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Ripping Truths: Part 5
Part 5 of my comic...Enjoy!...
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Some epic music to get you in the mood.


Last time we, the new leader of the BRL, Raji, sent Nexus to the Toa fortress to get rid of the Toa there.

At the Toa Fortress, Nexus and a BRL soldier have put all the Toa into unconsciousness.


Nexus: Good work soldier.

Cossy: Nexus, why are you doing this?

Nexus: We all have paths laid before us Cossy, mine was chosen for me.

Cossy: You don't have to do this Nexus.

*CRACK!*
*BOOM!*

Raji: Well done Nexus, you have proven your worth-- wait a minute...

Raji: These Toa aren't dead! Nexus, there's no good in keeping them alive!


Nexus: Yes but, I...sir, I...
Raji: Nexus, I understand your passion for the weak but can't let them live, it's like an infection, if you don't treat it, it will grow into a monster!

Nexus: I know sir but, these-these are my...my...I know them.
Raji: Ah, making connections with the wrong people are we? Nexus, this is your last chance to please me, take "care" of them, now!
Nexus: ...Sir, I've been forced to do this sort of thing before, and I will not make a mistake like that again!


Raji: ...I understand, Nexus.

*WHOP!*
Nexus: Ungh!

Raji: You see this is what happens when people get soft hearted towards the enemy! This is why Rorge never accomplished anything in his pathetic career of leadership! This is why one, such as yourself, Nexus, are in the way of my plan to rule Spherus Magna...so I'm afraid I'll have to dispose of you...like I did your...master.
Nexus: Wha-??

Raji: Gentlemen!

Butcher: Roaarr!!


Nexus: ...

Nexus: ...I-Impossible!...

Catok: Hello, Nexus.

To be continued...

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Comments

 I like it 
  June 20, 2011
pure epicness!!!!! sick job dude!!!!!
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  June 19, 2011
Interesting...
  June 19, 2011
nice, i like the guy with the viking helmet!
 I like it 
  June 18, 2011
nice
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  June 18, 2011
Quoting Zam Himmaq
Thanks buddy! I'll probably put it up today.
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  June 18, 2011
Wonderful work! I really want to see the next one!
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  June 18, 2011
Quoting Ben Cossy
The pictures are supposed to be like it's dark outside cause the black clouds are over. I think it worked well, except for the bright reflections. :P Thanks man!
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  June 18, 2011
Quoting Overlord Galaxus ( Instant Noodles)
Thanks Noodles!
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  June 18, 2011
Quoting COMMANDER JAKE *
Ha ha! Yeah, perfect music. :)
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  June 18, 2011
Quoting Someone even less popular
Thanks, can't say.
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  June 18, 2011
Quoting S. :D
Thanks! That means a lot. :)
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  June 18, 2011
Quoting Toa Turbine
Thanks Turbine!
 I like it 
  June 18, 2011
Catok is EPICNESS! Does this mean that at any time jordan might bust in?
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  June 18, 2011
I KNEW IT! CATOK LIVESSSSS! Great story so far!
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  June 18, 2011
Brilliant work! Lovely cliffhanger to end with :D The pictures seemed wierd though, still great work! This just gets more awesome with every chapter :D
Legofreak2444 ~
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Toa Oblivious ,Master of Earth
  June 17, 2011
I knew he wouldnt die! and i wnat to swoop in with back up (if u made me...)
Legofreak2444 ~
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Chaos Master
  June 17, 2011
ok. that Golden mask in his chest is EPIC. gosh, I don't know how to express how amazing it is! I saw him and was like "Whoa, now THAT'S awesome!"
Legofreak2444 ~
Cheesy Q
  June 17, 2011
undead Catok. not good. I was RIGHT! that guy DID kill rorge.
Legofreak2444 ~
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Mark E
  June 17, 2011
. Epic.
Legofreak2444 ~
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S. :D
  June 17, 2011
I can't tell u how epic this story is becoming can't wait till the next one.
Legofreak2444 ~
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COMMANDER JAKE *
  June 17, 2011
AWESOME!!! as I was nearing the end the music got louder and got the loudest when I got to the part " Hello Nexus" EPIC!! Keep it up!
Legofreak2444 ~
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JPfan65 Studios
  June 17, 2011
Cool!
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Soap M.
  June 17, 2011
Haha, the next one! :D Love it, nice episode! :D By the way, I finished my self-MOC, Its A-W-S-O-M-E!!!!! I L-O-V-E it!!!!
 I like it 
  June 17, 2011
Sweet!Can you fav me JK!Man,that was a noob joke XD :P LOL
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  June 17, 2011
I am loving your story!
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  June 17, 2011
Quoting lone wolf
Thanks. Do you know what the music is from?
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  June 17, 2011
Poor nexus.... The music helps greatly and the last guy with the golden mask in the chest is cool.
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  June 17, 2011
Thanks guys.
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  June 17, 2011
Quoting Jamus Prime the Geodude
Yes he was. >:D
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  June 17, 2011
Quoting Callan Lord of Fire
I don't know, the story he has now is...outdated. :P
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  June 17, 2011
Quoting Cheesy Q
Yeah, I suppose it was kinda obvious huh? :P
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  June 17, 2011
Ha, I knew that he killed Rorge. Awesome episode, looks like the Raji pulled a Zombie trick, eh? :D And BTW, I don't think you should change Jordan's back story, I was only curious. I think it's COOL he works for the OoMN. :D
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  June 17, 2011
Ha, I knew that he killed Rorge. Awesome episode, looks like the Raji pulled a Zombie trick, eh? :D And BTW, I don't think you should change Jordan's back story, I was only curious. I think it's COOL he works for the OoMN. :D
 I like it 
  June 17, 2011
Awesome twist, this is great!
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  June 17, 2011
wasn't Catok Nexus' friend in the first part? and great story can't wait til' the next one comes out! and this one was kinda' short but still great story!
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  June 17, 2011
I knew Rigi killed Rorge! ,Shadow
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  June 17, 2011
poor poor poor nexus! "sniffles" but he will get his revenge i hope at least! XD
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  June 17, 2011
Poor Nexus. You can't help but... OH SNAP!!!!
 
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