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Flare's Interactive Story
Not sure exactly what to call this, but this is a fun story where you can make choices and will alter your outcome! Enjoy (and don't cheat!)!!! :D
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Let us begin this story!




Flare: Father, I really really want to go on an intergalactic adventure! Can I please go?

Father: No, you may not go, you foolish young fool.

Flare: But I can pay for it myself! You don't have to pay a cent!

Father: No, my son, you will regret your decision to go.

Flare: But... but...

Father: No buts! Make your decision, my son.



What should Flare decide?

Should he...

A. Listen to his father and not go on the intergalactic adventure.

B. Do what he wants and go on an awesome intergalactic adventure!


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I've packed my suitcase and I'm ready to go on an adventure!



Guy on right: Hey! Are you looking for an intergalactic adventure?

Flare: Yeah I am!

Guy on right: Cool, I am too! We can go together. My name is 'Da Baron' by the way.

Flare: Awesome, lets go!

Da Baron: Great!



*zoooooom*



*CRASH CRASH BANG BOOM BANG CRASH BANG CRASH*

Da Baron: We're in an asteroid field! We're going to need to land for repairs!

Flare: Mars is pretty close, we can stop there.

Da Baron: Good idea, I'll get over there.



Da Baron: Well, it was a crash landing, but I can fix it up in a jiffy. Do you want to...

A. Continue the space adventure with Da Baron

B. Return home with Da Baron

C. Stay on Mars


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Flare: Well, since I'm not going on an adventure, I might as well take a spin in my new speeder!



*hits people and crash through stuff*

Flare: AAAAH! I forgot! I failed the driving test!!! AAAH! How do I slow this thing down!?!



Eventually, after 5 hours of driving at top speed, the speeder broke down and crashed. Flare is lost.

Da Baron: Hey Flare! Do you need a ride? I'm about to fly over to Pluto, it'll be fun! You want to come with me?

Do you want to...

A. Take the ride

B. Stay in the wild.


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*zooooooom*



*CRASH*

Flare: AAAAAAAAHHHHHHH!!



After flying through space for half an hour, Flare crashes onto a lonely asteroid in the middle of space.

What should he do?

A. Find a safe place to sleep

B. Scream and run in panic


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AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!



AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!



Flare faints of exhaustion and falls asleep. zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

Continue...


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Flare: Hey, this looks like a nice place to sleep.



zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz...

Continue...


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Flare wakes up in the morning. He is utterly starving. But he is also bruised and exhausted.

What should he do?

A. Lay around, and do nothing

B. Look around the island for food and things


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Flare: Hey look! A half-eaten hamburger! Something to eat!



Flare starts to eat it and dies of food poisoning. The end.

You lost, sorry. Want to start over?


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Flare: Hey look, some stuff! Hi doggie!

Dog: Whoah whoah, watch who you're giving pet names, buddy.

Flare: Oh, sorry there.



Flare: Ah, just like home! Besides the fact that it isn't at all like home. But it will do.



Flare: I feel like exploring... which way should I go?

A. Explore left

B. Explore right


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Flare goes to the left, but cannibal aliens attack him!!



Nom nom nom... smells like something tasty is brewing on the fire!

You lost, sorry. Want to start over?


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Flare goes to the right, and discovers some cannibal aliens about to eat another alien! Thankfully they don't notice him.



Bam bam bam!

They're all dead, and the poor almost-eaten alien has fallen to the ground.



Flare: I will name you Friday, since I rescued you on Friday. I must teach you how to speak.

Alien: Thats OK, I can already speak.

Flare: Oh, sorry there.

Alien: Thank you so much for saving my life! I hate being eaten. I will be your humble servant for the rest of my life.

Flare: Aw, thank you so much, but I'm not sure if I really want a slave bugging me for the rest of my life...

Should Flare...

A. Be mean to the alien and tell him to go away

B. Be nice to the alien and treat him like an equal


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Alien: Go away!? Go away!? YOU MEANIE!!



The alien eats Flare, congratulations! He dies.

You lost, sorry. Want to start over?


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Alien: I love you! I will love you forever!

*hug*



Alien: I want to be helpful, what project can I do for you?

Should the alien...

A. Build a trap to catch wild animals so they can eat something besides vegetables and croissants

B. Build a fire so they can stay warm at night


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Alien is building a nifty trap.



Flare: HEY! A carrot! I'm hungry, it looks good...



Flare died in the trap, because he was hungry. Good job there.

You lost, sorry. Want to start over?


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Flare: Ah, a warm fire. Thanks Alien!

Alien: You're welcome!



Da Baron: Hey, Flare!!

Flare: Da Baron! How did you find me!?

Da Baron: I saw the light of your campfire, I'm so glad I found you!

Flare: I am too! C'mon, Alien, lets get aboard!



And they live happily ever after... if they travel through space safely of course. Congratulations, you have successfully completed (or possibly cheated) my interactive story!


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Thank you for playing! Credit for the ship goes to Da Baron (AKA Baron Burrito. Thanks for the contribution!


If you completed the whole game without dying once, please say so! Thanks for viewing!




Comments

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  June 9, 2013
Great job! I love killing you over and over >:)
  August 8, 2012
This is so cool! I did it without dying! I even told my sister to do it she didn't have as good luck... XD
  July 30, 2012
I figured out how to see it. MWA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA!!!!
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  July 10, 2012
That's genius I never would have thought to do that. It truly is magic if you don't know how to view the html version of the page.
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  June 25, 2012
Quoting Flare: Magic, Thats not funny.
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  June 23, 2012
Quoting Timothy Dillman What html code did you use to do this?
Magic
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  June 22, 2012
What html code did you use to do this?
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  June 10, 2012
This was great! You should check out mine!
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  April 16, 2012
Robinson curseo....love that book ... I cheated:(
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  April 16, 2012
Robinson curseo....love that book ... I cheated:(
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  April 13, 2012
Excellent photography!
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  April 12, 2012
Ooh! More!
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  April 11, 2012
Quoting Space Gypsy . Just got eaten by cannibal aliens. Great work. I'd like to see another from you, Flare.
LOL :P Don't worry... another one is in the makings...
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  April 11, 2012
Just got eaten by cannibal aliens. Great work. I'd like to see another from you, Flare.
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  March 29, 2012
i died every time.
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  March 25, 2012
Awesome creation. Awesome story. I beat it on my first try (it's still awesome).
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  February 10, 2012
I died 0 times without cheating.
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  December 15, 2011
I died once.
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  November 14, 2011
Aw, man! Flare died like 5 times, I'm so terrible at this game! lol
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  November 14, 2011
Wow! That is very creative! You should write more!
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  October 29, 2011
Vey cool!!!
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  October 8, 2011
I completed it on my second try!
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  October 4, 2011
Great build and a clever idea. It doesn't work perfectly, but I'm sure you'll keep at these getting better and better. 5 stars for originality, but keep working on it : )
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  October 4, 2011
Cunning.
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  September 30, 2011
Sweet! it was awesome i loved the alien haha! hug
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  September 29, 2011
Hehe. That was fun.
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  September 29, 2011
Quoting Austin Durick this was great!!! i can belive you got it to take you to a certian place on the page!
Thank you, I'm planning on doing another one soon so keep an eye out for it!
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  September 29, 2011
this was great!!! i can belive you got it to take you to a certian place on the page!
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  July 2, 2011
Really nice and interesting concept, I love it! Thanks for your kind comment on my sub! =)
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  June 27, 2011
Quoting Trinity Fyre I didn't die...Although Flare threw a maniacal fit running and screaming...Does he usually do that?
No, not usually
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  June 26, 2011
I didn't die...Although Flare threw a maniacal fit running and screaming...Does he usually do that?
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  June 23, 2011
Quoting Freeling ++ This is on your most popular... :P
Whoa awesome :D
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  June 22, 2011
Nice! again...
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  June 22, 2011
Interesting concept. >Eric
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  June 22, 2011
This is on your most popular... :P
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  June 22, 2011
wow i died :(
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  June 21, 2011
I Live On My First Try YAY!
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  June 20, 2011
This was really fun, although I died in every way possible before I finally got through!:)
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  June 19, 2011
Haha, this is funny. The first time I was owned by the dang hamburger, but the second time I made it through to completion. Wooooo!!!! Yeahhhhh!!!! I also like the Robinson Crusoe reference. hehehe =) Great CYOA -Andrew
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  June 19, 2011
hehe, this where pretty funny, both the story and the interactive thing, it where brilliant, and i gotta admit you died 3 times 2 times because of the hamburger and 1 at the starv to death in a net. brilliant, and the robinson cruso comment : i will call you friday . well that where funny to. but now you life happy to the day that you get home and is being killed by your farther, becasue you left
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  June 19, 2011
What I do with theese is After I died or won I start again and do different things.
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  June 18, 2011
WOW JUST WOW
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  June 17, 2011
that was really cool! awesome job!
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  June 17, 2011
I love this interactive story!I had a real good time with it!
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  June 17, 2011
Awesome! When I first saw this, I thought it was going to be a comment grabbing CYOA. This was a nice surprise. It is a great idea and was good fun. You should do more. I don't quite see what the Ewok had to be flamed by the speeder but apart from that, it was very good. Getting to kill you multiple times was a good bonus!
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  June 17, 2011
Great idea! I actually won the on the first try!
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  June 17, 2011
Hahaha, that was pretty fun :) Sorry about killing you multiple times thought.
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  June 17, 2011
I have killed you 3 times. :P Cool idea for interactive story, I like it!
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  June 17, 2011
Make another one! Continiuing from here!
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  June 17, 2011
Quoting Sebeus I You don't want to know what places I'll show that "1" if you keep up :P
I don't know what you're talking about, oh Sir Sebeus 1 :P
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  June 17, 2011
Quoting Ben (Flare) Hehe thanks Sebeus 1!
You don't want to know what places I'll show that "1" if you keep up :P
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  June 17, 2011
Quoting E.K.O (On vacation) It took me a few tries but I finally came to the end. :P And the front of the yellow ship looks a bit like the airspeeder I posted a long time ago. How did you do the HTML that takes you down on the page?
Magic :P
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  June 17, 2011
Quoting Connor Simpson I must admit, I much prefer this to the CYOA idea, because it doesn't force one to comment to participate. You can choose to comment if the story is good. Great job. I love the "you ate the hamburger and die of food poisoning."
Thanks!
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  June 17, 2011
Wow, it's an incredible idea, and great story!
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  June 16, 2011
I must admit, I much prefer this to the CYOA idea, because it doesn't force one to comment to participate. You can choose to comment if the story is good. Great job. I love the "you ate the hamburger and die of food poisoning."
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  June 16, 2011
It took me a few tries but I finally came to the end. :P And the front of the yellow ship looks a bit like the airspeeder I posted a long time ago. How did you do the HTML that takes you down on the page?
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  June 16, 2011
Quoting George G. I didn't just spend quarter-of-an-hour trying to complete that :P It was great! But I did get angry at it quite a few times :)
Hehe, if I make another I'll make it super frustating just for you :P
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  June 16, 2011
Quoting nick sloot awesome you should so make a seccond one
Maybe I will!
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  June 16, 2011
Quoting morthen poulsen hehe, this where pretty funny, both the story and the interactive thing, it where brilliant, and i gotta admit you died 3 times 2 times because of the hamburger and 1 at the starv to death in a net. brilliant, and the robinson cruso comment : i will call you friday . well that where funny to. but now you life happy to the day that you get home and is being killed by your farther, becasue you left
I'm glad you liked it! Hehe yeah I read Robinson Crusoe recently
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  June 16, 2011
Quoting Sebeus I Very nice, good job with the internal links, works great for this kind of moc, story was a bit silly but funny ending :P nicely done
Hehe thanks Sebeus 1!
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  June 16, 2011
I didn't just spend quarter-of-an-hour trying to complete that :P It was great! But I did get angry at it quite a few times :)
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  June 16, 2011
awesome you should so make a seccond one
Flare .
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Beaver Boy .
  June 15, 2011
I completed it without dying once.. Although my internet is slow and I can't see the pictures D:
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  June 15, 2011
I like how u made it to where u can choose ur own path. Thats Legit! Excelent Job!
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  June 15, 2011
Briliant idea!
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  June 15, 2011
Very nice, good job with the internal links, works great for this kind of moc, story was a bit silly but funny ending :P nicely done
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  June 15, 2011
Quoting AA (Noname) Clever idea, funny MOC. The build is not your best, in my opinion: I don't like the floor in his house, and this one is almost featureless: http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/Flare-icious/InteractiveStory/scene_02.2.jpg For the blimp I suggest using a bigger sphere, and make it a bit longer (ellipsoid). The asteroids were nice. The sand landscape was good, and the rocky landscape was also nice.
I didn't make the blimp, it was designed by Baron Burrito. I have passed on the tips though!
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  June 15, 2011
Quoting Beaver Boy . I completed it without dying once.. Although my internet is slow and I can't see the pictures D:
My internet speed isn't slow and I can't see the pictures either D: this isn't good. I'm going to have to reupload them all (oh what a pain)
Flare .
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AA (Noname)
  June 14, 2011
Clever idea, funny MOC. The build is not your best, in my opinion: I don't like the floor in his house, and this one is almost featureless: http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/Flare-icious/InteractiveStory/scene_02.2.jpg For the blimp I suggest using a bigger sphere, and make it a bit longer (ellipsoid). The asteroids were nice. The sand landscape was good, and the rocky landscape was also nice.
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  June 14, 2011
haha cool i bet my dad would not let me go on a intergalactic adventure.
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  June 14, 2011
Thanks everyone for your encouraging comments, I am very glad you liked it! Yes, it did take a while to build. Although the builds are not the most detailed, I hope that the creative storyline helped make up for it (its difficult to build 4+ fully detailed scenes without having to destroy them for parts the second I finish taking pictures).
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  June 14, 2011
Haha, really good fun and thanks for your effort to put it all together! I died 3 times, never was much good at these games...
Flare .
General Asher S.
  June 13, 2011
I won! I won!
Flare .
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Cheesy Q
  June 13, 2011
At first, I ate a poisoned burger, but then the next time, I won.
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  June 13, 2011
I died... Stupid half-eaten hamburger:(
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  June 13, 2011
most interesting with the slight hint of difference,To be frank,sorry but i laughed when i saw flare had died, a great build with great usage of the hyper links! i don't want to sound like a noob but could you please check out this please-http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/272097
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  June 13, 2011
Wow, I suck. Good job though!
  June 13, 2011
Nice story! I only died once, food poisoning. :-P
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  June 13, 2011
bleh, cannibals.....
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  June 13, 2011
As they say....curiosity killed the cat....I went link crazy and died numerous times, :P Very well done putting this together.... -Micah
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  June 13, 2011
Well, I finished it... I died once(Stupid food poisoning... I stated that before didn't I?) And now after thinking like a human and not the non-athletics, bookfull type of simple-minded being(Or NABFSMB for short) I congratulate you as making this must have taken ages!
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  June 13, 2011
Very well done! I love this MOC. It is a very good idea. hope you do another one! I died pretty much at every opportunity I could. XP 5/5! ~Stay green
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  June 13, 2011
Cool, I didn't die once.
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  June 13, 2011
I didn't get it at all until I realized that the choices are links -_- And by the time I realized that my Flare had died and reanimated many times already. Ha ha! Great story anyways.
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  June 13, 2011
this is so great! love it! (although i havent beaten it yet.....)
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  June 13, 2011
I got eaten by CA cuz left is always right!
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  June 13, 2011
Hehe, I watched you die over, and over, and over, and over, and over, and over...
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  June 13, 2011
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! This is brilliant! Loved it all. XD I actually died three times before I got it right. O.O Oops. Anyway, that was awesome and clever. Make more. :D
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  June 13, 2011
haha! What a great idea! Yeah, I died... and cheated to see what other great story lines you'd come up with! Great job! A very fun game to play.
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  June 13, 2011
I, without realising, scrolled through it all, reading it as I went, so I apologise. Either way, its a cool and funny story!
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  June 13, 2011
This. Is. AWESOME! :) I died the first time though, I got caught in the aliens trap. :P
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  June 13, 2011
lol thats funny! I actually survived! BTW how did you make it so it would go all over the page?
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  June 13, 2011
Darned cannibals! Nice work on this, Dude, must have been difficult to organize, eh?
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  June 13, 2011
COOL mind checking this out:http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/274487
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  June 13, 2011
My Flare ate the hamburger :-(. This was actually a very pleasant distraction from the horror that is a Monday workday.
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  June 13, 2011
I died a lot. Haha nice story!
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  June 13, 2011
O, O, OM... OMG!!! This is the first time I've ever played a choose your own adventure and LIVED!!!! Thank you so much for a fun 5 minutes of procrastination Flare! Excellent story! What's your trick... you know, to the linking.... I got the ending where he lives happily ever after with his alien friend. I'm waiting for your next one!
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  June 13, 2011
Hey this was very cool! lol I didn't die one time:)
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  June 13, 2011
I didn't cheat and Flare survived. =)
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  June 13, 2011
Dang that was good. My Flare died in the Carrot trap, but scrolling down revived him I guess. :D
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  June 13, 2011
Quoting Yuri Fassio Cool, my Flare was eaten by cannibal aliens!
Good work :P
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  June 13, 2011
Quoting T.K . This is great! So clever, it must of taken a long time to get all the links right... I didn't die either! Well done! :)
Yeah it took a while, I'm glad you like it! Thanks :)
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  June 13, 2011
Cool, my Flare was eaten by cannibal aliens!
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  June 13, 2011
This is great! So clever, it must of taken a long time to get all the links right... I didn't die either! Well done! :)
 
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