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Ripping Truths: Part 1
The first part of my new comic...Caption for the picture is below each photo...Enjoy!
About this creation
This story takes place after Catok's death in the old wreckage of the Karda Nui swamps.

For more backstory to this, read Nexus's bio.


In the Black Temple of the Brotherhood of Red Lightning.


Nexus: Sigh...I-I can't believe he-he's gone...

Nexus: I remember it too well...


On Karda Nui, Catok has been bitten by a Shadow Leech...again.

Catok! Oh-no! Catok, hold on, I'll get some help.
Catok: Help me! I'm-I'm turning into one of theeeemm!

Rorge: Nexus...
Nexus: *Gasp!* Rorge! He-he's been bitten!
Rorge: He's a Toa, Nexus, kill him.

Nexus: But I--
Rorge: Nexus, we cannot afford to be charitable he's going to die anyway. Kill him...now.


Catok: W-What are you doing!?

Nexus: Argh!!!

Nexus: Wha?...What have I done...

Guard: Nexus, Rorge wishes to see you.
Nexus: Oh, okay.

Nexus: You wished to see me master?

Rorge: Oh yes Nexus, and please, don't call me "master".

Nexus: Did you need something?
Rorge: Yes, Nexus. Are you feeling alright? You've been acting very strange lately.
Nexus: Yes...yes master, I'm fine.

Rorge: Okay, good. And please, don't call me "master". You're like a son to me.
Nexus: Yes sir.

Now the real reason I wanted you here was to send you on an assignment. The Toa have discovered a power source of some kind. Right now, they're in a battle with some Makuta at their base. Sneak in there, it should be easy since you're a Toa to them, and find out what this strange power source is and bring it to me.
Nexus: Yes sir.


*Crack!*

*Boom!*

At the Toa base.

Brakix: Okay guys! Cut off his retreat!
Cossy: Right! Ha ha! Where you going now you stupid cow?


Butcher: ROAARR!!
Ritix: WHUAAGH!!
Cossy: Oof!
Brakix: Oh, brilliant.


Nexus: Ha ha! Toa VS Makuta, classic.

Nexus: Now, what's in here?

Nexus: Wha?...It can't be!


To be continued...

Well that's the first chapter! I hope you enjoyed it, this is my first Bionicle comic after all.
Yes, I featured my brother's MOC again so I could use his Cossy mask. :P
Please rate and comment!



Comments

 I like it 
  June 17, 2011
Looking Good man! Great story soo far, gotta read the rest soon! I'm a little bit lost, but it's good as a beginning. 4 on 5
 I like it 
  June 13, 2011
sweet looking good!
  June 9, 2011
Great idea. Please check out these aswome mocs http://www.mocpages.com/home.php/38197
Legofreak2444 ~
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Toa Oblivious ,Master of Earth
  June 8, 2011
O_O what is going to happen?
 I made it 
  June 8, 2011
Quoting seph 333
Thanks, I sure will. ;)
 I made it 
  June 8, 2011
Quoting Josh o
Thanks.
 I made it 
  June 8, 2011
Quoting Green Ghost .
Thank you.
 I like it 
  June 8, 2011
cool designs and interesting plot
Legofreak2444 ~
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seph 333
  June 7, 2011
Nice! i like how you based it around your 2ndary self moc:D btw, would you mind checking out this?-if you would, tell me if it has potential. Im not tryin to get alot of likes, cause the pics are terrible. http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/273279
 I like it 
  June 7, 2011
Interesting mask useage.
 I made it 
  June 7, 2011
Quoting Moon Shadow
Thanks.
 I like it 
  June 7, 2011
EPICNESS!!!!!
 I made it 
  June 7, 2011
Quoting cyberfrank 2010
Yeah, I know, but that's pretty much all you can do with Bionicle. Have you seen Ben Cossy's comic? I couldn't make a whole city like you, especially Bionicle scale. Plus I already have a LEGO system comic going on now. ;)
 I made it 
  June 7, 2011
Quoting Callan Lord of Fire
Thanks, this story is more featured around Nexus though and bringing...my other...self into here would just make it over complicated...maybe. I might bring him in later. ;)
 I like it 
  June 7, 2011
Sorry I missed this, buddy! The past day was very busy! Anyway, looks great so far, funny how Jordan wasn't in this moc at all! :D
 I like it 
  June 7, 2011
i like the mechs...but, the scene suffers! that s what i don t like about bios...the scene needs to be enormous! if you d build a small city at least, you d have a decent scene! it s hard for me to follow the story like it is! would you consider taking your bios to fig scale level? check my story work for reference! still...your mechs are plenty cool legofreak!!!
 I made it 
  June 7, 2011
Quoting Ben Cossy
Sure thing. ;)
 I made it 
  June 7, 2011
Quoting Ben Cossy
Yes, yes it will. :D
 I made it 
  June 7, 2011
Quoting Overlord Galaxus ( Instant Noodles)
Thanks Noodles!
  June 7, 2011
Oh and thanks for including me :D How the heck did I forget to say thanks for that before :P
 I like it 
  June 7, 2011
Pretty sweet story! Nice cliffhanger too! Great work Legofreak! This is going to be epic :D
 I like it 
  June 7, 2011
Great story! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Legofreak2444 ~
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Chaos Master
  June 6, 2011
YEAH NEW STORY! it looks good, make more NOW!
Legofreak2444 ~
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Mark E
  June 6, 2011
And what can it be but.....THE EPIC NINJA TURTLE! XD LOL
Legofreak2444 ~
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Mark E
  June 6, 2011
XD!!!!! LOL
Legofreak2444 ~
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Mark E
  June 6, 2011
UGH.....COME ON COCONUT YOU CHEAPED OUT!!!! JK LOL XD
Legofreak2444 ~
Mark E
  June 6, 2011
The cookie was LOL!
Legofreak2444 ~
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S. :D
  June 6, 2011
Very cool, sounds like a promising comic. Check out my new self moc if you have any spare time: http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/273174
Legofreak2444 ~
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S.E.D. (Being of Insanity)
  June 6, 2011
Awesome! Want more now!
 I made it 
  June 6, 2011
Quoting Mark Murphy
Maybe... >:D
 I made it 
  June 6, 2011
Quoting Cody G
LOL! That'd be hilarious!...But this is supposed to be more serious. :P
 I made it 
  June 6, 2011
Quoting MacLane Mars
Thanks.
  June 6, 2011
I agree is there loose change in there?
 I like it 
  June 6, 2011
Did he find some loose change in that cushion? ;) Nice story, it's rather well-written. Keep it up!
 I like it 
  June 6, 2011
Cool comic, I'm looking forward to the next installment.
 I made it 
  June 6, 2011
Quoting Jamus Prime the Geodude
Thanks.
 I like it 
  June 6, 2011
Awesome! great story!
 I made it 
  June 6, 2011
Quoting Mark E
LOL! Coconut isn't that bad, it's mint. O.O
 I made it 
  June 6, 2011
Quoting Mark E
...Who's the coconut?
 I made it 
  June 6, 2011
Quoting Devon P
:P Thanks.
 I made it 
  June 6, 2011
Quoting Gringat the Repugnant
Hehe...you'll see. Thanks. :)
 I like it 
  June 6, 2011
OH my God it's an army of mutant corgies!!! No? Great story anyway ^^;
  June 6, 2011
Nexus: Wha?...It can't be THE TV REMOTE just had to do that anyway great story intro thing
 I made it 
  June 6, 2011
Quoting Mark E
Congrats, here's an invisible cookie. XD
 I made it 
  June 6, 2011
Quoting Mark E
Dang! You guessed it! XD
 I made it 
  June 6, 2011
Quoting George G.
Thanks. XD
  June 6, 2011
You certainly did a great job on that - the colours and patterns are superb XD
 I made it 
  June 6, 2011
Quoting S.E.D. (Being of Insanity)
Ha ha. Okay, I'll try to get one in this week. ;)
 I made it 
  June 6, 2011
Quoting Chaos Master
LOL! Glad you like it! :D I'll try to make more this week. ;) Thanks for commenting. :)
 I made it 
  June 6, 2011
Quoting Matthew Novosad
Okay, I guess I can. He already knows though. :/
 I made it 
  June 6, 2011
Quoting Doc. Jared (doing exams)
Thanks.
 I made it 
  June 6, 2011
Quoting George G.
LOL! Yeah, the furniture is supposed to be the main part of it. ;) Thanks. :P
 I made it 
  June 6, 2011
Quoting wertman 8
Thanks!
 I made it 
  June 6, 2011
Quoting Robin Longstride
Thanks! Should be up soon!
 I made it 
  June 6, 2011
Quoting Zam Himmaq
#1, Yes, I have most of everything ready for the next one, just got to come over the laziness. #2, Yes, I'll try to get the next one in this week or next week. #3, In this comic? Uh...I don't have you built right now. I'm sore on pieces so no, probably not. :( I can put him in the Galaxy comic though. ;) Sorry bout that.
 I made it 
  June 6, 2011
Quoting Gregory Keegan
Cool! Tell me when you start! ;)
 I made it 
  June 6, 2011
Quoting S. :D
Thanks.
 I made it 
  June 6, 2011
Quoting The PURE *___*
Hmm...I need to see that. ;) Thanks!
 I like it 
  June 6, 2011
Not bad! Story seems legit. Anywho. Rhaski Party deleted both our comments <.< Would you please tell him in the 4%, where he CAN'T delete the comment.
 I like it 
  June 6, 2011
Cool!
 I like it 
  June 6, 2011
I love your carpet and sofa :D Oh yeah, the models and story are great too! Good job.
 I like it 
  June 6, 2011
whos, awesome!
 I like it 
  June 6, 2011
Awesome! I can't wait for the next one! =D
 I like it 
  June 6, 2011
Looking good! Three things, though; #1, are you doing your galaxy comics? #2, Are you doing another of these comics soon, and #3, provided I don't croak, could you put me in there?
 I like it 
  June 6, 2011
i love whenua's mask like that! and cool name for the comic, mine is going to be called `war of shadows`
 I like it 
  June 6, 2011
nexus somewhat reminds me of Blackbeard from POTC on stranger tides...
 I made it 
  June 6, 2011
Quoting S.T.S .
A Nikon Coolpix L18. It's my mom's. ;)
 I like it 
  June 6, 2011
It wasn't a joke.BTW what kind of camera do you use?
 I made it 
  June 6, 2011
Quoting S.T.S .
I said it first and a joke is never funny a second time.
 I like it 
  June 6, 2011
NO!In your dreams!
 I made it 
  June 6, 2011
Quoting DeckEr .
Thanks. :)
 I made it 
  June 6, 2011
Quoting S.T.S .
Ha ha! In your dreams!
 I like it 
  June 6, 2011
Cool,when I first saw this I was like "Ripping truth.....about Destrin,beating Jordan....MWUHAHAHAHAHAHAHHHAHAHAH"
 I like it 
  June 6, 2011
Nice.
 
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