Commander Corder! You can do better than this! I saw your other creations, and I saw you can put much more effort to your build. I'm afraid the hardest decision in this MOC was the choice of minifigs. Also, you didn't exactly make it look like a war. I'm not talking about the hilarious pig, I'm talking about WALKING SOLDEIRS. Have you ever seen a non-American war movies? Have you seen photographies from wars? Have you ever heard a poet, sorrowfully describing the havoc of the war? I know it's LEGO, so we don't have to take the war so seriously, but we do have to convey our message realistically. Battlefields always involve a lot of running and shouting (that's why every army emphasizes order and discipline). Although surprisingly, the soldiers have always claimed to hear absolutely nothing in the most difficult wars, I guess it's the same silence you see in movies when someone dies: http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/MomentOfSilence (Be careful, spoilers). To sum up, I expected better from you, Commander Corder, I want you to put more effort into your builds. This is almost a "clone on a plate".
June 30, 2011
I'm happy to hear that, mainly because I want to see the castle, but also because I hope you won't post more build like this. Don't get me wrong, it's not THAT bad, but it looks a bit half-done. I keep telling people- if you do things hastily, write a disclaimer.
I am forced to agree with you 100%.
This was a hasty build.
My only excuse lies in the fact that I am using literally most of my bricks in the castle I'm making.
I will strive to avoid dissapointing builds in the future.
Thank you for your honest reveiw AA, means a bunch to me.
this is...different,its not your best work and i believe you could do better,like the base is nice but not very textured,but on the other hand your country fellers sure are weird,humerus even.i love the pig bomb
And the Gentlemen on the 1st North Carolina Metal Militia are the FIRST onto the battle field. What they lack in new fangoled E-qwipp'n and such, they more than make up for in aggression, and unorthodox tactics! Note the pig with the suicide vest! He's headed straight for the enemy leadership element! Git on in thar darli'n! Git it now! Git it!
Commander Corder. As always, the 1st North Carolina Metal Militia carries the day! Their unveiling of their new secret doctrine :Porcine Mammals as Offensive Weapons Systems, is perfect! Shame bout loos'n all that bacon though!
(I urge all ML commanders to get this MOC to “HEADS UP STATUS”. Remember, in Contact Alpha One, yellow heads are not for opinion. Yellow heads are POINTS FOR YOUR SIDE!)