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Ripping Truths: Part 2
Part 2 of my comic...Caption for each picture is below the photo... Enjoy...
About this creation
Part 1

Last time Nexus was sent to a Toa base to investigate a strange power source that the Toa have whilst Makuta Butcher is ambushing the place.



Nexus: It couldn't be!

Butcher: ROAARRRR!!
Nexus: Agh!


Brakix: It's Nexus! Hold on Nexus we're coming!
Ritix: Mph...give me a boost!

Butcher: Roarr!! It's mine!

Hehe...mine!

Cossy: No!
Butcher: Arghh!!

*BAM!*
Cossy: Aaaa!!
Nexus: Cossy! Agh!

Butcher: MINE!

Butcher: Oh yes, master will be most pleasssed!

Butcher: Mwahahahaha!!!

Nexus: He's getting away!

Nexus: No!

Nexus: Cossy, you can catch him faster than I can! Can you get up?
Cossy: I think he cracked my mask...

Nexus: Then it looks like it's up to me-- Where'd he go??


At the Black Temple of the BRL.

*CRACK!*
*BOOM!*

Rorge: Ah, Nexus, you're back.
Nexus: Yes master-- sir.

Rorge: Well, what was it? Where is it?
Nexus: It...it was the Golden Hau...sir. A Makuta got away with it.
Rorge:...Oh dear. That being in the hands of the Makuta, who knows what will happen.

To be continued...


A new buddy icon...maybe. No, I don't skateboard.

Please rate and comment!



Comments

  June 19, 2011
well i finally get the plot, but this chapter was too short and a little boring, but i know the rest will be epic.
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  June 13, 2011
Quoting Caleb S
Oh...thanks anyway. :P
  June 13, 2011
I'm not a big fan of Bionicals, in fact, i hate them. but this is ok I guess.
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  June 13, 2011
Quoting Yapdap 'Reep' Bitte
Hmm...okay. Thanks.
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  June 13, 2011
Cool, but the couch is too distracting.
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  June 13, 2011
Quoting S.T.S .
It's just part 3 of this. It's up now. ;)
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  June 13, 2011
TELL ME YOUR WHAT YOUR NEXT POST IS!!!!!(cuz you said something in the TFOLPC)
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  June 13, 2011
Quoting Nick Nitro Brick
Ooh! Can't wait!
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  June 13, 2011
Quoting Sam H
Sure thing. ;)
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  June 13, 2011
Quoting Ben Cossy
Yeah, I probably won't now that I think about it. Thanks for commenting buddy! :)
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  June 13, 2011
Quoting S.T.S .
Uh...okay. Can't wait to see him.
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  June 13, 2011
Quoting Chaos Master
...Gee...thanks.
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  June 13, 2011
Quoting Shadow Toa
Sure!
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  June 13, 2011
Quoting Someone even less popular
Ha ha! No, Tahu's not here. :P
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  June 13, 2011
Quoting wertman 8
They are, technically. They just want to take over Spherus Magna, they don't want to harm anyone unless necessary. I said too much already.
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  June 13, 2011
Quoting Cody G
Thanks.
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  June 13, 2011
Quoting Overlord Galaxus ( Instant Noodles)
Ha ha! You know nothing! :P
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  June 12, 2011
cool! can you please check out my self moc?
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  June 10, 2011
cool! in the next chapter of MY story. you disappear! HHAHAHAHAHAHAHA BTW that has something to do with me REVAMPING HIM!!!
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  June 9, 2011
EPIC!!!!!
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  June 9, 2011
Don't change your buddy icon dude, it's epic as is :D Anyway, nice chapter! Great idea for the power source :D And he broke me mask :O I believe it's Makuta smashing time :3 Anyway, great stuff! Can't wait for more :D
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  June 9, 2011
Pretty interesting story you have here, I can't wait for part 3.
Legofreak2444 ~
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Toa Oblivious ,Master of Earth
  June 8, 2011
Oh NO!
Legofreak2444 ~
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Jan D.
  June 8, 2011
cool story.I love this little board guy:P
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Chaos Master
  June 8, 2011
THAT IS THE COOLEST THING EVER! well, the buddy icon is at least :P
Legofreak2444 ~
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S. :D
  June 8, 2011
Sweet, can't wait for the next one!
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  June 8, 2011
Nice,and now Destrin is revamped and ready to kick some guys butt "points to Jordan"
  June 8, 2011
Awesome,guess what?Destrin has been revamped and now he is ready to kick someones butt "points to Jordan 2444"
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  June 8, 2011
Since you aren't me ill tell you...Destrin got revamped and is gonna kick someones butt "points to Jordan 2444"
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  June 8, 2011
Could you look at this? http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/240695 thanks! ,Shadow
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  June 8, 2011
Class! In the next installment you should have a maskless Tahu charging in and beating the [selfcensored] out of them!
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  June 8, 2011
Quick! Nice, and suspenseful too. Good buddy icon as well!
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  June 8, 2011
nice, i thought that Nexus's guys were villans...
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  June 8, 2011
Cool, very nice!
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  June 8, 2011
Sweet.
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  June 8, 2011
Awesome! Can't wait for more! :D
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  June 8, 2011
Awesome,guess what?
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  June 8, 2011
good story, only wish it was longer :D also neat skate boarder :)
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  June 8, 2011
At first I thought Catok was in there, but I have a feeling he will show up. Great story!
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  June 8, 2011
Neat skateboard! :)
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  June 8, 2011
Great story! I can't wait for more.:) ,Shadow
 
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