The Final part to my comic. A final battle. Enjoy!...
About this creation
Part 1
Part 2
Part 3
Part 4
Part 5
Part 6
Last time, Raji, Makuta Butcher and Catok, raided the Toa Fortress and knocked out Nexus. Cossy, then killed Butcher but Catok and Raji are still at large.
At the Toa Fortress.
Nexus: C-Catok!
Catok: Ha ha! How's this feel Toa?
Brakix: Argh! Ow--!
Nexus: Catok!
*Wooosshh!*
Catok: Raaaarr!!!
Catok: Raar! You're all mine Nexus.
*BAM!*
Nexus: Ooh!
Catok: You're a lot weaker than I remember. Of course, that could just be my...flimsy memory!
Catok: Ah! You know Nexus, I think this is going to be the best moment of my life.
Catok: I'm sure you know what it feels like!...Nexus!
Nexus: Urgh!
Catok: Nexus, In case this hasn't been made clear, I really don't like you right now.
Nexus: Catok...this is...the-the Golden Ha--
*ZAAAP!!*
Nexus: Urrgghhh!! (Sorry for the sideways pic)
Catok: Yes Nexus, I'm sure you recognize this, it's the Golden Hau of that coward Toa, Tahu.
Catok: With it, I have been brought back from the depths of Hades, and it's power, is my power.
Catok: Nexus, are you listening, this is probably the last voice you'll ever here.
*Slice!*
Catok: Yow!
Catok: Argh! That was my favorite hand...no matter, it will grow back momentarily.
Nexus: But you won't.
Catok: No, no, my hand.
Catok: Oh well, It only takes one hand to slit a throat!
*CRACK!*
*BOOM!*
Catok: ARRRGHHH!!!
No, no! Don't kill me! I swear, I make a brilliant armor buffer. I mean, it's my secret uh,...profession!
Cossy: Uh-huh.
Chrisix: Are you okay Sitix?
Sitix: I-I'll be fine.
Kennos: It's amazing! There's evidence of Lightning burns but his internal organs are all intact! And the Hau, It-it's...glowing, but not like golden glow like...I don't know. It's fantastic!
Jordan: Is he alive?
Kennos: I'm not sure.
Jordan: Sigh...Nexus is nowhere in sight...I hope he's alright.
Kennos: He's a smart cookie, even if he's a twisted one.
Jordan: Yeah, but still, there was something about him...like, never mind.
Farewell, Nexus.
The End... For now.
Well that's it. Let's see what happens. I'll probably start something new soon. ;)
Please rate and comment!
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July 3, 2011 |
HOLY WOKAMOLEY!!! that is awesome!!! but wheer did Nexus go?
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June 21, 2011 |
Hey, this story ain't ova' yet!...I mean...there will be more. |
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June 21, 2011 |
well, the story itself wasn't amazing, but it was pretty good. But it was nothing compared to it's ending! EPIC! yeah my story will end, then I'll have to make the first part, then i'd probably go back and continue my storyline, IF I'm still with bionicle. 5 on 5! EPIC JOB |
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June 21, 2011 |
Wow! It was a good idea to put the hau in Catok's chest. It's too bad that he might be dead. But if he's not dead is that good or bad? He's a makuta now, isn't he? If he's alive. But if he's dead, then I should talk about him in the past tense? |
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Soap M. June 20, 2011 |
I love, the way you, pose 2444! :D Nice work.
Fare well, Nexus... |
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June 20, 2011 |
Quoting lone wolf
I can't say anything right now. |
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June 20, 2011 |
did the white guy die? i liked him |
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June 20, 2011 |
Quoting Green Ghost .
Which one? |
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June 20, 2011 |
Did he die? |
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June 20, 2011 |
Quoting Mark Murphy
Is that all you have to say? Sheesh! I know already. |
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June 20, 2011 |
the plot is good,but its hard to make out with no plain background |
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June 20, 2011 |
the plot is good,but its hard to make out with no plain background |
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June 20, 2011 |
sickepicness!!!!! great job my good friend!!!!! |
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June 20, 2011 |
Brill.
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June 20, 2011 |
awesome! |
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You need different backgrounds. |
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June 20, 2011 |
:O where is he? |
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June 20, 2011 |
Quoting Cody G
Maybe... :P |
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June 20, 2011 |
Nice! Is he inside the Hau? |
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June 20, 2011 |
Quoting Ben Cossy
Thanks Cossy! I'll wait for your word on that. :/ |
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June 20, 2011 |
Quoting Chaos Master
It IS just the beginning! >:D |
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June 20, 2011 |
Quoting Zam Himmaq
I'm sure I will! :D |
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June 20, 2011 |
Quoting Nathan Davis
What I just said to Pho. |
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June 20, 2011 |
Quoting Toa Phosphorus
The Golden mask brought him back to life, and Nexus killed him so he joined the Makuta to destroy the Toa and Nexus. ;) |
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June 20, 2011 |
Quoting Callan Lord of Fire
Maybe...actually...I can't give away anything now. :P |
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June 20, 2011 |
Quoting Peter Crasher the Powerlord
Oh yeah! I guess I can do that. :) |
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June 20, 2011 |
NICE! What a brilliant ending :D I like that you didn't go all out on the final battle, it was just the right size :D Great work with this whole thing Legofreak :D And to answer your question from before, I'm not too sure when you'll be in my comic, I'll try and fit you in as soon as I can, when I post chapter 8 I'll let you know ;) Anyway, brilliant ending to a brilliant story :D Hope you do more :D |
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June 20, 2011 |
Dang! Nice ending, I should really make one of these comic things. |
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Chaos Master June 19, 2011 |
dude. this comic just ended WAY sooner then I thought it would :( but nice ending, but really, I thought it was just the beginning! |
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S. :D June 19, 2011 |
Epic comic, great conclusion, nice battle too :D |
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June 19, 2011 |
Thrilling conclusion. Please do more, these are great! |
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June 19, 2011 |
Wonderful conclusion! You've got a good comic here. Speaking of comics, you're going to LOVE how mine ends,... |
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June 19, 2011 |
this is an awesome way to end it! great comic! *clap clap* * applause* *roses thrown* *firecrackers going off* |
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June 19, 2011 |
Awesome chapter =D |
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June 19, 2011 |
Great comic! Twisted cookie, lol. Great work, I'm going to make a comic once I'm finished with my next four MOCs. Awesome ending! |
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June 19, 2011 |
Great comic! Twisted cookie, lol. Great work, I'm going to make a comic once I'm finished with my next four MOCs. Awesome ending! |
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June 19, 2011 |
i love it!!! can't wait til the next one comes! great story! |
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June 19, 2011 |
I really like it, but I'm still kind of wondering why Catok is evil. |
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June 19, 2011 |
awesome!!!! Nice ending. How did catok come back though? Why is he bad now? |
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June 19, 2011 |
WOAH! i loved it! nice ending! keep it up! :) |
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June 19, 2011 |
Wow, that was great!! Will the next one be more centered on Jordan? Cause that would be good. :D Amazing work! |
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Also, how do you want to contribute to the Impossible Game storyline? Not trying to pressure you but I'm just asking. |
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June 19, 2011 |
Awesome! This ending is so epic! :D |
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June 19, 2011 |
Awesome! ,Shadow |
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