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The Demon Within: chapter 8
Last chapter Nitro was captured by the toa on false accusations of mass murder but later escaped with the help of his friends, cheesy, 244, and owl. They are now in a remote alley way, and the three new friends are explaining a few things.
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this chapter is the shortest tso far but has a ton of dialogue.


*ten minutes after the last chapter ended*
Nitro: we owe you guys a lot, thank you so much.
244: you are welcome, we could not let the toa put you to death, and we need you to help us.
Nitro: with what?
Owl: we heard you say that the makuta will attack.
Nitro: and you believe me?
Cheesy: we know so….. Because it’s already happened


Nitro, Cossy, and Zukon: WHAT!!!!
Nitro: we saw no signs of battle or a struggle when we entered!
244: The invasion happened months ago, it was a silent invasion and the matoran do not even know it has happened. The makuta came weeks ago and silently put our leaders under their control. The makuta created a new breed of Kraata that are sentient, just as smart as the average toa. The Makuta put the Kraata into their heads and instantly went under their control, the Kraata, being a part of the makuta’s essence, made the victim come under the control of the makuta that the kraata belong to. Over time more and more people have been infested, Most of the toa too. They tried to infest us but we escaped. They declared us enemies of the republic of New Atero and we have been living in hiding since. We are some of the few toa that are un-infested. The toa sent you on that mission to Darkus Magnus so they could capture you. When you came back you walked right into their hands. But the matoran would have been angry if they killed you for no reason so they accused you of murder and gave you a mock trial. We knew that we needed your help if we want to free the toa.


*the toa are taken back by this news*
Cossy: everybody?... even my friends?….. Even my family?
Cheesy: everybody.


Owl: we need to destroy the Kraata but only Makuta know how. And I doubt that the makuta will tell us.
Zukon: I have heard that there are rogue makuta that left the brotherhood maybe he can tell us. But he is a legend he may or may not exist.
Nitro: but they say that he lives in another dimension, a dimension between dimensions. How can we find him?
Cossy: we could try to get to a kanohi Olmak* but the only two in existence are being used and I doubt that we can get our hands on one of them.
*Mask of dimensional gates*


Nitro: no, there is another way; there is a weapon, a sword that can open gates into other dimensions when it is plunged into the ground. But… they say that the earth has claimed it,


they say that it is the pits of Garun, in the mines of gallitok, on the other side of the planet, in the grey mountains.
Owl: then that is where we must go, to the grey mountains, to find the sword so we can hopefully get the secret to freeing the toa!


Nitro: then this is our quest, we might live or die! But it WILL be completed! Let us go……. to our DESTINY!

Hope you liked this chapter,sorry it was so short, and for the dramatic thingy at the end, but I was feeling in a dramatic mood when I wrote this. ;I
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It might be awhile till I post the next chapter, my next posy will probably be my matoran of oxygen for the periodic table contest (if I am still in)
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this is Nick Nitro Brick singing off, please RATE AND COMMENT!!!



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 I made it 
  April 18, 2011
Quoting Legofreak2444 ~ BTW, Are you going to post Jordan 2444 sometime?
what!! I already posted him along time ago he was one of the very first self-MOCs I posted!! juts look in my self-MOC folder
 I like it 
  April 18, 2011
BTW, Are you going to post Jordan 2444 sometime?
 I like it 
  April 18, 2011
Sweetness! BTW, it's still 2444 not 244. :P
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Chaos Master
  April 12, 2011
now they have a quest...epic chapter, the stakes are higher than ever and the suspense is great. can't wait.
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  April 12, 2011
and you find me!
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  April 12, 2011
Quoting Nick Nitro Brick love it! do you have any tips when it comes to building bionicle vehicles I am building one right now and I thought you could help :D [...] and you for letting me join the gettha nui group :D
So as far as tips go, avoid building too big of a vehicle. A bike, quad, or trike works best. Anything bigger is a real parts hog and will end up under detailed unless you have a huge supply of parts. Other than that, just figure out what you want it to look like, find some good chassis designs (Bohrok bodies work well) and armor the heck out of it. :) And no problem with the Ghetta Nui group, we need some new blood to keep things moving.
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  April 12, 2011
"Cossy: everybody?... even my friends?….. Even my family?" I have a family :P Anyway, Another brilliant chapter bro ;) I can't wait for more :D Oh and you can always some how incorporate Cossy once being a Makuta :D Anyway, even if you don't that's all good, Keep up the great work ;)
 I like it 
  April 11, 2011
Great MOCs! Check this out if you have time... http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/262969
 I made it 
  April 11, 2011
just so everybody knows I am going to try to only have twenty chapters until I start a new series but I do not know if that will work out I have only written the script up to chapter ten
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  April 11, 2011
XD it's okay bro, I have no bad thoughts about seeing your other MOC's :D
 I made it 
  April 11, 2011
Quoting LegoBob 123 Awesome! BTW I can't help but asking (and I don't mean to be annoying) but when is Morack gonna be up? Sorry if this annoys you :)
OMG! YOU ARE SO ANNOYING!!! I AM TRYING OKAY!!! GAA!! GEEZ! I MEAN HOW HARD IS IT TO WAIT!!!!! LOL JK! do not worry he will be up probably next week sorry for the wait! :(
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  April 11, 2011
Awesome! BTW I can't help but asking (and I don't mean to be annoying) but when is Morack gonna be up? Sorry if this annoys you :)
 
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