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Some character designs I made for my Gala Magna Chronicles that I won't be using. Of course I will also point out why.
About this creation
Haggar of Steel
Pros
He should have been the main villain. Extra cool head if you ask me, the color distribution was cool too.


Cons
That big "H" on the chest plate pretty much limits the name choices. He was also way too small, standing less than an inch above the others (horns excluded). I usually like to set a small group of heroes against a formidable foe.



Nameless hero #1
Pros
Cool look, and I got to use those Ben 10 wings.


Cons
I didn't have any marbled pieces in dark blue/white so I felt it was "incomplete". Also, I had already used that mask for another character in my Gala Magna series.
Also, his place in the plot was taken by a new Kicker I built.



Nameless hero #2
Pros
Very playable, with those jetpacks dubbing as lasers and that nice shield. Good for fighting stances.


Cons
Monochrome is... just too much. I might remake him in red/lime.





Dystor "fallen Titan"
I wanted to depict Dystor after leaving the Temple of Powers (see "the Gatekeeper" for reference) so I kept similar legs, a black/gold combo and a crouching stance. It looks cool...


Cons
It also look terribly out of character. I think the renewed Dystor should return to its original color scheme, black/dark red with silver weapons. I may still keep this frame, though.


Also, the light blue on its wings is out of place.



Nameless villain pet
Pros
It DOES look cool. I liked the colors and the design. The gun on the top of its back and its jetpacks (yes, I'm making a "flying" episode) add an extra cool factor.


Cons
Nothing. I was going to give him as pet to a villain, and the character just sorta died on me, so I had no idea what he would do once there.


I also considered putting him with the heroes, but I feared he would overshadow them.



Nameless henchman
Pros
I really wanted to use that cool yellow head.
Cons
It didn't really come out very well. I think dark yellow would have suited him better, but those pieces only come in light yellow. Only shot of him.




Well, that's all.
If you have any idea on how improve on these designs, just let me know.





Comments

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  October 26, 2011
nice
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  July 15, 2011
My favorite has to be "Unnamed Hero 1" because of the wings!
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  June 24, 2011
very cool group of mocs there dude. mnd checking out my new one.
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  June 15, 2011
Awesome! Love them all. :D
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  June 2, 2011
All of these are brilliant, and if the cons hadn't been pointed out, I most likely wouldn't have even noticed them. But every now and then I get a few of these, I'm sure every Bio builder does.
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  June 2, 2011
Hey would you tell me if you'll enter my contest? (sorry 'Bout asking you here but I don't know another way.)
  May 31, 2011
Oh well,what a pity.I hope things work out for you so we can finaly see what beast Melkor will be!
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  May 30, 2011
Quoting Berial . Nice stuff.My favorite is certainly Haggar.Now,I know you probably have been asked that quite some times since I left,but what about Melkor?
He was lost in real life. Right now at my new place I only have time/space/resources for small stuff (hence the recent flood of vignettes). I still hope to set it up for the finale of my ArcheoGenis series.
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  May 30, 2011
Nice stuff.My favorite is certainly Haggar.Now,I know you probably have been asked that quite some times since I left,but what about Melkor?
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  May 28, 2011
First one was my fav. The "pet" was a close runner up for second though. Great work Yuri! I really wish I could wrap my head around bionicle. So many possibilities. ~ Chris.
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  May 26, 2011
Awesome MOCs, my favorites have to be Dystor and the nameless pet.
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  May 26, 2011
its Max W. I knew he'd come back...
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  May 26, 2011
:D
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  May 26, 2011
Quoting Cody G Very cool, that villain pet looks a bit like a zoid. When is this story going to get started?
If you mean in "story" time, a few years after the last episode. If you man in MOCing time, as you can see I have already started. The story will be the same as usual: it will describe how the characters have come to the final confrontation, and leave an open ending.
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  May 26, 2011
Amazing work on all of them! I like them all!
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  May 26, 2011
These are fantastic Yuri! You make me want to get into Bionicle/Hero Factory...and not many builders do that to me :)
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  May 26, 2011
Despite their cons, I love all of them!!! The gold/black one kinda needs a different head, but that's really it if you ask me. Keep up the good work!!
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  May 26, 2011
All of them are epic! My favourite is the villain pet, He reminds me of an Ash Bear :D Great stuff Yuri ;)
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  May 26, 2011
the red one though garish had a serioisly tough looking build...
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  May 25, 2011
Very cool, that villain pet looks a bit like a zoid. When is this story going to get started?
  May 25, 2011
the only ones I can help you with right now are the nameless henchman and the Haggar of Steel.. Let's start with the henchman. The henchman could be named Vokon, and maybe he could be improved with a red laser thing that looks like a sword that has a button in it that makes it light up(I have one of those, but it's "laser" is blue), and I really recommend hiding that button, unless you plan on making it a weakness. And his armor could be improved with some lime, and some blue on the back of his head. And his primary weapon could be a short sword(not a dagger). For the Hagger of Steel, I REALLY recommend changing that name. But, before we get on with the name, his appearance could be upgraded. His legs could be longer, and thin somewhere in the legs, making him agile. And his feet could be bigger, and his spear could have some orange a few inches before it gets to the sharp end. And his name should be "The Hardboiled Spear", referencing that he looks mad. These are my only ideas right now.
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  May 25, 2011
I have no idea why General Motors would have anything to do with bionicles, but I will still give tips. I would suggest using the main villain, except make him look the same way but twice as large, and other colors than silver. And if you ever try to have a pet again, do NOT have it orange, I could not see what was what on it. Cheers Fassy.
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  May 25, 2011
awesome mocs :)
 
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