"This is one of the best CYOAs on MOCpages! The story is gripping and getting better by the moment! I am always looking forward to the next episode! "-Sam Knavel
"You build great, and you're good at story telling, I'd like your story to end up at Cybercity if possible"-Cyberfrank
"Island Locked is a classic tale of survival. The survivors of a devastating crash must now rely on themselves, as well as the other castaways to stay alive. Each and every one of them were on the plane for a reason."-Eric Mickle.
"One of the best survival stories out there"-Night Hawk_
"Nice job, you've got some very inspiring work here!"-Decimator the NukeMaster
Well, here we are, on to episode 10! this season should last at least 4 more episodes.
"Are you okay?" asked Thomas, "Is something bothering you?"
"No, well, actually yes. I need to tell you something.... do you have time, I think someone here would overhear," she replied.
"Sure," he said with a smile, "I understand, I'll be ready soon."
Thomas walked over to where Caleb was.
"Hey, me and Maria are going to go on a walk, if Dillpickle wakes, Christian knows what to do."
And so, Thomas and Maria set off.
"So, what I was going to say is, I'm not who you think I-" Maria began.
But she only got that far,"Look at that!" interrupted Thomas
There,laying on it's side, was an old pickup truck.
"Look at that!" said Thomas.
There where plants and vines growing on it.
"Come on!" Thomas said, grabbing Maria's hand, "Let's get everyone!"
Maria was reluctant to hold his hand.She had brought him out here not because she had feelings for him, but because he was the doctor, and would never hurt her; even if she had told him who she really was. But, never the less, she let him lead her back to the camp.
Thomas went straight to Christian.
"Hey, watch Dillpickle, me and most of the people are going to the woods, we'll be back soon. Don't ask why," he said.
Maria quickly asked Caleb if he would stay with Christian and guard the camp, and he agreed.
Soon, the rest of the camp (besides those who where off with the radio, or getting supplies) where gathered around the truck.
"We need to get rid of these trees," said the pilot.
Soon, he had returned with the ax, and began to hack at the trees.
Then, several of the men tried to push it over.
They soon realized that they needed to cut the other trees.
Then they tried again.
With considerable effort, the rolled the car back onto its weals
Then, Thomas got in it
NOTE(sorry about the sideways picture)
He started the car, and pressed on the gas. To everyone's surprise, it worked!
Soon, the pickup was driven back with Thomas driving, and Maria and Bob on the back.
The rest of the day was peaceful, with people riding in the car, chatting, and eating a good, cooked meal.
But then Caleb called a meeting.
Everyone gathered around the pickup, watching him.
"Look, I'm glad we found this car, and that we've already had so much fun with it, and I hate to ruin this peaceful day, but this car means more than one thing."
No one spoke, and he continued. "That Pickup, we where meant to find it. You see, if a car was left in the jungle long enough to have plants growing on it, the battery would dead and the gas would have leaked out. You see, the other people on this Island put it there, for us to find, I think they may be listening to us right as we speak."
People began to talk all at once.
"STOP!" shouted Caleb, "STOP, there is something even more urgent."
Within 10 seconds, everyone was quiet.
"I examined the car myself, and I noticed something odd.The clock had the wrong time.But I figured that if it had been in the jungle, it could have easily have happened. But as I watched, I realized that the time was counting down, not up. Right now it says it has 3 hours left. People, this car is a BOMB."
TO BE CONTINUE.....
Well, thats it, sorry no choices yet. And the next episode will either be about the people getting medicine or the radio people.
Well, I hope you enjoyed! Tell me what you think!
well structured, nice color scheme, movement in location, good momentum, good show mc! it seems to me it would nt make a big difference to state this as happening on alta-5, just words for now... very decent show mc!