NAME: Jordan
GENDER: Male
SPECIES: Ta-Matoran
ALIGNMENT: Toa, General of Mata Nui's army (formerly)
OCCUPATION: Toa, Warrior, Chick Magnet :P
TITLES: 2444, Jordan, Jordanian Hot-Head, General, Flame
ELEMENT: Fire
MASK POWER: Mask of Agility and Speed
WEAPONS: Wrist Blades, Exploding Darts
MOC STATUS: Assembled
STORY: Jordan was once a Ta-Matoran from living on the island of Mata Nui. He always dreamed of becoming a Toa and learning to kick Makuta butt. Then one day, he found a Toa stone deep inside a volcanic crater, and it turned him into a Toa. Thinking the Matoran, not used to seeing Toa around those parts, would mistake him for a monster so he fled to the far side of the island, seeking the help of a Turaga who lived there. The Turaga trained him, and cared for him. Then, when he was skilled with his hands, the Turaga took him to the Toa fortress on Mata Nui. The Toa there were skeptical of his skills but they trusted the Turaga so they put him into more training.
Quickly seeing his skills were more than they had first perceived, the head Toa put him into a special training course for exceptionally gifted Toa. There he learned to fight in the art of wrist blades. He was trained to fight against all odds and to conquer all circumstances, using his wits and strength alone.
"You have been trained alone, so you can survive alone." Said the Turaga who first trained him on Mata Nui. "You don't need a team of six, you are on your own." He then died. Jordan never knew his real name.
Jordan was once a General of Mata Nui's army for a short period when there was the war with the Phoenix and blood hunters.
Jordan is now a skilled Toa and warrior. He prefers to work alone on his missions, except he enjoys doing missions with his friends from "Project 17".
Jordan has been asked to join the Order of Mata Nui by Kennos. He has yet to decide if he's going to join or stay with the Toa.
THEME: Arrival to Earth, Transformers
Epicness.
More Epicness.
Wrist blades!
More wrist blades!
Even more wrist bla-- You get the idea.
Legs.
Exploding Darts.
Arms and torso.
Backside.
Upper backside.
Flames...
Fire Sword! New feature, he can make a sword out of fire. :)
Epicness.
Flame-Wielding!
Epicness.
Playing the Bass. :D
Running!
Throwing Exploding Darts!
One last epicness shot.
Three greats.
it looks good, because of the numbers 'i like' I was curious, well, 'I like' the stances and positions you made with the figure, you really know how to express feeling with them, the bass was very unexpected lol! and made me think that the next one was an electric guitar solo, [without the guitar] like saying ; this mech rocks!...until I red it was supposed to be running, lol! it did that well too, I hope you make backgrounds one day, as a system-technics guy, I can t help but want to add a lot of them in this piece! lol! well done!
Quoting Athanasios Lazarou
Holy crap that's a lot of likes for a bionicle! :P Anyway, didn't this guy used to be your B.I.? Or was it some other Bionicle? I don't really do bionicles, so most look the same to me. ;)
It was my BI. The current one is just...uh, temporary. >.>
Holy crap that's a lot of likes for a bionicle! :P Anyway, didn't this guy used to be your B.I.? Or was it some other Bionicle? I don't really do bionicles, so most look the same to me. ;)
Nice bio moc! I am working on a bio moc that is inspired by Jordan and Gardunis. kinda mix. but I put also other things on it. just wanned you to know. BTW I love your bionicle work!
Quoting Mal L
This is better than the last two! Amazing! But why did you not give him a heartlight? There is space for a translucent stud there. Oh and I have built a Jordan of my own, and I was just wondering if I could have permission to post it.
This is better than the last two! Amazing! But why did you not give him a heartlight? There is space for a translucent stud there. Oh and I have built a Jordan of my own, and I was just wondering if I could have permission to post it.
Jordan looks kind of nice,but I have some constructive critisism(spelling)to offer.I don't quite like the arm connection.You can't move the lower arms up and down,and you can't twist the hands around.If you would fix that,Jordan would have better posibility.
0w0... Wow, ur very good!
Please take a look at my mediocre self moc [ROBOCOP603- LEADER OF THE VISORAK HORDE]
Just so you know mine also happens to have pistons connected inside the arm itself, will post updates for it soon.
LOVE UR MOCS!!!
Ahhhh... the great Jordan 2444. I remember this from the creation lab, and here ofcoarse. This inspired my self-MOC greatly!! Thank you so much for figuring out the leg thing with the HF armor!! Great MOC!!!
Hehe, thanks Callan. You've been waiting for me to ask haven't you? :P Thanks for spelling it out but I was going to do all those things anyway. :P
I'll probably completely redo him, not sure when I will though. I'm thinking about making him look something like this:
(http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/191/ironman01.jpg/sr=1)
I also just got Witch Doctor so I'll be giving him custom lower limbs. ;)
Did you say you might revamp this guy?!? Oh goody! If I were you, I'd try out some new shins, the HF leg armor is nice, but getting a little old hat. Also, brand new lower legs entirely might suit him, Shadowgear HATES those leg pieces with a passion. The body, I really don't have a problem with, so keeping it exactly the same wouldn't bother me at all. But something I think Jordan is begging for is some custom lower arms! I tried your arm technique on my Kulstof, you might know, and it annoys the monkeys out of me! A new connection for the arms would be great. Other then those, I don't think anything is really needed. This guy is good, but it's about time he replaced the second "o" with an "l". GOLD!!
Really cool, particularly the body and legs. But I'm not a fan of the forearms, they don't bend the way regular arms do, but the are good for posing and the arm blades.
Destrin would get his Butt pwned!!!! :P Destrin doesn't have a china man's chance against Jordan!!! Jordan, you've gotta' admit with me, Destrin would easily die. :P
Hey, since there's a heartlight group, there should be a custom head group! I'd make it myself, but I'm not too well known yet. Would you do the honors?
Soap M.
July 14, 2011
I'm making Jordan, is that okay??? I have his body, and his head sittin' infront me, right now. :P
Quoting Berial .
Well,the group isn't even created yet,so it's hard for you to really advertise it,but I suppose you could put a teaser at the end of your moc(s) with a colorful letter saying like,"The Bio-Cup is coming",lol,or something like that.When the group is done and is accepting members,then I'll invite you to it and you'll be able do better advertise it.For now I suppose that's all you can do.Thanks!
Quoting Legofreak2444 ~
BTW, when can I start advertising?
Well,the group isn't even created yet,so it's hard for you to really advertise it,but I suppose you could put a teaser at the end of your moc(s) with a colorful letter saying like,"The Bio-Cup is coming",lol,or something like that.When the group is done and is accepting members,then I'll invite you to it and you'll be able do better advertise it.For now I suppose that's all you can do.Thanks!
Again, I want to say really epic moc! Could I ask you something? If you have read Ben Cossy's homepage, it has people which you can click on to go to that person's homepage. The thing is since Ben just told me how to put a hyperlink in my homepage, I was wondering if I could have your link to your homepage so I could do that thing that Ben Cossy does.
Again, I want to say really epic moc! Could I ask you something? If you have read Ben Cossy's homepage, it has people which you can click on to go to that person's homepage. The thing is since Ben just told me how to put a hyperlink in my homepage, I was wondering if I could have your link to your homepage so I could do that thing that Ben Cossy does.
Man,I missed alot of stuff on MOCpages.Good thing it was worth it because,I bought Furno 1.0.Can I make your self-moc?
I like it
Commander Shockwave
June 30, 2011
Can you show how to make the legs and connect his wrist blades?(I love your use of HF parts)I want to make a design of my own incorperating legs and wrist blades.I'd intend to give you credit for those parts when I finish mine.(what is a self MOC?)
Really? You can't just look back to where I said it before? Sigh, okay I'll just copy and paste it here again:
Go to Youtube, find the song you want, click the "Share" button under it, then click "Embed" then click "Use old embed code" copy and paste the HTML to your page, and there should be two pairs of "350" and "480". Put the last pair of numbers to "25" and you should be set. ;)
I like it
COMMANDER JAKE *
June 24, 2011
Umm I forgot how to put music on your creation, from Youtube. :(
Well, since you didn't guess, you,ve been revamped :D I'll post Jordan 2444 The Silver Speed Demon after I post Turbine :D (Posting a comment on my DSI for the first time FTW! :D)
Now I've looked through some of your Bionicle creations, and I must say they're stunning! I've build some (smaller) Bionicle creations too. I also have a question: Where did you get the mask? It looks like Makutas mask from one of the old sets, but it's in red. BTW Thanks for your comment on my creation.
I like it
Soap M.
June 18, 2011
Oh... Oh, BTW I finished my self-MOC! Its awsome! I'm using furno's regular head. :D He's beast. Will you, comment on him ,when I post him, later today?
Epic! I just have one question: Is this you self- MOC and if it is, is a self MOC supposed to be your signature bio?
I like it
Soap M.
June 13, 2011
Well, I have a little bin of bionicle, can you make a self MOC that I could base it off of? Can you do it, like yours, cuz I like yours, yourz Iz Epicnezz!
I like it
Soap M.
June 13, 2011
I'm talking about YOU, to make me a self-MOC. Can you, please?
Oh...well sorry, I can't do that right now. I'm at a lack of Bionicle pieces and I'm also doing the Bio-Thon so yeah. I'm sure you can think up something. Look around and you'll find some inspiration. ;)
Well, let's see. How many Bionicles do you have? First, you should try revamping a Bionicle you already have. Take a Bionicle set you have and make it better, look around the pages and you can find some pretty good inspiration. ;)
I like it
Soap M.
June 12, 2011
I'm trying to make a bionicle, and I need help! Can you help me?
Furno's mask backwards looks a lot better than it does forwards, I thought about trying to create an MOC with that mask but I couldn't find the right armor, head, or size to fit a backwards mask. It's amazing that you found a perfect MOC for the mask. Great detail on the Body and extremities. Awesome MOC!
Thanks Magma! And once again, Jordan looks amazing! My only teensie problem is that he can't move his lower arms forward. Ever plan on changing that? :D
I invited you to the Bio-Thon group where you could find a team. I wasn't asking you to join my team. I'd be awesome if you'd join someone's team though. :/
Once again, great self-moc. Could you inform me on when you will be taking self-moc requests? Also, do you have anyone that you would like to add to "Beings of Spherus Magna"? Again, respond to this on Tarshduk V3's page. :P
Hey, sorry, IO had to post this on one of your MOCS so you heard it. Anyway, I'm kind of dissapointed with the blurry pictures onmy self MOC Nexus also.
The top 2 reasons are probably that I'm not the best photographer and my camera doesn't focus very well.
Nice! You and Cossy just seem to be everywhere on MOCpages. Everywhere I look!
Anyway, nice job using the backwards Furno helmet. And also, If you have time, check out my self MOC Mata Nexus
Great self-moc. I was wondering if you could build Tarshduk V3, my self moc in his most recent form. Reply to this on Tarshduk V3's page, since I check this one the most ;D
A good improvement from your last two versions. I especially like the visorak legs for the chest armor. My only complaint would be the simplicity of the upper arms and upper legs: maybe throwing in some greebles or more interesting joints would do the trick and allow more poseability. Great job!
That's a really nice self-moc. I like all the detail on him. Thanks for joining Beings of Spherus Magna, and posting some of your mocs on there. If you have time, take a look at some of my mocs, especially Tarshduk V3, my self-moc in his latest form.
Uh...hehe...about that...I'm a professional hacker! LOL! JK...I think you can figure it out...I don't really mind if you give me lot's of comments...I'll just report you. :P JK..again.
Okay, I just used the HTML of a 'rely' to some one. it goes like this :
how do you quote somebody when it is not your creation like you did with me on cheesy. tell me or I will spam you to death HHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH! oooohhhhh. I am evil >:D
this moc turely deserves the title as epic! i predict that you and lord oblivion will end up in the final round dukeing it out for the title of the best!
You are very welcome....wait thats 94 or 95? Lol....
I like it
JPfan65 Studios
April 26, 2011
Well here is 95 ;]!
I like it
JPfan65 Studios
April 26, 2011
Your welcome.....LOL why do I keep on doing this?! Oh yeah right I got to tell you some thing....if you do make my self-moc, you can add another mask if you want...I would like to see what Jurassica would look like in your image....is that okay?
Nice work, I usually don't comment on Bionicle things, but this is pretty cool. Oh, and the name "Toa" used in Bionicle mocs makes me smile: "Toa" means toilet in Swedish. =P
Rad (you know that old 70's word) self-moc but I question his elemental power since his occupation is chick magnet does he have magnatisum (I don't know how to spell that) too XD. the chest is well huge (he must have muscles (yet another word I dont know how to spell) the use of a hero factory chest plate on the back is amazing. the legs are great even if the posability is limited by the HF shins. the upper arms are SUPER good but then you go down to the lower arms and wheres the grebbles. I guess wrist blades count but still more limited motion try to make the posablity better man dude amigo hombre chico anyway good job on getting 85 likes on him.
Gotta love getting beaten up by midgets :D Great stuff :D Loving the new pictures :D And I'm glad you've discovered the awesomeness of greebling :D Also I love his new hands :D Great work ;)
I like it
Cheesy Q
April 20, 2011
you should change, taste this cheese, to FREEZE YOUR CHEESE!
When you're putting up a MOC, there should be a button that says "Learn some simple HTML" click and there are some HTML codes for doing that. If you can't find it let me know and I'll give you the code. ;)
I like it
Phyrrus 362
April 17, 2011
This guy is epic! Excellent work! And mind if I use that wrist blade design? I think it's one of the best things bout this MOC!
Um...sure...but uh, my only Lewa mask is being used on my Makuta Lizorve right now so...maybe not for a while...no wait, I can just switch their masks when I need to. Okay I'll put him up with Pure *__*...Maybe on Monday. ;)
I have to admit, your as good a friend to me as Cheesy is :D Thanks for always being there for me bro ;) I hope one day you get 100 likes on your Self MOC ;)
Dude! you just keep posting him in the promote your mocs here topic. I'm laughing right now just so you know. How many comments are you shooting for on this guy?
Awesome MOC! Good job! Wish I could make him but I don't have most of his parts.
P.S. Thanks for looking at my Cheesy! If its not too much trouble, can you please check out my self moc, Ventalus
Okay, just looking back at this, this is undoubtubley one of my favourite Self-MOCs ever. The time you must have taken on this guy, it's just unbelievable! The body is just breath taking, and also love the fact that you have made him look really good without bulking him up too much. If only my building skills were as good as yours! 20/10!
Quoting Toa Oblivious ,Master of Earth
got Furno and if i get more pieces i will add on to him. he has fire wrist blades! and they can go on his back for wings or storage!
Nice work, the wrist blades look great! Although, if you don't mind me saying, I think that some well-placed white or light blue would look awesome on this guy.
EPIC! Great new version of 2444! Nice name too. Awesome job!
I like it
Chaos Master
March 17, 2011
looks...epic! i'm going to build a version, but do you mind if it's chibi at first? i don't have the parts to make him full-scale right now, but i will in the future.
I like it
Chaos Master
March 17, 2011
ok thanks!
I like it
Cheesy Q
March 17, 2011
He's AMAZING! I can't think of a better word.
I like it
S.E.D. (The Editor)
March 17, 2011
Looks awesome!!!!!
I like it
Commander Fed's Pie
March 17, 2011
Awesome. Need to get a background story though. Would be helpful.
Quoting Ben Cossy
Tushay, I guess I can't talk then :P But Cossy, isn't HF, So sorry If you thought I was being mean, Again Jordan looks awesome! I'll change his name now :D
Tushay, I guess I can't talk then :P But Cossy, isn't HF, So sorry If you thought I was being mean, Again Jordan looks awesome! I'll change his name now :D
Quoting Ben Cossy
I'm happy to see you took out all that blue in his chest :D He looks so awesome now :D I love his wristblades, legs, chest and pretty much everything :D But...I'm sorry Jordan 2444? He isn't HF :/ Sorry if I sound mean but, I don't like it :/ Anyway apart from that, He is AMAZING! And since you asked I'll change his name to Jordan, Even though I don't like that name :) Again sorry if I sound mean And I'll say it again, EPIC :D
Well is Cossy HF? No but his name is more HF than Bionicle! I wanted to use my name alright?...
I'm happy to see you took out all that blue in his chest :D He looks so awesome now :D I love his wristblades, legs, chest and pretty much everything :D But...I'm sorry Jordan 2444? He isn't HF :/ Sorry if I sound mean but, I don't like it :/ Anyway apart from that, He is AMAZING! And since you asked I'll change his name to Jordan, Even though I don't like that name :) Again sorry if I sound mean And I'll say it again, EPIC :D
Quoting Chaos Master
looks...epic! i'm going to build a version, but do you mind if it's chibi at first? i don't have the parts to make him full-scale right now, but i will in the future.
Starting with small isn't that bad...sure...but as soon as you could I'd like him to be full size. ;)
