Quoting cyberfrank 2010 hi james! so you tried for story making? here is my opinion! your main pic is awesome! some blurry pics, it s cool how the bad guy looks, but, the police looks like bad guys too, it would have been better to have them in a classic uniform, the prison cell does nt look like it s in your police station, and it looks bare a little, the bad guy s scorpion was promising enough, but, you decided to park it... you should have started this story with a bang! it s also disapointing that you have your city as the greatest scene set, but, don t really use it! your city was nt designed to do stories, and it shows, i m doing a serie on building a STORY city, with a building technique called PANEL BUILDING, it will explain how to build an inter-creator city, compatible with Cybercity, so welcome neighbor! lol! give me news when you can james!