episode 6; clone attack! the avenger team of KODIAK corp get a warning!
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SELENA HIGH COMMANDER, CHIEF OF ARMED FORCES,
RIGHT ARM OF LORD GARGATRON;
commander, i tought i told you to re-enforce this weak point station!
surveillance tells me the faction i ESPECIALLY stipulated to eliminate...
are there!
COMMANDER;
heu, despite our best efforts, they have survived...
SELENA;
not only survived commander,
they have recovered their equipment, and it seem functional too!
and about that station...
it is a strategic emplacement!
we need this zone contained commander!...now!!!
and if you should ever encounter MR BOLT!
NICK BOLT! put him under arrest!
hanging with the METAL LEGION won t save him from my WRATH!!!
COMMANDER;
yes madam selena!
BACK AT THE STATION WITH THE AVENGERS TEAM...
SWIFT;
no GF or any armed forces in sight sgt!
SWIFT;
OH NO!!!
you guys are NEVER going to believe this!!!
SWIFT;
IT S THE GREEN CREEP AGAIN!!!
SURGIC;
you don t mean...
RUSH;
not the creep!?!
the one we shot?
SENTINEL AND TEAM FIRING; BRRAAPP BRRAAPP..
RUSH;
GO DOWN! YOU GREEN WEIRDO!!!
SURGIC;
this is weird! he does nt even have previous wounds!
SGT FORGE;
hey! you left your posts!
what is this...
SWIFT;
we can t help it sarge,
this is unreal!
SHOCKER;
man! this is the second time this guy goes down with a grin!!!
DIGIT;
with a grin?
you mean like this!?!
what does he take?
he looks altered somehow!
SWIFT;
well i d like him to STAY down this time!
so we ll see what it takes to keep him dead!
and also maybe take that grin off his face,
i ve got my knife i...
SGT FORGE;
i m no fan of butchery!
and we have no time for experiments!!!
you all left your post so get back...
ROARING TANK ENGINE SOUND...
SGT FORGE;
BATTLE STATIONS! BATTLE STATIONS!!!
ROARING CONTINUES...
BRONTO;
WE VE GOT COMPANY!!!
AND IT SOUNDS MEAN!
ROARING...
SHOCKER;
OK, NOW WE RE IN IT!!!
ROARING AND FIRING...
SHOCKER;
the bunker does nt even fire at it!
some help this equpment turn out to be...!
ROARING AND FIRING...
BRONTO;
you can t shoot me can you?
but, i can shoot YOU!!!
HIT EXPLOSION...
BRONTO;
the mad dog s down sarge!
but, i don t think it s over yet...
BRONTO;
he fatally bit our north sentinel!
i ll need support soon!
RUSH;
i m on it bronto!!!
RESTARTING ENGINE...
BRONTO;
and you... stay down!!!
FIRING...AND EXPLOSION!
ENGINE SOUND...
SWIFT;
GATORS! GATORS!
BRONTO;
i got them!
SWIFT;
if they ever let troops out,
they won t go very far!!!
FIRING INTENSIVELY...
RUSH;
AAARGH! IM PINNED DOWN!
it s a duel between the BISON and the GATOR!!!
BRONTO;
I M COMING!!!
'SWOOSH' FIRING EXPLOSION!
RUSH;
thanks bronto!
GATOR FIRING...
SWIFT;
they saw me!
BRONTO;
so did i!!!
SWOOSH...
BRONTO;
i don t like people shooting on my friends!!!
EXPLOSION...!
BRONTO;
oh, so you want some too!?!
SWOOSH...
EXPLOSION...!
DBG QUAD GATLING GUNS FIRING...BRAAAP...BRAAAAAP...
BRONTO; ALRIGHT DIGIT! YOU BROKE THE TROOP S CODE!!!
DIGIT;
yeah! about time i make myself useful on this trip!
2 MINS LATER...
QUAD GATLING FIRING...BRAAAP...BRAAAP...
BRONTO;
wow! these guys are heroic!!!
SGT FORGE;
no. stupidly conditionned, and designed!
they have no feelings, or fear,
but, their not 'programmed' for some changes on the battlefield!
changes like...their own weapons againts them!...
it s a weak point we ll have to take advantage of.
have pity for them,
and be thankful the KODIAK trains and treat you as a HUMAN!
BRONTO;
what a mess!
...i m hungry!
SGT FORGE;
ok team!
we re out of here NOW!
you wanted to know who shot us down?
...you have your answer!!!
we STILL don t have communication to KODIAC CORP!
so...we follow this railroad track!
it will lead us straight to Cybercity!!!
BRONTO;
what about the 30 foot mech?
SGT FORGE;
it s mess hall talk!
we re here for a weapon system demonstration!
SWIFT;
hey! i m not trough with greeny!
SGT FORGE;
'greeny' is something i can t explain...yet!
we have no time to 'interview' him!
i know the GF does clone experiments...
but, this is something else.
the GF soldiers are dead for good!...i think.
WHILE THE TEAM LEAVES...
GREENY;
[moaning] eeaah, haaaeeuu...
CREATOR LOG;
ok, that s it for this location ouff!
hope you guys liked it!
you ll notice this episode was over 10 pics,
and it contains no city scenes,
it s a change in direction...
some things changed since...
PANEL BUILDING,
BUILDING ALTA-5,
METAL LEGION,
more GF LIVE coop buisness friends
some things needed to be adjusted!
and i m not finished...
as in the next Cybercity episode...
2 factions, of REAL PEOPLE will meet...
THE CODIAK CORP
and
THE METAL LEGION!
stay tuned, as
i just don t know what the outcome will be!!!
Cybercity 6
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August 27, 2011 |
Désolé de ne pas avoir laissé de commentaires plus tôt mais j'avais trop de travail et quand j'ai recommencé à regarder MOCpages plus rien ne marchait ! Bref, je regarde petit à petit tous les MOCs que j'ai raté... Je ne suis pas très attiré par les scènes de bataille donc je n'ai pas vraiment apprécié cette histoire. Néanmoins, j'apprécie les véhicules et bâtiments. J'ai en particulier trouvé très sympa l'espèce de petit robot blanc que l'on voit souvent au premier plan... |
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May 31, 2011 |
this is a cool moc, I like the explosion, and the red-blue element (AMAZING building and colors) |
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May 22, 2011 |
Quoting Michael Rutherford
it s alright! thanks for the info michael!
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May 22, 2011 |
I have removed your MOC from the MLRC. Don’t take this as an insult. We were glad to have your MOC on our page for a few days, but it was not one of the 4 categories of MOC currently being displayed . This link explains what the 4 categories of MCOs currently on display are: http://www.mocpages.com/group_conversation.php?id=16812&topicid=68407
Your Metal Legion MOC is better suited to posting on this Link: http://www.mocpages.com/group.php/16277
Again, we are glad you posted your MOC on MLRC, and hope you continue to post MOCs there in the future! This clearing out of the posting list will happen about once a month.
Stay in the Metal Legion. Build! Post! Review! Attack!
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May 16, 2011 |
exellent, i love the expolsions by the way, can't wait until they reach cybercity, or whats left of it, these people they meet, maybe an allie? |
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May 16, 2011 |
Quoting Deus Otiosus
i m so sorry to keep you waitihg deus...my girlfriend will help me...thanks for your friendship man!!!
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May 16, 2011 |
Quoting Yuri Fassio
thanks yuri!!! you are very kind and generous! i remember...GUYS!...YURI has the best looking police mech on EARTH!!! don t got to bed without seeing this!!!...
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May 16, 2011 |
Quoting Dustin Esau
thanks dusty! [hope you don t mind! lol!] i hope we merge our work soon!!!
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May 16, 2011 |
Quoting T.K .
thanks tk! don t forget to post suggestions on the sattelite...i listen!
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May 16, 2011 |
Quoting Sebeus I
thanks a lot sebeus! cartoony is good! right on target! attack!
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May 16, 2011 |
Quoting Ben Cossy
i do try! thanks ben! i ll try even harder with your support!!!
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May 16, 2011 |
Quoting Parrington Levens
lol! most funny comment AGAIN parr!!!
with your pic against it...unbeatable!!!
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May 16, 2011 |
Quoting Henrik Hoexbroe
i know what you mean henrik!!!
i ll send you something!!!
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May 16, 2011 |
Quoting Nick Barrett
i m glad to serve you nick!!! after all your support, thanks a lot nick!
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May 16, 2011 |
Quoting Eric 'Hawk' Mickle
thanks eric! will you experiment with them? i feel you have the talent to take them further!
after seing your work! your photoshoped ones look awesome!
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May 16, 2011 |
Quoting Michael Rutherford
the explosions where quite risky...it was do or die...i needed them! brick made...your comment calmed me down, thanks michael!
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May 16, 2011 |
Quoting Deus Otiosus
thanks deus! you can t believe the relief i had when reading this! i feared them to scrap the whole episode! and...i ll get better!
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May 15, 2011 |
Thanks for the text, it's even more awesome this way! |
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May 14, 2011 |
Nice settings, but a bit too much dialogue and too little storyline (for my personal taste). Nice page overall :) |
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May 14, 2011 |
EXPLODING TANKS!!! That is a clever idea. great build 5/5. |
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May 14, 2011 |
great story once again Frank! |
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May 13, 2011 |
Nice, I love the explosion you made, really cool, somewhat cartoonish but awesome, good job |
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May 13, 2011 |
Another sweet chapter! Nice effects on the exploding tank! Brilliant work brother ;) |
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May 13, 2011 |
cmon Bronto! |
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May 13, 2011 |
Like always.., awesome work..! |
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May 13, 2011 |
Oh the destruction. Oh the humanity!!! |
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May 13, 2011 |
Well done! Another great episode! |
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May 12, 2011 |
nice builds! |
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May 12, 2011 |
This is fantastic Frank! Love the explosion! and the gators and everything else lol Great story to go with great mocs! |
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May 12, 2011 |
Oh, also, what is GF? |
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May 12, 2011 |
I was wondering how to model an explosion... now I know. So brilliant, I may have to steal it (with credit where it's due, of course). |
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May 12, 2011 |
Cool!! |
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May 12, 2011 |
This is GREAT! I like the LEGO explosions! |
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May 12, 2011 |
awesome explosions! |
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May 12, 2011 |
Really nice explosions! |
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May 12, 2011 |
Those were some nice explosions. And they were brick built too. >Eric |
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May 12, 2011 |
The horror...the horror! The green creep is the arms dealer isn't it? He's got that black vest. This was a very ambitions build. Lots of flowing narrative action. The tanks exploding were very effective. I knew at once what it was supposed to represent. Well done! Attack! |
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May 12, 2011 |
Frank au mieux de sa forme! Tu est parvenu a rendre l'explosion du tank de manière très classe! Bravo! ;-) |
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May 12, 2011 |
Excellent excellent job. I really like the story line it keeps me wanting more. The builds all look fantastic. The tank and structures look great. |
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May 12, 2011 |
Awesome tanks (and explosions I'll probbly steal)! Will more text be added? |
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May 12, 2011 |
Awesome! I commented in the group. If you want, I'm on at 5:00 toronto time..... so we can talk about the story then... bon jour! |
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