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Lost patrol

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My attempt at recreating the disappearance of a patrol and the following search for it... Anyway, hope you like it and lemme know in the comments:)

About this creation

Drone - "Targets identified. Sending coordinates..."

Daisuke - "You heard that?"
Hachiro - "Relax, it's probably just a rat... we never saw drones this close to the headquarters before"

Daisuke - "That's not a rat!"

Hachiro - "Damn, they´re everywhere!"

Daisuke - "Oh fu...... tzzzt....*static sounds*"

Octavian - we just lost contact with another patrol!"

Octavian - It's the second one this week... If we keep losing people at this rate, there will be no one to fight the drones next year..."

Keira - "Hmm... Guess who will have to go look for them..."

A few minutes later

Keira - "I'm goin' ahead while you start that thing. Meet me outside"

Octavian - "Right. Be careful..."
Keira - "I always am, sugar"

Hound - "I'm right behind you"

26 minutes later, near the place where the patrol went missing.

Keira - "I'm fifty yards from where we lost their signal...No sign of them..."

Hound - "I've found some tracks moving away from their last spot, but they look old..."

Hound - "Wait! I found a dead body..."
Keira - "Is it one of them?!"

Hound - "Nah... its too...decomposed to be one of them... The poor guy as probably been here since the war..."

Keira - "It's useless... We better return to the H.Q."
Hound - "I won't argue with you... This place gives me chills"

To Be Continued...

And that's it. Hope you enjoyed :)

Some bonus pics:

The drone that killed the patrol.

Hounds "repaired" (more like battle-scarred) arm.

Oxygen tank in the back, to allow the pilot to breed when he needs to pressurize the cockpit to enter the fog, going under water, or even outerspace.

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andrew macd

June 9, 2011

that mech blew me away! i really liked the design. will we ever see the guns themselves?

andrew macd

June 9, 2011

that mech blew me away! i really liked the design. will we ever see the guns themselves?

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Octavian A.

May 17, 2011

Quoting Shadowa Heartfelt Pretty good for a first time Vig. It looks like you referenced the oxygen tanks on Hades Industries' LILLIUM Prototype. And I personally like the "crawler" drone that killed the patrol. (I didn't know what to call it, and it seemed appropriate) Hound's battle damage looks really good. Maybe your Vig and my vig could become attached together. haha! Maybe they could be side-stories to each other. From the way it seems. You know? So, if you want to talk on a one-on-one basis on ever doing a collaboration moc, email me. (email posted on my home page).

Thanks:) well, I guess crawler realy sounds good, so if i create a page just for that drone, or if I use it again, would you mind if I use that name? About the colaboration... well, sounds good to me, I never did one so it would be interesting (maby using a different storyline, or a different time, because our characters are too far away, though i think they could still be related and communicating with each other). I'll give it some thought tomorrow. And by the way, sorry for that cannister thing, I didnt check that moc before, so I didnt realise it looked very similar to yours.

I like it

Shadowa Heartfelt

May 17, 2011

Pretty good for a first time Vig. It looks like you referenced the oxygen tanks on Hades Industries' LILLIUM Prototype. And I personally like the "crawler" drone that killed the patrol. (I didn't know what to call it, and it seemed appropriate) Hound's battle damage looks really good. Maybe your Vig and my vig could become attached together. haha! Maybe they could be side-stories to each other. From the way it seems. You know? So, if you want to talk on a one-on-one basis on ever doing a collaboration moc, email me. (email posted on my home page).

I made it

Octavian A.

May 16, 2011

Quoting Rabid Goldfish Over all, not a bad story. Some bigger scenes would work better, but you got the gist of it down pat. And that drone is an interesting design. Wiull we see a workup for it? And have you posted the Hound's story? ^Blub^

Not yet, still need to add some of the details we discussed. Thanks by the way :)

I like it

Rabid Goldfish

May 16, 2011

Over all, not a bad story. Some bigger scenes would work better, but you got the gist of it down pat. And that drone is an interesting design. Wiull we see a workup for it? And have you posted the Hound's story? ^Blub^

I like it

Neil Dynamo

May 16, 2011

What a cute little 3-legged bug thing.

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