A Story Reborn Chapter 7 NEW FRIENDS, AND OLD ONES
About this creation
Last time we were with our friends they had established a new friendship with Malum and started discussing future plans for the Toa. The first thing the Toa decided to do was to find a way to activate to giant prototype body so that Mata Nui would be able to destroy Makuta sooner. The Toa decided it was best that two groups go out and try to determine a way to activate the body. The first group would scout around the lower areas of the bodyís waist and the second group would go slightly higher towards his chest. As we speak the Toa are about to start their mission, but who knows what will happen to the Toa!
(Cossy, Raxonax and Fortux all get off the Thornatus)
Cossy: Alright guys, weíll stay here, when youíre done looking around come back and meet us here!
Mata Nui: Good Luck, I hope we find what were looking for!
Mata Nui: Farewell brothers!
Cossy: See ya!
(Raxonax waves goodbye and Gresh does the same, Kiina then starts to drive off)
Cossy: Ok guys, remember why weíre here, we gotta...
(Raxonax interrupts Cossy)
Raxonax: Search the ruined body for any hints or clues as to how we can work this thing!
Cossy: Uh, Yeah, exactly!
Fortux: So, letís begin!
(Everyone starts searching, hoping somebody will find something)
Raxonax: WAIT A MINUTE! Oh no, wait itís just some dirt, never mind!
Cossy: Man this thing is huge!
Fortux: It sure is a work of art! I imagine that it had to have been created by the Great Beings! I see no other way it could have been so beautiful!
Fortux: Say Cossy, Iíve got a question for you!
Fortux: When you guessed my name before, how on earth did you get it right the first time? That seems too unreal to be true!
(Cossy continues to look at the robotic body)
Cossy: Oh, um... like I said, it was a... really, really good guess!
Fortux: Oh come on now! How on earth could you have guessed that!
Cossy: It...Itís complicated Fortux! If I told you, you would think Iím crazy!
Fortux: ... Really! Not as crazy as all that stuff thatís been happening on your planet that we knew nothing about!
Cossy: I... I Guess...
Cossy: Now stay with me here, I... *sigh* I used to know you before you came to Bara Magna
Fortux: WHAT! Cossy, I think you might me confused! Iím a Glatorian! I was born and raised here, in the Black Spike Mountains! I was not born on your planet! You must be mistaken!
Cossy: This is why I need you to stay with me buddy! Now no more interruptions this time!
Fortux: I suppose, but it better start making sense!
Cossy: It will! Ok, Now...
(Cossy and Fortux turn toward Raxonax)
Cossy: What is it?
Fortux: Yeah whatís going on?
Raxonax: B... B... BIG!
Cossy: What the!?
MEANWHILE WITH MATA NUI AND THE OTHERS!
(Ackar stays on the Thornatusís Turret and keeps guard, while the others search the damaged body)
Kiina: Man this part seems more damaged than any other part Iíve seen!
Ackar: Agreed! Nothing new Mata Nui!
Mata Nui: Good to hear!
(Time passes as nobody talks and every speeches the ruins in silence)
(Ackar Breaks the silence)
Ackar: Anybody got a good story to pass the time?
Kiina: I got nothing!
Gresh: Found anything Mata Nui?
Mata Nui: Sadly no, hopefully the others will find something.
(Gresh walks over towards Kiina)
Gresh: See anything?
Kiina: Just rocks and broken armour!
Gresh: Yeah, that seems to be...
(Ackar yells something before Gresh can finish his sentence...)
Ackar: HALT! State your business or Iíll shot!
???: Iíll pound ya!
????: No need for that brother! We are friends!
Kiina: How can we trust you!
????: Well, perhaps we were wrong, maybe you arenít friends!
MEANWHILE BACK WITH COSSY AND THE OTHERS!
(Three warriors emerge from a gap in the armour that the Toa hadnít searched yet)
Toa Phosphorus: What are you doing here...Wait a minute...Cossy?
Cossy: Pho! Is that you! Brother I thought you were long gone!
(All the Toa get together, happy to see each other again)
(Cossy and Phosphorus Brofist)
Cossy: Good to see your all alive, Hey there Callan! Good to see you too!
Callan: I share the pleasure! Good to see you too buddy!
Raxonax: Wait a minute! Is that who I think it is!
Raxonax: MORACK! It is you!
Morack: AH itís great to see you again buddy!
(The Toa finish talking to each other and gather around into one big group)
Cossy: So how on earth did you get here alive?
Toa Phosphorus: Well, the six of us escaped from Makuta shortly after he let all the Rahkshi out, He didnít even see it coming! He had his attention on the Rahkshi so we got out with ease!
Raxonax: Wait six of us?
Callan: Oh true, I can answer that! There were six of us who escaped at the time, but we decided it was best to spilt up, that way we could find some survivors more easily!
Fortux: That makes sense! So when will you meant up with the others?
Morack: We were meant to be meeting with them here...
Callan: ...Thatís why we were hiding in that gap, we were waiting in there!
Morack: That too, anyway, they should be here soon, theyíre probably not too far from here, probably closer to the chest of this thing!
Raxonax: This might not be good...
Cossy: Guys, I think itís best we find your friends now, they might have already meet up with ours! And they could think they are Makuta!
Callan: Good idea, letís go!
(The Toa set off to find the others)
Ackar: Take them done everyone!
Kiina: Already on it!
Mata Nui: Hold on! I donít think they are Makuta!
Toa Phosphorus: Guys, they arenít Makuta!
Owl: But they tried to kill us!
Morack: I donít blame them! How should they know who you are!
Owl: I guess...
Cossy: Anyway, We all mean no harm! We are all Toa, just from different worlds! But hey, we all want the same thing! To bring a stop to Makuta!
Davix: Agreed! Shadowflame, Owl, listen to them! They are no enemy!
Shadowflame: Thatís a relief!
Owl: Awww!!! I really wanted to kill something!
(The Toa all get together and greet each other)
Shadowflame: Good to see your not dead Cossy!
Cossy: Same to you brother!
Ackar: So, Phosphorus, you and these other Toa escaped from Makuta correct?
Toa Phosphorus: Yes we did, We got the same way the Rahkshi did! Now, I offer my small strike force to your team! Together we will stop Makuta!
Mata Nui: Good to hear!
Morack: So what do we do next? I wanna see if more of my friends are still alive!
Ackar: I suggest we all head back home before we make any new plans!
Toa Phosphorus: I have a better idea! When we left Makutaís body, we overheard Makuta and Vezon talking about where they planned on setting up base for the time they will be here. So I suggest once everyone gets home, a couple of us go on a scouting mission towards their base and see if itís well guarded or not.
Ackar: Good idea, Alright everyone, lets fit as many of us as we can on the Thornatus and weíll get us all back home! Callan and Cossy, you two can use your masks to get the rest of us home in no time at all!
Cossy and Callan: Joy...
(Mata Nui, Kiina, Ackar, Gresh, Raxonax and Morack get on the Thornatus while the others get brought back by Callan and Cossy [If you donít understand why, Cossy will use his mask of supersonic flight to fly people back, and Callan will get people on his back and run everyone back with his mask of speed])
MEANWHILE BACK WITH THE TOA
(Everyone is back at Malumís cave now. Cossy and Fortux have volunteered to scout out towards Makutaís hideout, to see if it will be easy to get into it during future missions. Cossy and Fortux are near the White Quartz Mountains and the glow of the mountains can be seen from where they are. As we speak they are heading towards their destination ...)
Cossy: Well According to Phosphorus we arenít too far from that hideout!
Fortux: Good to hear...
(The two donít talk for a bit and walk in silences towards the base)
(Then Fortux breaks the silence)
Fortux: You never really had a chance to finish what you were saying before, so I supposedly knew you?
Cossy: *Sigh* Oh right that... Even though I hate speaking of it I will...
(The two stop walking and Cossy starts to talk)
Cossy: *Sigh* So where was I?
Fortux: Something about Iím from your planet?
Cossy: Oh right, I didnít get very far, anyway, When you were just a Matoran, you were...
Fortux: Wait Matoran? Thatís an Agori right?
Cossy: *Sigh* Yes, yes it is, now, you were just a Matoran and you were on Aqua Magna, Got that?
Fortux: Can you get to the point?
Cossy: Fine but no more interruptions ok?
Cossy: Good, So On Aqua Magna, Makuta was, and still is, forcing Matoran to build a giant fortress for him to live in when he finally rules the universe, without Mata Nui, or any Toa in it. Remember, all this was before you were here on Bara Magna, probably at about the time Mata Nui arrived at Vulcanus with Metus
(Fortux nods in agreement)
Cossy: So you should have been helping to build the Fortress, with the other Matoran but you werenít, so the Rahkshi enforcers took you away for punishment, thatís when they brought you to me and Maku...
(Cossy pauses for a brief moment)
Cossy: Look Fortux, Iím sorry I canít it just brings back too many bad memories!
Fortux: You said and you and Makuta, you weren't a Maku...
Cossy: I said I donít to talk about it Fortux! *Sigh* Sorry, That was the past, and mine was... well not a good one, I hate talking about it... Iím sorry!
Fortux: I understand buddy, Tell me later!
Cossy: Glad you understand! Now Makutaís Hideout is around about...
(Cossy points towards the Black Spike Mountains)
Cossy: There! So we are close!
Fortux: Ok, letís go!
(The Toa set off)
(The two Toa continue walking, and discuss other matters...)
Fortux: I guess, but Ackar does look like a tough opponent!
Cossy: When I fought him he was tough, but I did beat him!
Fortux: Do you think him and Kiina are...
Cossy: NO WAY! They are just friends!
Fortux: I guess... Well more for me!
Cossy: HA Fortux...
(Fortux stops walking and looks up towards the sky)
Fortux: What the!
Fortux: I swear I saw something fly over us!
(Cossy looks up)
Cossy: I donít see anything...
Cossy: Itís probably just a Rahi or something, nothing to worry about! Come on, letís keep moving!
Fortux: I guess...
(As the two are about to set off...)
(...A giant shadowball hits Fortux and Cossy, and they go flying!)
(The two black out...)
(Cossy starts to get up)
Cossy: Urgh! Man that hurt!
(Cossy grabs his sword and stands up)
Cossy: Fortux, Urgh, What hit us...
Cossy: ... Fortux?
Cossy: FORTUX!... Oh crud...
Cossy: *Facepalm* URGH! Great that ĎRahií was something to worry about!
Cossy: Well I better get back home before whatever took Fortux comes back!
(Cossy returns home...)
Well thatís Chapter 7, Sorry about the wait! And sorry that this had a fair bit of text. Anyway I hope everyone whoís Self MOC I put in this one is happy and donít worry, If yours isnít here, it will be soon :D And If Fortux's Story didn't make sense, don't worry, It'll be explained in more Detail later :D Anyway next I'm gotta post Fortuxís party, Iron Legacy mission 3 and some more Dark Hunters :D
Thatís all for now!
Thanks for viewing!
Donít forget to rate and comment!
Till next time ;)
Thanks a bunch Chopper Skull! I'm glad you like Cossy's personality :D And I'm very happy to see your enjoying A Story Reborn :D Oh and JP It'll be up as soon as I can have it :D That'll will most likely be next weekend :D
am commenting as i go along so all of my thoughts will be here. First, I think Cossy is the brother of the other blue guy. Second the "B-B-Big!" part sounded wrong lol. MORE SELF MOCS FTW! Yeah that's all i can say, and Cossy's personality is cool!
Sure thing :D I'll add you :D I haven't updated it in a long time, so if I don't do it soon, I promise I will some time :D
I like it
May 12, 2011
Cossy, I have a question,I don't if this is how it works but....can I be on you best freind page? I know that we don't really interact with each other that much Mocpages wise, but is it okay or no? Because most of the people that are on your best freind page are in you favorite builder page.
you should make a sister of the skrall (they are cannon characters just so you know) you can look them up on bioniclepedia if you want and you can have them join the skrall because of my "persausion" I am a ckick magnet well they have psychic powers so I am a psycho chick magnet LOL :P
Great story! Can't wait for more! And at the scene where Phos and company meets Cossy and the rest, they where standing in the same order as the colours of a rainbow! (Red, Orange, Green, Blue, Purple.) Wonderful job!
Thanks everybody! I'm glad you liked this chapter! HAHA Good one Legobob ;) I always loved Cleverbot Chaos :P Thanks for commenting bro ;) Can't wait Callan, thanks for commenting ;) What do you mean by snowball Pure? HAHA You may or may not be right Cheesy :P Thanks Nick, I suggest you do a low angle shot looking up towards the Toa and have a blue background behind them, I hope that helps :D You'll be in soon JPfan :D I fixed that, thanks Legofreak! And you'll be in very soon :D -.- *sigh* How many times must I say this, Ben, I'm not taking Self MOC requests at the moment! Ask me in the future (When re- start my Self MOC wave) And I will, but not now! Sorry if I was mean, but I'm tired of people asking me, when I've said this like 20 times now, Thanks for understanding ;) Thanks Owen, glad you like it :D I won't be able to do your birthday since I haven't made your Self MOC Mr. Bite, if it's on when I re-start my Self MOC wave, I will :D Thanks Kane, and thanks everyone else ;)
I like it
May 1, 2011
epic chapter! i love it, it's awesome! oh yeah ben i thought i'd tell you never go to cleverbot! i told it i lived in Australia and it said that was unfortunate! then i told it legos where awesome and it didn't now what legos where! and THEN i said "Justin Beiber" out of nowhere and it siad it liked his songs! I HATE CLEVERBOT!
I like it
May 1, 2011
I WONDER who that was who was flying over. *Cough, A.D. *Cough.
I like it
S.E.D. (The Editor)
May 1, 2011
Awesome! Cant wait to see Gallitor!
I like it
May 1, 2011
Cool! Not to zoom ahead here but I wonder how Jurassica is going to enter the story! Lol, It would be funny if he randomly jumps down and knocks someone out on accident because he thought the person was evil! Anyways, Good job! Epic!
Hmm...I thought I was going to be in there, oh well...I'll have to wait for the next one. Anyway, Sweet job! The 5th to last picture's caption said 'Fortux:' when it should have said 'Cossy:'. Just a little typo. Can't wait for the next one buddy! Can't wait to see me kick someones...wait a minute...how bout, when (if) you turn into a Makuta I get to kick your butt! Ha ha! That'd be fun! :) Oh well, as long as I get to kill somebody. :P Cheers! :D
great! wonderful! I am having a bit of trouble with the next chapter of my series I wonder if you could help? I need them to be on top of a very tall building. and i have no idea how to make it look like there is sky behind them. do i need a special location or juts a photo edit? please help! BTW the chapter was great it just needs me! :P
Devon, I'm not taking requests at the moment, ask me again in the future when I re-start my Self MOC wave and I will :D And thanks Zupharo, It'll be up a lot quicker than his one was :D And Thanks L :D
Dude I love the whole story thing and you making it is even better the incorpation of others self-mocs makes it even better. so um hmm a how can I say this CAN YOU MAKE MY SELF-MOC I don't know whenever you start another self-moc wave you don't have to though I just want to be a part of this amazing story.