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Ripping Truths: Part 7
The Final part to my comic. A final battle. Enjoy!...
About this creation
Part 1
Part 2
Part 3
Part 4
Part 5
Part 6

Last time, Raji, Makuta Butcher and Catok, raided the Toa Fortress and knocked out Nexus. Cossy, then killed Butcher but Catok and Raji are still at large.

At the Toa Fortress.


Nexus: C-Catok!

Catok: Ha ha! How's this feel Toa?
Brakix: Argh! Ow--!

Nexus: Catok!




*Wooosshh!*
Catok: Raaaarr!!!

Catok: Raar! You're all mine Nexus.
*BAM!*
Nexus: Ooh!

Catok: You're a lot weaker than I remember. Of course, that could just be my...flimsy memory!

Catok: Ah! You know Nexus, I think this is going to be the best moment of my life.

Catok: I'm sure you know what it feels like!...Nexus!


Nexus: Urgh!
Catok: Nexus, In case this hasn't been made clear, I really don't like you right now.


Nexus: Catok...this is...the-the Golden Ha--
*ZAAAP!!*

Nexus: Urrgghhh!! (Sorry for the sideways pic)

Catok: Yes Nexus, I'm sure you recognize this, it's the Golden Hau of that coward Toa, Tahu.

Catok: With it, I have been brought back from the depths of Hades, and it's power, is my power.

Catok: Nexus, are you listening, this is probably the last voice you'll ever here.


*Slice!*
Catok: Yow!

Catok: Argh! That was my favorite hand...no matter, it will grow back momentarily.
Nexus: But you won't.

Catok: No, no, my hand.

Catok: Oh well, It only takes one hand to slit a throat!


*CRACK!*
*BOOM!*
Catok: ARRRGHHH!!!





No, no! Don't kill me! I swear, I make a brilliant armor buffer. I mean, it's my secret uh,...profession!
Cossy: Uh-huh.

Chrisix: Are you okay Sitix?
Sitix: I-I'll be fine.

Kennos: It's amazing! There's evidence of Lightning burns but his internal organs are all intact! And the Hau, It-it's...glowing, but not like golden glow like...I don't know. It's fantastic!
Jordan: Is he alive?
Kennos: I'm not sure.

Jordan: Sigh...Nexus is nowhere in sight...I hope he's alright.
Kennos: He's a smart cookie, even if he's a twisted one.
Jordan: Yeah, but still, there was something about him...like, never mind.
Farewell, Nexus.


The End... For now.

Well that's it. Let's see what happens. I'll probably start something new soon. ;)
Please rate and comment!



Comments

 I like it 
  July 3, 2011
HOLY WOKAMOLEY!!! that is awesome!!! but wheer did Nexus go?
 I made it 
  June 21, 2011
Hey, this story ain't ova' yet!...I mean...there will be more.
 I like it 
  June 21, 2011
well, the story itself wasn't amazing, but it was pretty good. But it was nothing compared to it's ending! EPIC! yeah my story will end, then I'll have to make the first part, then i'd probably go back and continue my storyline, IF I'm still with bionicle. 5 on 5! EPIC JOB
 I like it 
  June 21, 2011
Wow! It was a good idea to put the hau in Catok's chest. It's too bad that he might be dead. But if he's not dead is that good or bad? He's a makuta now, isn't he? If he's alive. But if he's dead, then I should talk about him in the past tense?
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Toa Oblivious ,Master of Earth
  June 20, 2011
:O where is he?
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Soap M.
  June 20, 2011
I love, the way you, pose 2444! :D Nice work. Fare well, Nexus...
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  June 20, 2011
Quoting lone wolf
I can't say anything right now.
 I like it 
  June 20, 2011
did the white guy die? i liked him
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  June 20, 2011
Quoting Green Ghost .
Which one?
 I like it 
  June 20, 2011
Did he die?
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  June 20, 2011
Quoting Mark Murphy
Is that all you have to say? Sheesh! I know already.
 I like it 
  June 20, 2011
the plot is good,but its hard to make out with no plain background
 I like it 
  June 20, 2011
the plot is good,but its hard to make out with no plain background
 I like it 
  June 20, 2011
sickepicness!!!!! great job my good friend!!!!!
 I like it 
  June 20, 2011
Brill.
 I like it 
  June 20, 2011
awesome!
  June 20, 2011
You need different backgrounds.
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  June 20, 2011
Quoting Cody G
Maybe... :P
 I like it 
  June 20, 2011
Nice! Is he inside the Hau?
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  June 20, 2011
Quoting Ben Cossy
Thanks Cossy! I'll wait for your word on that. :/
 I made it 
  June 20, 2011
Quoting Chaos Master
It IS just the beginning! >:D
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  June 20, 2011
Quoting Zam Himmaq
I'm sure I will! :D
 I made it 
  June 20, 2011
Quoting Nathan Davis
What I just said to Pho.
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  June 20, 2011
Quoting Toa Phosphorus
The Golden mask brought him back to life, and Nexus killed him so he joined the Makuta to destroy the Toa and Nexus. ;)
 I made it 
  June 20, 2011
Quoting Callan Lord of Fire
Maybe...actually...I can't give away anything now. :P
 I made it 
  June 20, 2011
Quoting Peter Crasher the Powerlord
Oh yeah! I guess I can do that. :)
 I like it 
  June 20, 2011
NICE! What a brilliant ending :D I like that you didn't go all out on the final battle, it was just the right size :D Great work with this whole thing Legofreak :D And to answer your question from before, I'm not too sure when you'll be in my comic, I'll try and fit you in as soon as I can, when I post chapter 8 I'll let you know ;) Anyway, brilliant ending to a brilliant story :D Hope you do more :D
 I like it 
  June 20, 2011
Dang! Nice ending, I should really make one of these comic things.
Legofreak2444 ~
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Peter Crasher the Powerlord
  June 19, 2011
Awesome! This ending is so epic! :D
Legofreak2444 ~
Peter Crasher the Powerlord
  June 19, 2011
Also, how do you want to contribute to the Impossible Game storyline? Not trying to pressure you but I'm just asking.
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Chaos Master
  June 19, 2011
dude. this comic just ended WAY sooner then I thought it would :( but nice ending, but really, I thought it was just the beginning!
Legofreak2444 ~
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S. :D
  June 19, 2011
Epic comic, great conclusion, nice battle too :D
 I like it 
  June 19, 2011
Thrilling conclusion. Please do more, these are great!
 I like it 
  June 19, 2011
Wonderful conclusion! You've got a good comic here. Speaking of comics, you're going to LOVE how mine ends,...
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  June 19, 2011
this is an awesome way to end it! great comic! *clap clap* * applause* *roses thrown* *firecrackers going off*
 I like it 
  June 19, 2011
Awesome chapter =D
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  June 19, 2011
Great comic! Twisted cookie, lol. Great work, I'm going to make a comic once I'm finished with my next four MOCs. Awesome ending!
 I like it 
  June 19, 2011
Great comic! Twisted cookie, lol. Great work, I'm going to make a comic once I'm finished with my next four MOCs. Awesome ending!
 I like it 
  June 19, 2011
i love it!!! can't wait til the next one comes! great story!
 I like it 
  June 19, 2011
I really like it, but I'm still kind of wondering why Catok is evil.
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  June 19, 2011
awesome!!!! Nice ending. How did catok come back though? Why is he bad now?
 I like it 
  June 19, 2011
WOAH! i loved it! nice ending! keep it up! :)
 I like it 
  June 19, 2011
Wow, that was great!! Will the next one be more centered on Jordan? Cause that would be good. :D Amazing work!
 I like it 
  June 19, 2011
Awesome! ,Shadow
 
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