Some character designs I made for my Gala Magna Chronicles that I won't be using. Of course I will also point out why.
About this creation
Haggar of Steel
He should have been the main villain. Extra cool head if you ask me, the color distribution was cool too.
That big "H" on the chest plate pretty much limits the name choices. He was also way too small, standing less than an inch above the others (horns excluded). I usually like to set a small group of heroes against a formidable foe.
Nameless hero #1
Cool look, and I got to use those Ben 10 wings.
I didn't have any marbled pieces in dark blue/white so I felt it was "incomplete". Also, I had already used that mask for another character in my Gala Magna series.
Also, his place in the plot was taken by a new Kicker I built.
Nameless hero #2
Very playable, with those jetpacks dubbing as lasers and that nice shield. Good for fighting stances.
Monochrome is... just too much. I might remake him in red/lime.
Dystor "fallen Titan"
I wanted to depict Dystor after leaving the Temple of Powers (see "the Gatekeeper" for reference) so I kept similar legs, a black/gold combo and a crouching stance. It looks cool...
It also look terribly out of character. I think the renewed Dystor should return to its original color scheme, black/dark red with silver weapons. I may still keep this frame, though.
Also, the light blue on its wings is out of place.
Nameless villain pet
It DOES look cool. I liked the colors and the design. The gun on the top of its back and its jetpacks (yes, I'm making a "flying" episode) add an extra cool factor.
Nothing. I was going to give him as pet to a villain, and the character just sorta died on me, so I had no idea what he would do once there.
I also considered putting him with the heroes, but I feared he would overshadow them.
I really wanted to use that cool yellow head.
It didn't really come out very well. I think dark yellow would have suited him better, but those pieces only come in light yellow. Only shot of him.
Well, that's all.
If you have any idea on how improve on these designs, just let me know.
Quoting Berial .
Nice stuff.My favorite is certainly Haggar.Now,I know you probably have been asked that quite some times since I left,but what about Melkor?
He was lost in real life. Right now at my new place I only have time/space/resources for small stuff (hence the recent flood of vignettes). I still hope to set it up for the finale of my ArcheoGenis series.
Quoting Cody G
Very cool, that villain pet looks a bit like a zoid. When is this story going to get started?
If you mean in "story" time, a few years after the last episode. If you man in MOCing time, as you can see I have already started. The story will be the same as usual: it will describe how the characters have come to the final confrontation, and leave an open ending.
the only ones I can help you with right now are the nameless henchman and the Haggar of Steel.. Let's start with the henchman. The henchman could be named Vokon, and maybe he could be improved with a red laser thing that looks like a sword that has a button in it that makes it light up(I have one of those, but it's "laser" is blue), and I really recommend hiding that button, unless you plan on making it a weakness. And his armor could be improved with some lime, and some blue on the back of his head. And his primary weapon could be a short sword(not a dagger). For the Hagger of Steel, I REALLY recommend changing that name. But, before we get on with the name, his appearance could be upgraded. His legs could be longer, and thin somewhere in the legs, making him agile. And his feet could be bigger, and his spear could have some orange a few inches before it gets to the sharp end. And his name should be "The Hardboiled Spear", referencing that he looks mad. These are my only ideas right now.
I have no idea why General Motors would have anything to do with bionicles, but I will still give tips. I would suggest using the main villain, except make him look the same way but twice as large, and other colors than silver. And if you ever try to have a pet again, do NOT have it orange, I could not see what was what on it. Cheers Fassy.