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Lost patrol - part 2
Here's part 2 of the missing patrol story. Hope you like it and don't forget to comment/rate. Advices are welcome :)
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Kei - Base, this is Kei. I request permission to enter...


Kei - By the way, I got some good news!


Keira - Keira here, I'm already opening the doors. Hurry up, before you get folowed




Keira - So, what are those good news you were talkin' about?


Kei - I managed to intercept one of the drones transmissions! Apparently Hachiro and Daisuke are still alive, and I was able to pinpoint the location of the base they were taken to!


Keira - That's great! We need to send a rescue team.


Kei - Yeh... there's just one thing... The base is past the retainer wall, in the fog.

A few moments later, in the mech bay:

Octavian - You what!? That's suicide! And besides, who would you want to send with me? Hound's the only way to survive the fog...


Keira - I'll go with you


Octavian - And just how do you suppose to stay alive out there?


Keira - Come, IŽ'll show you how...


Octavian - Are you sure that will hold the fog out? I mean...how long has that been here?


Keira - It will hold. I've taken care of it.

moments later:

Octavian - How do you feel? can you breathe?
Keira - I feel fine. Go get Hound started.


Keira - Better take your minigun too... There will be a lot of resistance.
Octavian - Ofcourse... Do you have any plan to get inside, by the way?


Keira - I was thinking about using your head as a battering-ram.


Octavian - ...


Hound - Let's get moving.


Several minutes later, already past the retainer wall, deep in the fog:

Keira - ...relax, I feel fine, the suit is still ok...


Hound - Wait... What's that?


Keira - It's one of those Bug-drones... Its hasn't seen us yet...


Hound - He's mine.






Hound - One down. Lets keep moving.


Hound - There's the entrance to the...


Sentry drone - Intruders!!


Keira - This one's mine!









Hound - Nice shot.


Keira - Strange, this place should be swarming with drones by now...



Hound - Maybe this is the wrong place... Lets check inside anyway.






Keira - Oh no...




Hound - That's Koji...He disappeared two weeks ago...
Mecha Twelve - Yes, such a shame we had to kill him... He was one of the most promissing subjects...



Hound - You!?


Mecha Twelve - Hello Octavian, I've been expecting you.

To Be Continued





Comments

 I made it 
  May 21, 2011
Quoting Shadowa Heartfelt The only problem is Octavian (you), asked her if she could "Breed". >w> some hidden romance jokes? idk. But either way, this Vig-story is really good.
Lol! i just noticed that.... I meant "breathe"...seriously(or not)
 I like it 
  May 20, 2011
The only problem is Octavian (you), asked her if she could "Breed". >w> some hidden romance jokes? idk. But either way, this Vig-story is really good.
 I like it 
  May 20, 2011
Other than the lack of scenery, as Neil said, you've got quite the story developing here. ^Blub^
 I made it 
  May 20, 2011
Quoting Neil Dynamo You should try your hand at building some "terrain" like some ruined chunks of wall or destroyed vehicles or something to use as decor for your little stories. Also, I really like that 3-wheeled future car thing.
Thanks:) And yes, I'd love to be able to build some terrain, but I don't have enough pieces for that... for now at least and I'm thinking about goin to my hold house, where I have most of my legos.
 I like it 
  May 20, 2011
You should try your hand at building some "terrain" like some ruined chunks of wall or destroyed vehicles or something to use as decor for your little stories. Also, I really like that 3-wheeled future car thing.
 
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