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Ripping Truths: Part 4
Part 4 of my comic...Enjoy!...
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Last time, the Toa followed Nexus to the Black Temple and found that the inhabitants were enemies, including Nexus. Nexus then found that the Toa had killed Rorge. The BRL then drove them off and Nexus defeated Brakix, taking him prisoner.


In the Black Temple in the clouds, Brakix is chained up in the dungeons.


Brakix: Nexus! Why are you doing this? It's me, Brakix, your Toa commander!
Nexus: I know who you are, but I do have a question for you.

Nexus: Why did you do it?
Brakix: Do what? I don't know what you're talking about!!

Nexus: WHY DID YOU KILL RORGE!?
Brakix: Nexus, I swear I didn't kill anybody!
Nexus: Brakix! WHY!?
Brakix: Ow!

Brakix: GREAT BEINGS NEXUS!! I DIDN'T HARM ANYONE!! I SWEAR!!

Brakix: ...Ugh...
Nexus: I hope you're used to these chains Brakix.

Nexus: Huh? Who's that?

????: Yes, assemble everyone.
Nexus: Who are you?

????: Ah, you must be Nexus. I'm Raji, the new leader of our Brotherhood.

Nexus: But why would you become leader and not-...and not me? I knew Rorge better than anyone.

Raji: Ah yes, I'm sure that's what he would have wanted. But let's face it, you don't have that much experience in the field of leading, and you're so young. It's best to leave it to us who are more qualified. Understand?
Nexus: Uh-...Yes...sir.

Raji: Good man. Now if you'll excuse me, I have to address the troops.

Raji: We have upgraded our, armor, we have upgraded out leadership, and now we can accomplish the goal we set out to do when we first came here! Spherus Magna will be ours, and no one will stand in our way!!...Dismissed.

Raji: Nexus, just the blood thirsty lightning bug I wanted to see.
Nexus: Pardon?
Raji: Never mind, I want you to go and take care of those Toa down at the fort a few miles yonder. The should be weakened up a bit with their missing their leader and after the good whooping you gave them the other day. And I'm sure you'd be more than happy to, considering they killed Rorge.

Nexus: Um, yes...sir.

Raji: Excellent! This, Nexus, may prove your worth to me. First these few Toa, then the rest shall be easy!

At the Toa fort.

Ritix: But what do we do? With Brakix gone and...Nexus...
Cossy: Yes, peculiar situation isn't it?
Chrisix: Hmm...looks like a storm is a-coming.

Ritix: What?

*CRACK!*

*BOOM!*
Cossy: Whoa! I can't see anything...or anyone.

*Crack!*
Ritix: Ow!
Cossy: Wha?
Chrisix: Hey guys--


*BLAM! BLAM!*
Chrisix: Agh!
Cossy: What? It's Nexus--


*BAMF!*
Cossy: Oh!

Chrisix: Ha! Got ya!

Chrisix: Nexus, why are you doing this?


Nexus: Guess.
*ZAP!*
Chrisix: Aaggghhhhh!!!

Meanwhile, back at the Black Temple.


Kennos: Here he is! It's Brakix!
Jordan: Good, cut him loose and let's get outta here!

Brakix:Kennos? Jordan? What are you guys doing here?
Kennos: No time to explain now.

Kennos: We were sent here by the OoMN to investigate this mysterious black cloud and we heard there was a Toa being held here.

Jordan: What happened to the part about "No time to explain right now"?
Kennos: Right, let's go!

Jordan: Come on, the other Toa are in trouble!

To be continued...

3 chapters to go. I'll try to get them ASAP.
Please rate and comment!



Comments

 I like it 
  June 20, 2011
ahhhhh..... so epic!!!!!
  June 18, 2011
I cant help but correct you that comic implies that the story is funny.Nice bionicles though.
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  June 18, 2011
Good story.
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  June 18, 2011
Excellent! Can't wait to see 5,..
 I made it 
  June 18, 2011
Thanks guys.
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  June 18, 2011
Inika-based custom torso FTW.
  June 17, 2011
I agree your backgrounds need to change.
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  June 17, 2011
nice!it could do with a better background
 I like it 
  June 17, 2011
nice!it could do with a better background
 I like it 
  June 17, 2011
Another great episode! Well done!
 I made it 
  June 17, 2011
Quoting Callan Lord of Fire
It's Raji, not Haji. ;) Yeah, you kinda gave me the idea, I'll give a new back story some time. :) Maybe I'll make a new comic. :)
 I made it 
  June 17, 2011
Quoting Cheesy Q
What makes you say that? Never mind. :P
 I made it 
  June 17, 2011
Quoting Toa Oblivious ,Master of Earth
Sorry man, I'm not making anymore Bionicles for this story right now. I have it all summed up. Sorry again. :(
 I made it 
  June 17, 2011
Quoting WindEdge Gemini
What Noodles said, I covered the flash with my finger. ;)
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  June 17, 2011
Quoting Overlord Galaxus ( Instant Noodles)
Correct. Thanks Noodles!
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  June 17, 2011
Quoting Ben Cossy
Ha ha. Thanks, you'll have to wait. :P
 I like it 
  June 17, 2011
WOW thrilling story,cant wait for the next one!
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  June 17, 2011
Awesome just an awesome story.
 I like it 
  June 17, 2011
Great episode! I can't wait till the next one!!! =D
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  June 17, 2011
So many un-answered questions! Is Raji evil, did he kill Rorge, will Jordan and the others escape in time, but the most important one, will Cossy survive :P Anyway, great chapter! This was one of the best yet! Oh and I agree with Chessy too :P Great work bro ;)
 I like it 
  June 17, 2011
@windedge, He used his finger to cover the flash. - Another great chapter!
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  June 17, 2011
Sch-weet!Man,if Destrin was there XD
Legofreak2444 ~
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Toa Oblivious ,Master of Earth
  June 16, 2011
Could i be in it?
Legofreak2444 ~
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Chaos Master
  June 16, 2011
great story, I need to see more! please make it soon!
Legofreak2444 ~
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Cheesy Q
  June 16, 2011
that shot where nexus appears was too epic for words. And that new leader. Something tells me he killed Rorge.
Legofreak2444 ~
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S. :D
  June 16, 2011
I agree with Cheesy that shot was epic, great story continues to get better and better.
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Soap M.
  June 16, 2011
Keep on going! :) Excellent episode! :)
 I like it 
  June 16, 2011
Epic story! BTW how do you make that red tint for Nexus's lightning teleport?
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  June 16, 2011
Only 7? Eh, never mind, that's what TFT(The Forgotten Tale) had. Anyway, this story is very good!! But is Brakix the true murderer of Rorge?!? Or is this new Haji as worthy of leadership as he seems?!? And JORDAN!!! Glad he's in it!! BTW, did you always plan for him to be in the OoMN, or did I give you the idea? :D
 I like it 
  June 16, 2011
Very interesting... can't wait till next one :D
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  June 16, 2011
Best one yet. Keep them coming!
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  June 16, 2011
Sweet! Can't wait for more. =)
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  June 16, 2011
Cool episode.Sorry I haven't been following the series.
 
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