Here is my entry for round 3 of The Period bionicle contest :D Enjoy ;)
About this creation
Occupation: Ex-Dark Hunter, Now a Toa
Element: Phosphorus and Fire
Power: Akarta has the ability to coat any part of her body in flames (Weapons, claw, hand, whole bodt etc.) This is very helpful in fights
The Shadowed One's Description: "Akarta is a valuable asset to the Dark Hunters. She is quick, fast and strong, All the qualities I look for in an assassin. But yet she is hidding something! If she ever betrays us and returns to the Toa, she will die a horrible, painful death!"
Title(s): Monster, Assassin, Toa, Hero, Traitor
Mask: Mask of Stealth (Carved into the shape of a Rahkshi mask)
Weapon(s): Fire blade, Dagger, Claw
Story: Akarta was a Ta-Matoran, She was a friend of Kaoto, After Kaoto turned into the form he is now she went on a quest to find a Toa stone. The two of them had always had competitions to be better than eachother, and now that he had powers, she wanted to be a Toa, She went deep into the deserts of Po-Koro, and eventually found the stone she was looking for. As soon as she found it she transformed herself. On her way back she ran into Mimic, a Dark Hunter. Mimic had been stalking Akarta since she had left Ta-Koro and he wanted to help her. The two trained for days in the desert and when they were done, Mimic forced her to join the Dark Hunters, she did. After many missions she decided to leave, because the Dark hunters just weren't what she wanted. As she was leaving Odina for one last time Mimic found her and told her The Shadowed One requested her presence. She told Mimic she was leaving, this angered Mimic, so he tried to stop her! After a small fight Mimic cut her hand off and let her go. She later went back to Ta-Koro and got Kaoto to repair her hand, turning it into a claw, She later trained with Kiina and became a Toa
Now let's begin :D
Here she is :D I think this time I'm going to get better than second last, espeacilly because I was working on her all day :D She does have that assassin look too her, not too Toa like, but once you read her bio, you'll understand :D Not to mention I wanted to give her that, Evil but not evil look, if you know what I mean :P
Akarta: Taste my claws!
Here are her legs, I gave her a skirt too :D
Her feet... Moving on
A closer look at her upper legs and her skirt :D I'm quite happy with how this turned out :D
And now a back shot, She can put her blade on her back too :D Oh and I know it looks like she's about to fall over, but she does blance well :D
Her behind :D YAY for greebles :D
Her chest, skinny the way it shoulder be :D And her female parts credit goes to Gringat for those :P
Her mask :D Somewhat evil since she was a Dark Hunter :D
Probably my favourite part, Her custom hair :D I think this is my best use of HF spikes :D
Her claw arm :D I'm very happy with how this looks :)
Her shoulders, Again thanks Gringat, parts of this are from you, and some from me :D
Her arm from behind, some wires at the top too :D
And that Hero Factory Blade wasn't just there for show, It's were she holds her dagger :D
*FACEPALM* And a look at here greebled hand :D
Akarta:*Sigh* Ben why did you come second last!
Phosphorus: Hey there! Why don't we play the shoulder game!
Akarta: How do you play?
Phosphorus: Easy! I just count your shoulders
Phosphorus: One Shoulder!
Phosphorus: Two Shoulders!
Phosphorus: *Awkard Cough*
Akarta: That is just sad!
Callan: Hello hot stuff!
Akarta: Oh God more!?
Callan: Mandura doesn't like me so, CHECK OUT THIS GUNS! BOOM! BOOM! FIREPOWER!
Callan: URGH! I guess Mandura is better! Urgh!
Akarta: So many lovers, so little time...
Cheesy Q: What the heck happened here?
Akarta: Hello Handsome!
Cheesy Q: W... WHAT! B...But I like Larillia! Not you!
Akarta: Let's go beautiful!
Cheesy Q: NO! GUYS HELP ME!
Callan: What the!
Phosphorus: HUH! Why does Cheesy get all the babes! I though he was an anti Chick magnet! (Hey that's what his profile says!)
Callan: I have no idea! Lucky duck!
Just some harmless fun, I meant no offence to anyone!
Akarta: Farewell! Judges, judges away! And good luck to everyone else! Now! I'm off to give Cheesy a night he'll never forget!
Cheesy: SOMEONE HELP ME!
Akarta: Don't listen to him! Goodbye guys!
I hope you like her!
Don't forget to rate and comment!
Till next time ;)
epic and i love her but... Thats definaly NOT the mask of steath... but who cares keegax wears the mask of steath but i use it as the mask of combustion (soon to be fused with the legendary mask of creation to become the mask of creation and combustion as revealed in my comic im going to do when ive built enough bionicles XD) is awesome... period.
Much better the kaoto. Like kaoto I find the moc does not really fit the criteria being that she looks a bit less like a Toa the but rest makes up for it. The legs are creative and i'm glad to see a skirt but the torso has a few problems for me. I find it dare i say skinny, even for my standards. The silver nuva shoulders have a bit of colour clash. The head is very creative and the hair looks great. The best part is the arms thought. Overall good job.
Brilliant design! one problem though....the mask of stealth is silver..... although it easily could be painted red, (and carved to look like a rahkshi maks) it still doesnt make much sense....sorta....idk
Well... Cossy is the leader of two teams, the Toa LOTEM are a team of self MOCs that protect Spherus Magna from future threats, so yeah, Chessy I know but still! But it is mainly for A Story Reborn :D And I will make an actual team for Cossy in the near future :D And thanks Dark Fury :D
nice! lols at the end. is she a part of the toa Lotem? oh, i've been meaning to ask, are the Toa Lotem gunna be made by you, or are you gunna do that really cheap thing that everyone does by making a team out of self mocs?
I guess, but it would still look awkard without them, It does make both me and other MOCers define that it is a female. You can have a skinny guy with long hair too! And thanks a million Kevin ma bro ;)
Thanks guys! And sure I can Nick, I'm gonna be putting more Self MOC's in my Randomness from now on, You might not be next, but I will put you in soon :D HAHA good one Peter :P And Babism, I'm gonna keep using them. And like Cheesy said S.E.D, girls kinda need them! Anyway thanks for commenting bro ;) And thanks everyone else :D
say, cossy? next time you do some funny little story in one of your MOCs please, if you would, put me in there? you do not have to if you do not want to but it would be nice. so sorry if this bugs you.
Niiiice. I'm thinking about using a similar thigh design for a later Kenaz, it'll really work well with what I'm thinking. And also, nice work pushing the 'Pages rules on that last panel. I don't know if that's admirable or just devilish :D
Im up at 2 am to see this and im glad it doesnt disapoint! Her skirt has no front or back! 0_0 Oh well, mine was super short anyway :P
You're gonna do well. Have you actually made a female with an actual mask or a bit more feminine though?