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"This may be my last chance"
Irgendwo im Nirgendwo.
About this creation
MOCAthalon 2011
Team: Inglorious ABStards
Category: Lost In space




Day One: We were on our way to the base on R-0012. Something hit us, I don't know what. We crashed on this planet.....I can't even tell if it's planet, is it a moon, a meteorite? ...Looks like I'm the last of us, the only survivor....Freddy is dead, Charlie just died....The ship? Total loss, no chance to escape. Half of the inventory is burned, maybe it will last for ten days. I have no idea if I can survive outside. There is an atmosphere, but what kind of substances are there? The measuring device is broken, just like the radio devide. I can get through to anyone....




Day two: There's no other way. I have to get into my spacesuit and explore the environment. I've heard of populated planets in the outer sector......if this is the outer sector.


Good news. I've left the crashed ship and I'm still alive. Everything I can see is desert. Oh and I'm kind of flying, low gravity. The planet has to be smaller. I'm going to go a little further now....





Day three: I've explored the south area...I couldn't find anyhting. I hope there's some thing in the north....Otherwise I'm dead.


Hey! There is something! Am I hallucinating? I can't say what it is, it's about 300 meters away.


This may be my last chance.




It's definitely no illusion. Yet I don't know what it is. I assume it's a building, it doesn't look like something made by nature. To be honest, it reminds me of a fuelling station.


There seems to be a huge pipe...If this had a use, it's probably abandoned


There is a second curved pipe, filled with something green or yellowish...






There are two capsules around the building. They look like eggs of insects....Maybe they are tanks or energy cells. A cable connects one of them to the building.


I's made of a material I've never seen before....stable, but no metal, no plastics, strange color.



Wait, what was that! Something moved!
Oh my God....Help!

.. SSHHHHHRRR..ZZRRRR..FFTFF...........................Krrrreee...



END



I hope you like it!

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Comments

 I like it 
  April 2, 2011
Great narration! Truly enjoyed it! 4/5.
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  April 2, 2011
Strange color indeed :)
Louis K.
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Cligra ?
  April 1, 2011
Excellent build, good story.
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  April 1, 2011
ztt...
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  March 31, 2011
Hu, creepy! The combination of story and images turns out great.
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  March 30, 2011
This works well on so many fronts, Louis K. You have a gripping story, your MOCs match the mood of the story, and it has that sinister ending that leaves you hanging...like Parrington Levens, you'd also do well in writing science fiction stories.
 I like it 
  March 30, 2011
Congrats on the perfect score, well deserved!~H
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  March 30, 2011
Great work on this, wonderful build!
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  March 29, 2011
Perfect score!
 I like it 
  March 29, 2011
>> 5 points <<
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  March 29, 2011
I did like it. 5 points.
  March 28, 2011
Score = 5
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  March 28, 2011
Nice! Good use of those old Mars Mission pieces. Your score = 5
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  March 28, 2011
Great story and nice build to back it up! 5 points ~ Chris.
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  March 28, 2011
Fantastic work!
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  March 28, 2011
Excellent !!! the end is very cool as the last picture !!! super cool !!
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  March 28, 2011
Definately an eerie ending! Love the shape and color scheme of the alien whatever-you-call-it. Great parts usage throughout.
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  March 27, 2011
Nice job, its very mysterious.
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  March 27, 2011
the narrative really adds to the mystery. The rare colors look great too.
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  March 27, 2011
WOW! I love this! nice job!
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  March 27, 2011
A lot of great element uses here.
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  March 27, 2011
ha, nice dude!
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  March 27, 2011
Mister Potter didn't have his key...
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  March 27, 2011
Creepy story and excellent build!
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  March 27, 2011
Very nice build and story, Louis!
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  March 27, 2011
Oh I am digging thing. Love those SandPurple tube holders. Nice use of them
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  March 27, 2011
!!! Life on Mars ! awesome, where did I put those parts I wonder
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  March 27, 2011
'...And in other news, a spaceman has been found dead outside an abandoned fuelling station. The victim was discovered missing an arm and with a large gash in his suit. We go now to the scene of the incident.....Oh, it seems the correspondent has just been killed too...' =P
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  March 27, 2011
Sand purple...I've never seen it look better! I really dig the capsules full of strange green egg like objects (vague, yet unmistakably menacing!). Good narrative. Attack!
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  March 27, 2011
Irgendwo im nirgendwo^^ Ich mag das letzte Bild, sehr schön. Und gruselig...
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  March 27, 2011
Very weird and very cool!
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  March 27, 2011
Very nice machinery and technical stuff, but the landscape could use a rock or a hill. Maybe some plants?
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  March 27, 2011
Wow, thats awesome Louis :D Rare colors rule!
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  March 27, 2011
ooohhh... Creepy. Nice work Louis!
 
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