Toa, Agori and Glatorian in the canyons near Tesara, His is taking place now...
Cossy: Come on everyone, keep moving, youíre doing great!
Tento (Green and Black Agori): *sigh* this is pointless!
Tumo (Silver and Blue Agori: According to these off-worlders we better keep doing this, or were gonna die!
Mata Nui: I just hope our plan succeeds.
Ackar: It will Mata Nui, The Agori will stay here in the canyons hidden from Makuta, You will head back to Tesara with Cossy to delay Makuta while the Glatorian and Toa look for a way to power that prototype body!
Mata Nui: I just hope way calculations were right and that Makuta does land near Tesara!
Ackar: When have you ever been wrong!
(Ackar and Mata Nui look up into the sky, in the area were the meteor is)
Ackar: Everythingís gonna be ok, thereís no reason to be worried!
Mata Nui: I know your right Ackar but Iíve just got this felling.
Ackar: Iíd be surprised if you didnít!
Frigus (Agori): Hey buddy is everything gonna be ok?
Raxonax: Donít you worry little friend, youíve got us to protect you!
(Everyone ends up in the canyons, hidden from Makuta just as they planed, Cossy is now checking if everyone is here)
Cossy: Eighteen, nineteen, twenty...Twenty? Why is there only twenty of us! Raanu, I thought you said that there were heaps more Agori! Not to mention, were have Axxon and the others gone?
Raanu: Some of the Agori refused to leave, they didnít believe you other-worlders, the other Agori are still on their way.
Cossy: What about Axxon and the other Toa?
Raxonax: They stayed behind with the other Agori, So that Makuta doesnít get to them
Cossy: Heís always been a good man Axxon!
Mata Nui: ALRIGHT EVERYONE LETS GO OVER THE PLAN ONE MORE TIME!
(Everyone gathers in a circle as Mata Nui stands in front)
Mata Nui: Alright my friends, Cossy and I are going to leave for Tesara soon, were Makuta will land in a matter of hours, and in the time when we are delaying him, You will find a way to power the prototype...
(Raxonax interrupts Mata Nui)
Raxonax: It doesnít really look like Makutaís gonna be landing near Tesara!
(Raxonax points to the sky, as the meteor comes closer than ever before!)
Mata Nui: NO!
Ackar: We need to get to a better spot, or were all gonna be killed!
Takanuva: Thereís no time Ackar!
Cossy: Brace yourselves! Makutaís coming!
(Makuta lands with a blast of shadow surrounding of him, and then disappearing)
Mata Nui: Makuta, Itís been a while!
Makuta: It has hasnít it brother! I hoped that you would have died a slow and painful death when I trapped you inside that mask! But no...So now I shall destroy all your friends and make you watch, then eliminate you the way I should have when I took over!
Mata Nui: Iím afraid I canít let you do that Makuta!
Makuta: HA! Do you honestly think that you and your pitiful army can destroy me?
Mata Nui: My Army is more powerful than they look Makuta, and you donít know the power my mask possesses!
Makuta: You will always be weak brother! Now I shall show you my power!
(Makuta strikes Mata Nui with a blast of shadow form his blade!)
(Makutaís blast of Shadow, which was meant to destroy part of Mata Nuiís army, was blocked by Mata Nui, as it hit his mask it seemed to be absorbed as the mask glowed!)
Mata Nui: You donít know my masks power!
Makuta: ... It appears our masks share some sought of bond...
(Makutaís mask begins to glow in a similar way to Mata Nuiís)
Makuta: I see no other way you could have survived my attack!
(Suddenly both their masks stop glowing and...)
(...A powerful jolt of energy shoots out from both of their masks, causing a massive collision of sheer power! As Makutaís shadow energy and Mata Nuiís light energy merge together and the bond between their maskís is sealed, six powerful beams fly out of the massive powerball that has formed in front of them, each flying in every direction, but one falls to the ground close to where Tahu is)
Tahu: What the?...
(The Shard that landed into front of Tahu continues to glow as Tahu stares at it in complete awe!)
Makuta: ...My word...Such power! Power that I will control, once I rip that mask from your face! Today will be the day I destroy you! Your mask isnít powerful enough to take me again!
(Makuta raises his staff to strike Mata Nuiís and his friends)
(Makuta charges his staff and starts to fire it)
(As Makutaís blast gets closer to Mata Nui, Cossy uses his mask of Supersonic flight to get Mata Nui out of its way)
Cossy: LOOK OUT!
Cossy: HA! Suck on that Makuta! Iím too quick for you!
Makuta: I never should have created you!
Mata Nui: Thank you Cossy!
Makuta: Canít you see Mata Nui, even your friends donít think you can defeat me!
Mata Nui: Together, with the power of Unit, we will destroy you!
Makuta: You Toa and your virtues! When will you learn that you can never defeat use!
(Makuta quickly fires his staff to ensure a hit)
(Makutaís blast of Shadow just misses Cossy and he goes flying)
Mata Nui: Cossy!
Makuta: You betrayed me Cossy! Now I shall destroy you!
(Cossy gets up, looking like he is in pain)
Cossy: You missed! And your gonna have to get through all of us if you wanna kill me!
Makuta: Well that can be arranged!
(The Shard of light that landed in front of Tahu starts to glow less than it was before)
Tahu: What the, it looks like, BUT HOW! [Get it Hau/how XD]
(Tahu leans over to pick it up)
(The light Shard takes the shape of the Kanohi Hau and stops glowing when Tahu picks it up)
Tahu: My word! It is!
Makuta: Ever since I started ruling this universe I have been saving all my power! And now I will unleash it, all of it! Killing all of my enemies in one glorious moment!
(Makuta begins to charge his shadow energy, concentrating it into on ball of pure shadow, capable of destroying anything in its path!)
Makuta: Now since I only wish to destroy you and every living creature on this planet, Iíll make sure I donít destroy this beautiful Wasteland!
(Suddenly the strange Shard, That Tahu picked up starts to glow again and a massive golden beam shoots out from it, Amazed by what is happening, and also by the masks sheer power Tahu is forced to steady himself)
Tahu: What the heck is going on!
Gelu: What the?! Tahu what on Bara Magna are you doing?
Tahu: I...have no idea brother!
(Makuta continues to charge his shadow energy, concentrating it into one massive ball of shadow, It continues to grow larger, The glowing Shard that Tahu is holding continues to launch a massive beam of light, it now stretches into the sky and has formed a golden shield over all of the Toa)
Makuta: Fools any defence will be useless against me!
(Makutaís concentrated ball of Shadow is now at full rage and he is about to unleash it on the Toa!)
(Makutaís blast sweeps over the land towards the Toa, The shield that has now surrounded the Toa appears to be protecting them)
Cossy: My word! That blast of Shadow! It...itís powerful!
Gresh: What the heck is this? A shield? It looks like itís protecting us!
Takanuva: Itís Tahu, He is somehow protecting us!
Lewa: I didnít think this mask power could withstand an attack of this size...and power!
Tahu: Itís not my mask, itís this thing!
(Makutaís blast sweeps over all of Bara Magna destroying every single living thing, Every Glatorian and Agori, apart from the ones with Mata Nui, is at the Atero Magna, preparing a feast for Gresh, Mata Nui, Ackar, Berix and Kiina, The heroís who freed Bara Magna from the Skrall armies, All of these Glatorian and Agori have been destroyed by blast, Some have managed to survive, how it happen, is unknown...for now!)
(Makuta has now unleashed all of his power and killed thousands of innocent lives...But a few remain)
Makuta: *pant* WHAT! HOW COULD YOU HAVE SURVIVED MY ATTACK! *pant* I HAVE BEEN SAVING THAT POWER SINCE I RULED THIS UNIVERSE! HOW COULD YOU HAVE SURVIVED!
(The golden Shield goes down and Tahu steps forward)
Tahu: With the help of this...thing Makuta, One of those Shards that came out of that blast of power the two of you created! It saved us and if it can save us once it can save us again!
Makuta: HA your threats amuse me Toa! Do you just wish to talk!
Tahu: No I wish to kill you!
(As soon as Tahu finishes speaking the mask lights up again and another golden beam shoots out of it!)
Tahu: SUCK LASER!
Makuta: Your power is nothing compared to mine Toa!
(Makuta is struck by the powerful beam of light, the beam appears to have wounded him!)
(The blast has indeed wounded Makuta causing his entire shoulder to burst into flames)
Tahu: Well what do ya know!
Makuta: It appears that shard is more powerful than I first thought! Tahu hand me that mask and Iíll give you more power than even Mata Nui has!
Tahu: Iíll never betray Mata Nui, Besides you donít speak truth!
Makuta: Such a wise Toa, to bad I will have to destroy you...
Makuta: I am in to mood to fight, perhaps it is time I unleash my little surprise
(A small hatch opens on the lower areas of one of Makutaís feet...)
(...And hordes of Rahkshi begin to swarm out!)
Cossy: Oh come on!
Tahu: There is no way we can survive an army that large, we need to regroup in a safer place!
Mata Nui: I agree...
Mata Nui: MEN WE CANNOT SURVIVE IF WE FIGHT THIS ARMY! WE MUST FLEE TO A SAFER PLACE!
Ackar: I KNOW A PLACE WE CAN GO EVERYONE FOLLOW ME!
Well thatís it for now, Sorry about the wait, you have no idea how long it took me to edit these photos :/
Next weekend Iím gonna post Morak and... maybe some of the Matoran youíve seen in this Chapter :D
Thanks for viewing ;)
I'm so sorry about the wait for my city stuff Cyberfrank, I promise you that as soon as I finish remolding it I'll post it, just for you buddy ;) Again so sorry about the wait, I'll try my best to have it up...Maybe the weekend after the next?
i like how you attempt to make effects in your stories, it might not look like much now, but, with time, and experience, it will deliver great fruits! as for the story, well, i m giving up, if it would be me, i d take all the best grey parts, make the best realistic looking robot possible, build a second robot out of my second greatest amount color, and a fight in a city! will you do anything city soon?
Hey, this is really cool!Could you vote on this please? http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/253852
Also, I wanted to form an alliance with you and Cheesy Q and Owl, what do you say? I thought if us 4 could make a guild of good bionicle builders that would be awesome! We could make stuff together and each others self-mocs and help each other.
Thanks for commenting everyone ;) S.E.D. I have finished him but I won't be uploading him until the weekend :/ Thank you so much Owl that means a lot ;) but I think your comic is very high up their on the list :D And Nick, you would be right, thanks ;)
Thanks everyone for commenting ;) Baron, Makuta is actually in the 10, 000 feet tall body, I know the size is a bit off but still, Callan, It is no where near the end, in fact it's just getting started XD, Legobob123, I'll look at it when I can :D, Why thank you Kenaz :D And yes I was actually very tempted to have someone come up and kick him in the face XD, And to all the Hau jokes hehehe NICE!
Awesome! I really like how you've used some actual pages from the comics! But, I'm a bit confused on something: Do you have Makuta in a second smaller body, or do you mean for that to be the actual Second Robot? Cause if so, it's supposed to be like over 10,000 feet tall...You may wanna check that out...(Oh, and P.S. I've finished Cossy! I'll get to posting him soon :D)