To the great MOCer Toa Phosphorus, Happy birthday! I'm sorry It's late but as you'll read I was away and couldn't through your party :/ anyway here it is :D ENJOY! Oh and before you read it, I'm only gonna be putting in 10 Self MOC's per party from now on, otherwise we'll both be here forever!
About this creation
Phosphorus: *Cough* forgetting something?
Cossy: I’m sorry, I’m sorry, I’m sorry! Please forgive me! I was on a camp, and couldn’t throw you a party but now I’m back and it’s all good, please forgive me
Phosphorus: Well you’re gonna have to do something to make up for it...Hmmm...I know, dress up in a panda costume and dance around in it, and then I’ll forgive you!
Cossy: Um...no...
Cossy: ....Why don’t we just throw you a party now?
Phosphorus: Hmm....Pondering face...
Phosphorus: Let’s do it!
Cossy: W00T! PARTY!
Morack: Did somebody say party?
Phosphorus: Why yes we did! It’s my birthday!
Morack: REALLY! Sweet Happy Birthday! What a coincidence! I just so happened to be carrying around this...
Morack: TA DA! It’s a Lamborghini
Phosphorus: SHINY!
Phosphorus: Hmmm...
Phosphorus: Hmmm...
Phosphorus: Hmm...
Cossy: What exactly are you doing?
Phosphorus: I’m...trying to figure out...how to get into the darn thing...
Cossy: Um Pho, I don’t think...
Phosphorus: ...Got it!
Cossy: Yeah...I’ll go put it in the present room
(Kenaz and Solunus walk in)
Both: Hey
Phosphorus: Sup guys!
Kenaz: Happy birthday bro! I got ya....
Kenaz: ...A sweet Bionicle comic!
Solunus: Hold the phone, Isn't that the comic I gave you on your birthday?
Kenaz: No
(Kenaz places the comic on the floor and Phosphorus inspects it)
Solunus: But it is! It’s the same comic I gave you on your birthday! It even has my name written at the bottom!
Kenaz: That means nothing, it mine and will always be mine...But it's now Pho’s
Solunus: *sigh* Here you go Phosphorus
Solunus: Now you can finish Lego Star wars!
Phosphorus: THANK YOU!
Solunus: That was so my comic
Kenaz: Don’t make me fight you!
Solunus: Come at me bro!
(The two walk off)
Phosphorus: I wonder who’ll be next?
Owl: *cough*
Phosphorus: Oh sorry Owl didn’t see you down there!
Owl: Grrrr...
Owl: And now your present TA DA!
(Owl points to the empty spot as Pho and Cossy look at it)
Cossy and Phosphorus : ...Um...
Owl: YO Cheesy! Bring the present over!
Cheesy Q: Huh what, OH right
Owl: TA DA!
Phosphorus and Cossy: OH MY GOSH!!!
Phosphorus: You, you got me a golden C 3PO and a little stand! Th...Thank you so much!
Owl: Well I’m just that good a friend, I guess this would be the best present in the post eh?
Phosphorus: By far! You must’ve spent like 100 bucks on this thing!
Owl: Well...
Cossy: Wait a minute! That’s the same C 3PO Ben has! In fact he built that stand!
Cossy: YOU STOLE THIS OFF BEN!
Owl: But I..I...he...urgh...I
Owl: GAH! THEY GOT ME!
Cossy: I’ll go put this back in its place
Phosphorus: DAMN! I thought I finally had one!
Fortux: Hey guys, what goes on!
Phosphorus and Cossy: Fortux!
Fortux: Happy Birthday bro!
Phosphorus: Thanks man!
Phosphorus: Awesome Fortux gave me one of those collectible minifigure do hickkies!
Cossy: OPEN IT OPEN IT OPEN IT!
Phosphorus: Ok, but you can’t see me open it
Cossy: AW come on!
(As Phosphorus rips it open Cossy tries to see what it is)
Cossy: did you get the Sumo?
Phosphorus: Nope
Cossy: The diver?
Phosphorus: That’s not even in series 3!
Cossy: Oh right...The elf?
Phosphorus: N... WHAT THE!
Cossy: what?
Phosphorus: I got the Stig!?
Cossy: What the! ...We’ll I guess Top Gear was right!
Phosphorus: Huh?
Cossy: Didn’t you see last night’s episode?...
Cossy: Some say he actually Sh*t’s bricks! (You know like the saying) Some also say that Sean Kenney is the Stig! And some say he is the 17th minifigure in collectible series 3! All we know is, He’s called the Stig!...
Cossy: Well that’s what Top Gear said last night, so I guess they’re right!
Phosphorus: Ha, when weren’t they right!
Cossy: HAHA true that! Hey lift up his visor, see if it is Sean!
Phosphorus: OH good idea!
Phosphorus: Um...I think they were wrong...
Cossy: Yeah...
Raxonax: HI DO SO!
Cossy: Hey Raxonax! Speaking Japanese are we?
Raxonax: We we
Phosphorus: Um...
Raxonax: And for your present I have for you the latest in Japanese awesomeness!
Phosphorus and Cossy: OHH!!!
Raxonax: It’s called, A MUNCH TURTLE!!! (I’ll post this little guy later :D)
Phosphorus and Cossy: He’s so cute!
(Phosphorus bends over and calls to the Munch Turtle)
Phosphorus: Come here little Munch Munch!
(The Munch turtle looks at Raxonax and Phosphorus then...)
(...Attacks Raxonax)
Raxonax: AH GET IT OFF!!!
Phosphorus: Huh...
Munch Turtle: HEHEHE
Cossy: you alright?
Raxonax: I forgot to mention that they are also insane killer animals...urgh...
(Raxonax leaves as Shadowflame arrives)
Shadowflame: Hey guys! I got you some pressies!
Phosphorus: Oh sweet! Thanks bro!
Shadowflame: Anytime! I’ll help you put em in the present room Cossy!
Cossy: Cheers!
(Shadowflame helps Cossy and he leaves, Cossy returns as A.D and Jordan 2444 arrive)
Phosphorus: Hey guys!
Jordan: Hey
A.D: afternoon!
Jordan: We brought you presents!
Jordan: I got you the coolest weapon ever! A lightsaber!
Phosphorus: AWESOME!
A.D: You call that a weapon?
A.D: This is a weapon!
Jordan: It is?
A.D: It’s Ben’s flick knife, He’ll post it soon, but It PWNS your lightsaber!
Jordan: Pfft!
(The two of them give Phosphorus there presents and leave as Galaxus enters)
Galaxus: Afternoon guys!
Cossy: Hey Galaxus! How you doing!
Galaxus: Great! And Phosphorus, I got you a...
Galaxus: YO YO!
Phosphorus: I do love me a good YO YO!
Phosphorus: Look I’m walking the Rahi!
Cossy: HAHA!
Phosphorus: Now I’m around...
Phosphorus: ...Spherus Magna!
Cossy: URGH!
Phosphorus: Oops!
Phosphorus: Sorry buddy, I didn’t think I’d hit ya!
Cossy: It’s all good bro, It just seems I always get hurt in these things...
Galaxus: So Cossy, what’s your present to Phosphorus?
Phosphorus: YUS another Self MOC!
Cossy: But I finished my Self MOC wave
Phosphorus: Oh...
Cossy: But here’s my latest creation!
Galaxus and Phosphorus: OOOHHH!!!
Volometix: TOA, They must die!
Phosphorus: SWEET! Too bad I can’t keep him...
Galaxus: Um I think it said it wanted to kill us...
Volometix: Charging laser...
Galaxus: Um...
Cossy: Don’t worry It’ll all be ok, I got the shut down codes... Volometix, Shut down!
Volometix...Make me...
Cossy: Oh I thought that would work
Galaxus: RUN!
(Cossy and Galaxus leave, but Phosphorus and Volometix stay behind)
Phosphorus: You look really cool! You know what would make you even cooler!
Volometix: What?
Phosphorus: If you could dance!
Volometix: Don’t make me fire my laser at you!
Phosphorus: If I can dance so can you, just watch!
(Phosphorus starts brake dancing as Volometix watches)
Phosphorus: And BAM! That how it’s done! Now your turn!
Volometix:...No
Phosphorus: Just ruin my fun...
Happy Birthday man ;)
I'm not sure if this was my best party, let me know what you thought of it :D Also I'll say this now, and with every party, I need a weeks notice before I can throw you a party, otherwise it'll be late :/ anyway thanks for viewing :D
ALSO I PROMISE THAT MY NEXT POST WILL BE A STORY REBORN CHAPTER 5 AFTER THAT I'LL POST VOLOMETRIX :D
Don't forget to rate and comment!
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May 11, 2011 |
:D Sounds brilliant Nick! I can't wait ;) |
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I just finished your birthday party Its has the most pictures I have ever taken for one MOC, like, 40 and it is not just some regular "here is your present which in reality you ca not really have." it is a little bit like that battle one. |
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May 10, 2011 |
It wasn't a contest, there were 10,000 of them randomly put into Star Wars sets at the time, I never found one :/ But I got it off ebay for 80 bucks :D It came in the packet and I know it's real because somebody who works for lego (Old friend of mine from America) checked it out for me :D |
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May 8, 2011 |
The real deal? Did you buy it online or did you actually win the contest?? |
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May 7, 2011 |
Thanks guys! And no Legofreak! It's the real deal :D And I kinda took apart the turtle :'( I don't know why I didn't take pictures :/ Thanks for commenting bro ;) |
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May 7, 2011 |
Dude! I can't believe I didn't look at this before! And I was in it! Awesome! Is that a real Gold C-3PO or is just a plastic replica? I'm guessing it's plastic. LOL! I love Top Gear! XD Stig! XD Say...when are you going to post the turtle? Hehe..."Make me!" XD Nice party man! :) |
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April 12, 2011 |
I own the same Lightsaber, It came with a small Darth maul figure. I still have it! Good comic by the way |
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March 31, 2011 |
Thanks a billion everyone! You helped get this on the Explore page :D I couldn't have done it without you ;) |
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March 28, 2011 |
Thanks again everyone, Master N, I don't really think that saying, "Some say he actually 'dangs' bricks" would have worked, like I said I kinda had to otherwise it wouldn't have worked, again I'm sorry, I'm Australian, We do that there :/ Still thanks for commenting :D I'll do your birthday next Feburary :D And mines on the 28th of May :D |
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March 27, 2011 |
BEEP! BEEP! Language alert! Other than the language it was good. And no, you dont have to put a swear word in a joke just to make it work. Use DANG!!!! Instead of that. Also, like Skrall Razor said, can my self-moc be in the next b-day moc? And if you wanted to know, my birthday is early february. When is your birthday? You deserve a good party! |
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March 27, 2011 |
Thanks everyone ;) Sorry Skrall Razor, I'll put ya in next time ;) |
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March 27, 2011 |
Shadavax: I am not included :( And my birthday is in May too :) |
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March 26, 2011 |
Volometix is epic. |
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March 26, 2011 |
Thanks everyone ;) Ben, Glad to see you like the Stig joke ;) and it's funny, both me and my parents birthday is in may and my bro's is in Novemeber, so I know how you feel, I'll do a speacil for you bro ;) Sorry Zeke, the joke wouldn't have really worked without that, I didn't want to put it in, sorry I did, It's my Australianess we always swear down here :P S.T.S Sure :D |
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March 26, 2011 |
Hey Ben can I be in the next party. |
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that's a lot of self-mocs. great job. however I didn't like the language. I mean come on man we are Christians. We lead others to Christ not crude comedy. |
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March 26, 2011 |
Ha! That Stig joke was awesome! Top Gear FTW! Unfortuanately, my birthday's in November...Dang it...Ah, well. Still really awesome party for Phos! |
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Chaos Master March 25, 2011 |
lol nice late b-day party! |
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Cheesy Q March 25, 2011 |
"some say that he's a nuclear experiment gone wrong, others say that he only eats cheese. All we know is, he's the Stig's american cousin." Picture a really big guy in a Stig costume walking out of a trailer. That is a real Top gear quote by the way. Just in case if you didn't know. |
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S.E.D. (The Editor) March 25, 2011 |
Nice b-day, much better than mine. And thanks for not putting Gallitor in, he doesn't go to party's. |
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S.E.D. (The Editor) March 25, 2011 |
Oh who's next b-day is next? I think mine! April 3 is my B-day. |
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S.E.D. (The Editor) March 25, 2011 |
@Peter Crasher: Sorry, i didn't know. Well that means your B-day is next!!!!! |
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S.E.D. (The Editor) March 25, 2011 |
It's not that i never want him in any, but if you don't feel like taking pics of him at B-days thats fine. In other words, it's completely your choice. Your 2 Self-MOC will be up soon :) |
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March 25, 2011 |
Ok new list...
Next) Komart April 2nd
After) S.E.D April 3rd
After After) Oblivious April 13th
After that) Zupharo April 15th
Ok I'm sent for next month :P |
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March 25, 2011 |
april 13th |
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March 25, 2011 |
Thanks S.E.D, I'll probably have him in the next B-day :D And wait 2 Self MOC's! :D I can't wait :D |
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March 25, 2011 |
Thanks so much everyone :D Ok so the next party list goes
Next) Komart April 2nd
After) S.E.D April 3rd
After that) Zupharo April 15th
Ok I'm sent for next month :P
And Thanks for commenting guys ;) Callan, I promise I'll put you in the next :D S.E.D Do you never want Gallitor at my parties then? If you don't that's cool :D Jareroden, I'll be putting ya in the next one with Callan then :D Glad you like it Phosphorus :D I can't wait to see your Cossy, please take your time :D And yes it is one of 10,000 Golden C 3PO's from years back :D I'll be checking out your new Zupharo, Zupharo :P Yeah Nick, Sean gave me four Rotor's that I took apart to make everyone :P Thank a million Cody and Owl :D I won't be able to post instructions for the Munch turtle, but when I post him I'll get some shots that show how to build him :D Ok Oblivious, you Callan and Jareroden will be in the next :D How did you know S.T.S :P and Nice quote Cheesy :P |
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Nice b-day,there is a reason Destrin wasn't there,and it is because he was shot by a laser from Volometix,but survived:D
PS can Destrin be in the next one. |
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March 25, 2011 |
i want to be in the next 1! |
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March 25, 2011 |
i want to be in the next 1! |
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March 25, 2011 |
HEHEHEHEHEHE. Stealing from you was so easy! Owls are the ninjas of birds. Great Job! you have to post instructions on the Munch Turtle! He's so CUTE! |
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March 25, 2011 |
The bit with the Stig was amazing. You shall be honored for your brilliance. :) |
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March 25, 2011 |
XD |
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March 25, 2011 |
LOVE IT!!! LOL!! I love the part were he is like "look at me I am walking the rahi now I'm around spherus magna. and the new guy looks great! I think your pocket sean it only seams to be producing black and orange! there.s no other explanation how you could fit A.D. , Phos, and volomet-whatever in the same MOC!! |
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March 25, 2011 |
Lol you can now finish lego star wars XP and cossy my birthdays the 15 of april, could you please throw me a party? oh and ill be putting up an epic update on Zupharo using his new color scheme, hope you like him :D |
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March 25, 2011 |
Funny! XD |
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March 25, 2011 |
Also is that one of those super rare solid gold C3PO's for a little while back? |
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March 25, 2011 |
favorite line :'Kenaz: That means nothing, it mine and will always be mine...But it's now Pho’s' WOWZA and Lolz at the same time.
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March 25, 2011 |
Awesome!!!!! Thank you so so very very very much. I think the best present though was 100 likes on Phosphorus!!!!! I half way done cossy. Sorry he's talking so long i'm making him completely custom. |
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March 25, 2011 |
@ S.E.D. The Editor: Um, my birthday is at April 2 so that means I would have a birthday special before you S.E.D. |
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March 25, 2011 |
Where's me? :P |
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March 25, 2011 |
Nice birthday special. BTW, I realized that my birthday is going to be on the Saturday after this week so could you do one for me? |
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March 25, 2011 |
Nice! Happy Birthday Pho :) |
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March 25, 2011 |
What? How come I'm never invited to these parties! XD Oh well, Happy REALLY LATE birthday Phos! :D |
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