Island Locked- Nearing the finish
About this creation
These are things people have said about Island Locked
"This is one of the best CYOAs on MOCpages! The story is gripping and getting better by the moment! I am always looking forward to the next episode! "-Sam Knavel
"You build great, and you're good at story telling, I'd like your story to end up at Cybercity if possible"-Cyberfrank
"Island Locked is a classic tale of survival. The survivors of a devastating crash must now rely on themselves, as well as the other castaways to stay alive. Each and every one of them were on the plane for a reason."-Eric Mickle.
"One of the best survival stories out there"-Night Hawk_
"Nice job, you've got some very inspiring work here!"-Decimator the NukeMaster
Btw THESE EPISODES ARE REALLY IMPORTANT. It gives you some very vital information.
ENJOY!
Athanasios knew he was near the communication jammer the second he saw the helicopter pad.
He was tempted to see what was being stored underground, but knew he could waste NO time.
He walked into a small, red room with a large computer.This had to be it....
He sat down at the computer.
After he typed the 17 letter long code, he found the communications jammer, and began to stop it.
The process began.
Athanasios heard something, and stood up.
Someone stepped into view with their hands up.
Athanasios glanced back at the computer. 79% left.
Another person stepped into view, this one was holding a gun.
"This was a trap, wasn't it?" Athanasios asked.
"Indeed, I have no care for your hope, much less getting off the Island. And that 17 letter 'Password' I gave you, it actually set off an alarm"
"Why? Why wont you let us off the Island?" he asked, stalling for time.
Only 26 percent left....
"You see, if you got off the Island, you'd tell the authorities, maybe even the army, and then we'd never make money. You see, none of you will EVER get off, not unless its over this whole organization's dead body."
"What if we kept quiet? And if we ever told, you could kill us." Athanasios stalled again.
The process finally finished.
Athanasios felt guilty for what he was about to do, but had no choice.
BANG!
He quickly ran toward the computer.
Wayne tried to help Ms. Fox up. He had known her for 10 years, he wasn't about to let her die.
Athanasios racked his brains for someone he knew that could track the signal to the Island and rescue them.
Finally, he managed to contact one of his friends he had made in the war.
"Devin! Help! We're trapped on this island, I need you to track this to where we are! Tell the police, make sure this!"
his friend adjusted the lens of his video camera, and spoke "Athanasios? Is that you? We heard your plane crashed! They never found it! hold on I'm tracking down your signal now!"
"Hurry! I haven't much time!"
Meanwhile, Wayne had realized that ms. Fox had only received a flesh wound, and picked up the gun to extract his revenge on Athanasios.
"Okay, I've got it. Wait a second this says you're located in the middle of the Bermuda Triang-"
BAM!
Athanasios' blood hit the ground before he did. The last words he heard before he passed out where, "Holy- Athanasios? Are you there? What was-" then the call was ended by Wayne.
Well, there ya have it! This series will be finishing off soon, so if you have anything you really don't understand, just type it bellow!
Thanks for viewing!
Oh, and the series will only be like 5, maybe 10 more episodes.
God Bless you!
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June 2, 2011 |
Ah, I'm shot! But that's not fair, I'm faster then my blood. I'm no slop-poke. *pouts.* |
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Nathan Bott June 1, 2011 |
This is just getting started! THIS IS THE BEST!(no offense,anyone) I have my next episode part right here! http://mocpages.com/moc.php/272214 |
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Sargeant Brick May 31, 2011 |
Wow! Will be in the series soon. By the way my CYOA will be up hopefully tommorow |
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May 31, 2011 |
Nice!!!! This is getting intense!!! Btw when will I come in? |
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I made it |
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May 31, 2011 |
Quoting Captain Sam
And after this CYOA is over, are you going to resume Order 66 and/or I.I.?
I.I, possibly, order 66, sadly no. |
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May 31, 2011 |
And after this CYOA is over, are you going to resume Order 66 and/or I.I.? |
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May 31, 2011 |
awesome job! |
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May 31, 2011 |
Great! It just gets better! |
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May 31, 2011 |
Cool, if I die then please don't show it! I hate the thought of dead dogs:( |
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I made it |
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May 31, 2011 |
Quoting Michael Kringe
The whole series? Why? Are you going to make an other CYOA, though? Will my character in one of the next episodes? (sorry for writing so many questions XD)
The whole series. Because, I need a break, and its coming to the end. About 10 people will get off the Island and go to Cybercity (Cyberfrank's city) and that's it! And yeah you play a role in episode 10. |
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May 31, 2011 |
When will I be in? |
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May 31, 2011 |
Great story! One of the best! |
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May 31, 2011 |
The whole series? Why? Are you going to make an other CYOA, though? Will my character in one of the next episodes? (sorry for writing so many questions XD) |
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May 31, 2011 |
Will I be in? |
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I made it |
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May 31, 2011 |
Quoting Eric 'Hawk' Mickle
So the season is ending soon, huh? Feels like it just started. >Eric
Probably 5 to 10 more episodes, then the WHOLE series will be over. |
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May 31, 2011 |
So the season is ending soon, huh? Feels like it just started. >Eric |
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May 31, 2011 |
This epiode was really nice! |
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