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The Demon Within: chapter 3
Note: the dialogue is under each picture. last time we left Nitro he had been teleported out of a prison by an unseen friend... or foe.
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Nitro: jeez, I need some warning before I get teleported. I wonder who... or what brought me here?
unknown: that would be me.


Cossy: and me.
Nitro: oh, you two, I'd thought it would be somebody who wanted to kill me like everybody seems to want to do. you don't want to kill me.... do you?
Zukon: not at the moment.
Cossy: I did but then decided not to.
Nitro: oh joy


Cossy: we brought you here because we heard that the last of the Makuta were looking for you.
Nitro: why on Earth would they want me?
Zukon: we have no idea but we can bet it isn't anything good.
Cossy: and we can also assume it will involve a lot of screaming, dying and excruciating pain if they find you.
Zukon: we have been looking for you but they found you first.
Nitro: well you found me, now what
Zukon: um, we don't know, we hoped that the Makuta might tell you what they were going to do to you and probably explain their plans to you, you know, like in the movies.


*Nitro looks around*
Nitro: where are we?
Zukon: in the ruins of Metru Nui.
Cossy: Onu-Metru to be exact.
Nitro: so we are still on Spherus Magna.
Zukon: yes, technically.


Nitro: We should return to the Toa in New Atero and tell them of the last of the Brotherhood. The Makuta will probably strike there first.
Cossy: They probably will but if you go there you will only put them in more danger......... but we have to try.
Zukon: that's right we just can't have all the Toa captured by the Makuta.
Nitro: Then we have to set out for New Atero... or the Toa will fall to the brotherhood.

What will they find when they get to New Atero? And what obstacles will they face along the way? find out next time but for now please RATE AND COMMENT!!!

Just so you know this is probably the shortest chapter that will ever be posted do not worry the rest of them will be a lot longer. This was kinda a dialogue chapter with few pictures but a lot of dialogue. but the rest will have a bunch more pictures.



Comments

 I like it 
  April 18, 2011
Nice!
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  March 12, 2011
i have made your self moc please check it out.
 I made it 
  March 12, 2011
Quoting The PURE *___* can i build your self moc?, but i dont hawe that mask. oh and normal sized,small sized or big?
you do not even have to ask, of COURSE you can!
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  March 12, 2011
can i build your self moc?, but i dont hawe that mask. oh and normal sized,small sized or big?
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  March 8, 2011
Silver on Galvis sounds awesome! Looked at your Demon Within chapter 4. Pretty Good! Can't wait for the final battle (this will stink because this is a great story!) (8(1)
 I made it 
  March 8, 2011
Quoting Ben Cossy :D Awesome Chapter :D Thanks a million for putting me in it :D HAHA your Zukon looks so much like mine ;) Oh and you know what's really wierd, is that your comic ties in SO well to the sequel of my comic, I'll let you know how but if you don't wanna know then *SPOILER ALERT!!!* Now, I'll begin :P In the sequel, Cossy and the other toa, plan to destroy the last of the Makuta...but something else, that isn't a Makuta wishs to strike first! *END OF SPOILER* So yeah, wierd huh? Anyway, great work on this, can't wait for more ;)
my story will have the ultimate shocker around the middle of the series, and I mean the ultimate shocker, okay, not some small surprise I mean super shocker, and thats a Nick Nitro garauntee, :D
 I like it 
  March 8, 2011
:D Awesome Chapter :D Thanks a million for putting me in it :D HAHA your Zukon looks so much like mine ;) Oh and you know what's really wierd, is that your comic ties in SO well to the sequel of my comic, I'll let you know how but if you don't wanna know then *SPOILER ALERT!!!* Now, I'll begin :P In the sequel, Cossy and the other toa, plan to destroy the last of the Makuta...but something else, that isn't a Makuta wishs to strike first! *END OF SPOILER* So yeah, wierd huh? Anyway, great work on this, can't wait for more ;)
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Toa Oblivious ,Master of Earth
  March 7, 2011
will i be in it?
Nick Nitro Brick (inactive)
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Chaos Master
  March 7, 2011
sweet chapter, this is getting good! love the fact that zukon is there. sorry but nitro won't appear in the takeover for a while.
Nick Nitro Brick (inactive)
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Cheesy Q
  March 7, 2011
THRILLS! CHILLS! SUSPENSE!
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S.E.D. (The Editor)
  March 7, 2011
RADICAL!!! Can't wait for the next part (tense!).
 I made it 
  March 7, 2011
Quoting Kyle Peckham I can wait! Take your time Nick, I know you have other mocs and stuff that you are working on. Keep MOCing!
thank you for your understanding, plus I am going to add some silver to his color scheme, okay
 I like it 
  March 7, 2011
I can wait! Take your time Nick, I know you have other mocs and stuff that you are working on. Keep MOCing!
 I made it 
  March 7, 2011
Quoting Toa Oblivious ,Master of Earth will i be in it?
yes, but not for a few chapters but I am going to upload some chapters this week but he will not be in it for at least five or six chapters, but do dot worry, those will be coming soon :D oh and to Kyle Peckham, Galvis is only half done, sorry :(
 I like it 
  March 7, 2011
Lookin' good again Nick! Can't wait for chapter 4! How's progress on Galvis coming along? I need to upload my V2 of him. He is awesome! I love the figures that you build, a lot of detail and coolness in them all. Keep up the good work!
 
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