Quoting Baron Von Ben ~
Very nice! There are definitely some really great aspects to him, but there are some places deserving of more armor and detail (the back, specifically. Maybe you could add something, like wings?), Oh, and about the pictures them selves: You should to get to a place where there is natural light, but not from behind, it causes over exposure and puts most of the MOC in shadow. Also, you may want to get something like a bedsheet or large piece(s) of white paper for a clean background; it helps keep the focus on the MOC and bring out the details.
For starters, thanks for commenting. Secondly, Dalta has wings i just didnt include them because this was to really serve as just a quick and rushed update. V2 with clearer and more pictures can be found here
http://mocpages.com/moc.php/259689. I just changed a few things between versions 2 and 3 so i didnt include alot of pictures.