Last time, Raji, Makuta Butcher and Catok, raided the Toa Fortress and knocked out Nexus. Cossy, then killed Butcher but Catok and Raji are still at large.
At the Toa Fortress.
Catok: Ha ha! How's this feel Toa?
Brakix: Argh! Ow--!
Catok: Raar! You're all mine Nexus.
Catok: You're a lot weaker than I remember. Of course, that could just be my...flimsy memory!
Catok: Ah! You know Nexus, I think this is going to be the best moment of my life.
Catok: I'm sure you know what it feels like!...Nexus!
Catok: Nexus, In case this hasn't been made clear, I really don't like you right now.
Nexus: Catok...this is...the-the Golden Ha--
Nexus: Urrgghhh!! (Sorry for the sideways pic)
Catok: Yes Nexus, I'm sure you recognize this, it's the Golden Hau of that coward Toa, Tahu.
Catok: With it, I have been brought back from the depths of Hades, and it's power, is my power.
Catok: Nexus, are you listening, this is probably the last voice you'll ever here.
Catok: Argh! That was my favorite hand...no matter, it will grow back momentarily.
Nexus: But you won't.
Catok: No, no, my hand.
Catok: Oh well, It only takes one hand to slit a throat!
No, no! Don't kill me! I swear, I make a brilliant armor buffer. I mean, it's my secret uh,...profession!
Chrisix: Are you okay Sitix?
Sitix: I-I'll be fine.
Kennos: It's amazing! There's evidence of Lightning burns but his internal organs are all intact! And the Hau, It-it's...glowing, but not like golden glow like...I don't know. It's fantastic!
Jordan: Is he alive?
Kennos: I'm not sure.
Jordan: Sigh...Nexus is nowhere in sight...I hope he's alright.
Kennos: He's a smart cookie, even if he's a twisted one.
Jordan: Yeah, but still, there was something about him...like, never mind. Farewell, Nexus.
The End... For now.
Well that's it. Let's see what happens. I'll probably start something new soon. ;)
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well, the story itself wasn't amazing, but it was pretty good. But it was nothing compared to it's ending! EPIC! yeah my story will end, then I'll have to make the first part, then i'd probably go back and continue my storyline, IF I'm still with bionicle. 5 on 5! EPIC JOB
Wow! It was a good idea to put the hau in Catok's chest. It's too bad that he might be dead. But if he's not dead is that good or bad? He's a makuta now, isn't he? If he's alive. But if he's dead, then I should talk about him in the past tense?
I like it
Toa Oblivious ,Master of Earth
June 20, 2011
:O where is he?
I like it
June 20, 2011
I love, the way you, pose 2444! :D Nice work.
Fare well, Nexus...
NICE! What a brilliant ending :D I like that you didn't go all out on the final battle, it was just the right size :D Great work with this whole thing Legofreak :D And to answer your question from before, I'm not too sure when you'll be in my comic, I'll try and fit you in as soon as I can, when I post chapter 8 I'll let you know ;) Anyway, brilliant ending to a brilliant story :D Hope you do more :D