Nearing the end of the season! Did you know that only Caleb Robinson's Island Locked and Eric Mickle's CYOA have made it to, and past episode ten. That's out of all of the newer CYOAs. I'm going to add my name to that list soon!
About this creation

Jocker and Nate started yelling.
Jocker: You can only take him when you defeat ME!
Nate: You little son of a gun! This is not humane! AAAUUGGHH!!

Jack and Aidan knew what they were doing was foolish, and stood back.

Head: You can't fight me. Nor can I fight you. If you haven't noticed I am but a hologram. I have my programing, and I must do that which I am programed for. You two will be sedated and cremated along with the one you wished to protect.
At that they were gone. Teleported to some other room or facility.

Head: You two have a chance at living. Your last test will be an easy one, if you know what to do.

The head then disappeared. Wade, and Justin were standing against the wall.
Jack: You traitors.
Wade: We would have been traitors to this cause if we had stayed with you.
Justin: There's more to those greenies, and skeletons than you know.

Malcom: Gotta' help these guys.
You may be wondering: What ever happened to him? He was in episode five... wasn't he? How did he get here? Malcom strayed from the group beetween episodes five and six. He knew that Wade, and Justin were going to do something bad. He watched them murder Michawell, and James. He tracked Wade, and Justin when they took Jack to their base in New Nevada. Now he's here, and ready for action.

Malcom: C'mon work.

Computer: ACCESS DENIED.
Malcom: Dang thing.

Head: Your attempt to breach security is futile. Your attempt to shut down my systems is futile. If you attempt to leave before I teleport you, you will-

Malcom: Holographic heads don't scare me.

*POW*
The shot went through the head strait to the security panel.
Malcom: That stupid head's creators didn't think that anyone could get here and disable him. Marines prove people wrong all of the time. Hoo-rah.

*Sound of metal being ripped off, and thrown to the ground*

Malcom: Looks like my muscles still work for me. What have we here...

Aidan: So are you going to kill us or wait for us to fight?
Justin: We'd like to see your efforts.

Aidan: Hey Jack, how are we going to get out of this mess?
Choices:
Aidan Moon, do you:
A) Run at Justin and kick.
B) Run at him and punch.
C) Slide across the small space beetween you and Justin and attempt to kick him.
D) Stand where you are, and hope for a miracle.
Matthew Sylvan, do you:
A) Move the red bars on the left lower and higher.
B) Press the white dot on the left.
C) Mess with the image on the right.
D) Randomly press buttons.
Crazy Awesome, and Pie will be in the last one or two episodes.
Hope you liked it! More to come so stay tuned!
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Nate Bott July 2, 2011 |
Yup. Lots of them. |
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Nate Bott July 1, 2011 |
WELL...cremated means burned, so...OH! |
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July 1, 2011 |
Nice, this story is full of twists! |
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July 1, 2011 |
Quoting Nate Bott
WELL...cremated means burned, so...OH!
Yes, it does mean burned to ashes, but what if Malcom stopped the head in time to save you? Or, what if something totally different is happening? Or what if its all in your head? So many what ifs. |
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June 30, 2011 |
Quoting Eric 'Hawk' Mickle
Yapdap, I need your scores reported in the F.I. Product Contest so I can announce a winner.
I'll do it now. |
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Yapdap, I need your scores reported in the F.I. Product Contest so I can announce a winner. |
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June 30, 2011 |
Cool! am I going to be killed? hopefully not. |
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June 30, 2011 |
I choose A. Maybe it will work. |
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Nate "The Climber" Bott June 29, 2011 |
I died! Dag nabbit! Nice Ep. so, what will happen next?
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June 29, 2011 |
Quoting Nate "The Climber" Bott
I died! Dag nabbit! Nice Ep. so, what will happen next?
Who said you died? |
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