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Ripping Truths: Part 3
Part 3 of my new comic...Enjoy!...
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Part 1
Part 2

Last time, Nexus went to a Toa base, looking for a strange new power source the Toa discovered, when Makuta Butcher beat him to it and got away with the Golden Hau.


At the Black Temple of the BRL.


Rorge: Well, once you are ready, go after that Makuta and bring me that mask. Understood?
Nexus: ....Yes, sir.

Nexus: Hmm...what would they want with the Golden Hau?


*BAM!*
Nexus: What?

*BAM!*
*CRASH!*
Nexus: What is that?...

Yaaaa!!
Nexus: A-a Toa??


*POW!*
Nexus: Oof!
Chrisix: Ha ha! Got one Brakix!

*CRACK!*
Chrisix: Whoa!
*BOOM!*

Nexus appears elsewhere in the Temple.

Nexus: Guard, run and tell Rorge we're under attack!

Guard: Yes, my lord!

Cossy: Yaa!!
Nexus: Cossy??
Guard: Agghhh!!

Cossy: Ha ha! That'll teach him!

Nexus: Cossy! How did you find this place?
Cossy: We followed you when you suddenly left.

Cossy: Say, Nexus, how'd you get here--

Nexus: Argh!

*Crack!*
*BOOM!*

Nexus: I must find Rorge!

Nexus: *Gasp!* Rorge? Rorge!

Nexus: Oh no!
Different Guard: Nexus the Toa are-- *Gasp!* What happened?
Nexus: ...The Toa...

Brakix: Hey-hey! Nexus! Over here!

Nexus: Argh!!!

*Crack!*
*BOOM!*

Brakix: Wha--?
*Crack!*

Brakix: Whoa!
*Bang!*
*Crack!*

Brakix: Arg...Take this monster!
*Clash!*
*BOOM!*

Nexus: Monster? Monster? Who's the monster you murderer!!
Brakix: Wha-? Aaaaggh!!
*Crack!*

*BOOM!*
Guard: Sir, we've driven the rest of the Toa off.
Nexus: ...Good.

Guard: Sir, didn't he recognize you?
Nexus: No, with my powers of lightning I made sure he couldn't get a good look. He thought I was a normal...monster...


Meanwhile.

Butcher: I have got it, master.

????: Ah, good! You have once again, managed to please me, Butcher.
Butcher: Thank you, master.

????: And now, with this, there will be no way of stopping us from destroying the Toa and those pesky little lightning bugs. Ha ha ha ha!


To be continued...


I hope you like it! I featured two of my bro's MOCs in there, the ones with the Takanuva masks. I also decided to keep my current buddy icon. ;)

Please rate and comment!



Comments

  June 19, 2011
well certainly better, but i don't really understand the action with all the BOOM's and "AHH"'s, but it's a great story.
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  June 15, 2011
Quoting Toa Oblivious ,Master of Earth
WOWZA!
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  June 15, 2011
Quoting Grant W. (at camp)
Thanks bro.
Legofreak2444 ~
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COMMANDER JAKE *
  June 14, 2011
EPIC!
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  June 14, 2011
WoW!
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  June 14, 2011
Very nice!
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  June 14, 2011
Quoting Ben Cossy
Thanks bro!
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  June 14, 2011
Quoting Pie's burrito (Hun-grr)
Thank you.
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  June 14, 2011
Quoting Overlord Galaxus ( Instant Noodles)
Thanks Noodles!
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  June 14, 2011
Quoting Callsign Justice .
Thanks.
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  June 14, 2011
Sweet :D Another great Chapter! Well at least Cossy is alive :D Anyway, great work! Nice Cliffhanger! I can't wait for more :D
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  June 14, 2011
Cool story bro.
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  June 14, 2011
So far so good! Great story.
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Chaos Master
  June 13, 2011
awesome comic so far, make more soon! btw how long do you think it will be?
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Mark E
  June 13, 2011
Wow dude that was a lot of boom and bang!
Legofreak2444 ~
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S. :D
  June 13, 2011
Oh snap it keeps getting better!
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  June 13, 2011
Cool story!
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  June 13, 2011
Quoting Mark E
It's "Crack" and "BOOM!" :P
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  June 13, 2011
Quoting Robin Longstride
Thanks.
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  June 13, 2011
Quoting Cody G
I think I have it but I can't get it to work really. I accidentally "X"d out the toolbar thingy showing the options and stuff so yeah. Maybe I can try downloading it again. ;)
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  June 13, 2011
Really nice episode! I can't wait to see who the mystery character is!! =D
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  June 13, 2011
Awesome! You should download GIMP, it'll give you some great red lightning effects.
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  June 13, 2011
Quoting S. :D
:D Thanks.
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  June 13, 2011
Quoting Someone even less popular
I'm just going to give it away now and say he isn't. :P Sorry.
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  June 13, 2011
Quoting Chaos Master
I don't know, as long as it takes to fit in all of the stuff I need to fit in it...uh, yeah. :P
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  June 13, 2011
Quoting Zam Himmaq
It's throttling me! Oh wait, I know what's going to happen. :P
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  June 13, 2011
THE SUSPENSE,...
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  June 13, 2011
COOL. Hey when is Tahu going to turn up and beat the [celfcensored] out of them?
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  June 13, 2011
Quoting Gregory Keegan
Yes he is. :)
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  June 13, 2011
Quoting Decker .
Thank you.
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  June 13, 2011
Quoting Moon Shadow
Thanks.
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  June 13, 2011
Quoting Nick Nitro Brick
Yeah, I know. :/
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  June 13, 2011
Yay, it's a good icon!
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  June 13, 2011
Quoting S.T.S .
Honestly: ...You'll have to wait to find out.
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  June 13, 2011
good work! oh and is nexus your secondary self moc?
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  June 13, 2011
cool.
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  June 13, 2011
awesome!!! epic job my friend!!
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  June 13, 2011
nice but to be honest fighting is boring :/ but nice anyway.
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  June 13, 2011
I know its him,be honest :P LOL
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  June 13, 2011
Quoting ware wolf
Thanks sure thing.
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  June 13, 2011
Quoting Callan Lord of Fire
Aye! Thanks for commenting!
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  June 13, 2011
Quoting S.T.S .
Hehe, maybe...maybe not. :P
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  June 13, 2011
niicee! i really like it! :D could u check ot my self-moc?
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  June 13, 2011
Ooooooh! Rorge is dead! And so the plot thickens!
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  June 13, 2011
Cool,who could the mystery MOC be?Maybe Destrin?Hmmmm?Hmmmm?Hmmm?
 
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