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Eothain : Episode Four
My fourth episode. Sorry for thr delay in episodes I was on vacation. Anyways enjoy.
About this creation
Previously: Arathorn and Eric went to the castle Telther that was being attacked by Persta in search of the wizard named Matha only to find out that they have to meet Matha in Eldthrain.
They also had an Elf named Ridivar join their group.


Eric: Ok lets rest here.
Arathorn: How long have we been travaling for.
Ridivar: About two days and we have another two days of travaling ahead of us


Arathorn: It's getting dark we should probably make camp.
Eric: Yeah your right, alright lets get a fire going then.
Arathorn: I'll go out hunting in the woods.
Eric: Ok.


(Later in the woods)
(Arathorn walks around quietly in search of prey)


(When suddenly he comes accross some ruins)
Arathorn: These are some pretty interesting ruins.
(He then started to explore the ruins)


(Arathorn then walks into a room in the ruins)
Arathorn: This room has an weird feel to it.


(He then walked up to the altar in the middle of the room)
Arathorn: This is a strange dagger.
(Suddenly the silence is broken by a familier sound)
*Sssshhaa!


(Arathorn then turned around to see a Nazrak charging at him)


(He then took the dagger and quickly through it at he Nazrak)


*Shlink
(It then hit the Nazrak and with a flash of light the Nazrak flew back and hit the wall)
Arathorn: Whoa.


(He then picked up the dagger and ran back to camp)


(Later at the camp)
Arathorn: Guys I just got attacked by a Nazrak.
Eric: There's always two.


(The three then took out their weapons)
*shling


(Suddenly the other Nazrak appeared)
*sssshhaa!


(And Ridivar shot it)
*thwap
*thwap


Eric: We're no longer safe here we have to go.
*sssshhaa
Arathorn: That sounded farther away.
Eric: That meens that they're too close lets go.


(Later)
Eric: Ok I think we lost them.
Arathorn: What do we do now then?
Eric: I guess we'll make camp again but dont light a fire we dont want to attract any attention.


(Later on in the night the three travelers are asleep)
(When suddenly a quiet noise breaks the silence)
*sssss
Arathorn:(whisper)What was that?
Eric: What?
*sssss
Arathorn: That.
Eric: Oh for god sake they found us again, get your bow ready and wake Ridivar.
Ridivar: I'm already up.


*sssshhaaa
*ssssshhaaa
*shling
*sssshhaa
Eric: They're getting closer and there's more than two.


( Suddenly the Nazrak jump out and the three companions fight them)
*sssshhaa
*ting
*ting
*shling
*thwap
Nazrak: *Hurk
Eric: There's four of them!


*ting
*ting
*thwap
*thwap
Nazrak: *Hurk
Arathorn: It takes two arrows to kill them!
*ting


(One of the Nazrak charged at Arathorn but Eric got in the way causing the Nazrak to stab him and hit him on the head)
*Shling
Eric: Ah!
Arathorn: No!


(Arathorn then shot the Nazrak)
*Thwap
*Thwap


*Thwap
*Thwap
*shling
Ridivar: Those where the last two.


Arathorn: $#@& Eric! Eric come on wake up!

To Be Continued...

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Comments

 I like it 
  September 5, 2011
Following a stereotypical fantasy story design isn't bad it's just a little uninspired. But as long as it'S well made, continue. I really like the Nazraks. Hope they'll get more background later and won't be just cannon feed.
 I like it 
  June 2, 2011
CLIFFHANGER! I loved it, simply adored this episode! Keep 'em goin'!
 I like it 
  June 1, 2011
Well one pair would be enough.
 I made it 
  June 1, 2011
Quoting Mr Viking Hey, Night Hawk, if I could make a suggestion, I would put a vambrace on Arathorn and Rividar's arms.
Sure but I'll have to order some for I only have one pair and those are on my Legolas fig.
 I like it 
  June 1, 2011
Hey, Night Hawk, if I could make a suggestion, I would put a vambrace on Arathorn and Rividar's arms.
 I like it 
  May 30, 2011
Very cool! I am guessing that the dagger is the Dagger of Shadow.
  May 30, 2011
got me there good point
 I like it 
  May 30, 2011
Another nice episode. I do agree about the dialogue, it could flow a little better I think. Other than that, I really enjoy this comic. Your building skills are nice and that adds to the comic. Can't wait to see what happens to Eric!
 I made it 
  May 29, 2011
Quoting Stormbringer . Most fantasy novels are quite similar to Eragon nowadays, so don't feel down because there's one critic who recognizes this pattern. Besides if you think of it, Eragon is a copy of LOTR, in a way. Your series will continue to grow to fans and viewers alike. Don't be afraid to expand your universe a bit and to add surprising twists in your story.
Oh I'm totally fine with that, but I never said that Eric was dead so I'm not copying Eragon.
 I like it 
  May 29, 2011
Most fantasy novels are quite similar to Eragon nowadays, so don't feel down because there's one critic who recognizes this pattern. Besides if you think of it, Eragon is a copy of LOTR, in a way. Your series will continue to grow to fans and viewers alike. Don't be afraid to expand your universe a bit and to add surprising twists in your story.
 I made it 
  May 29, 2011
Quoting Josh o You ruined it by killing Eric we don't know anything about him. You need some time to build up a love for the charachter to make his death meaningful and sad for your viewers. Also another too close to Eragon with Eric dying..... Other than that i loved it.
How do you know that he's dead? He could be alive we'll see in the next episode.
 I like it 
  May 28, 2011
You ruined it by killing Eric we don't know anything about him. You need some time to build up a love for the charachter to make his death meaningful and sad for your viewers. Also another too close to Eragon with Eric dying..... Other than that i loved it.
 I made it 
  May 28, 2011
Quoting Michael Kringe Nice job! Will my character be in?
Your character wont be appearing for few episodes I have to include so many other characters.
 I like it 
  May 28, 2011
Exciting! Not Eric!
 I like it 
  May 28, 2011
Nice job! Will my character be in?
 I like it 
  May 27, 2011
This is the best series on MOC pages. It kinda SUCKS that Eric died. P.S. you should make this into a book.
 I like it 
  May 27, 2011
Yay, it's back! Looking great too. That dagger-throwing effect has a nice.
 I like it 
  May 27, 2011
Great episode! I love the lighting. I do agree with eric about the dilogue though.
 I made it 
  May 27, 2011
Quoting Eric 'Hawk' Mickle It was a good epp, I liked the sunset lighting that was used. The backround during the last fight should be black though, it's during the night right? And I still think the dialogue is a little off, like when Arathorn went to the ruins he says "this room has a wierd feel to it" I think "There's something strange about this place" would fit better. That's just my opinion though. >Eric
Alright I'll keep your pointers in mind.
 I like it 
  May 27, 2011
It was a good epp, I liked the sunset lighting that was used. The backround during the last fight should be black though, it's during the night right? And I still think the dialogue is a little off, like when Arathorn went to the ruins he says "this room has a wierd feel to it" I think "There's something strange about this place" would fit better. That's just my opinion though. >Eric
 I like it 
  May 27, 2011
OOHH, I'm getting goosebumps again!
 
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