hehe, so this is where it all began... I just love the poses on this, and the descriptions. Such a good point too, not many female bionicles made. Why oh why!

Thanx... I think the Bionicle pieces can be used in many more building styles/themes than just the "Bionicle Universe". Bionicle building has been very challenging for me and I guess that what I find attractive about it.

Thanx, I've wondered the same thing?! I did have an initial building-in-progress page that a few people made comments on. Those comments were helpful to me, cuz they helped me towards my final build. Again thanx and hope it inspires you to build. :)

I don't get why this doesn't have more comments. Put woman in the title of something on this site, and I'd expect crowds to flock to it, as they would to a mystical creature. Still, pretty neat creation here.

Nicely done! More like one of those posable figs you'd see in an art store, but Bionicle!

Thanx, Nathan, for taking the time to leave me a comment. I visited your site and left you one on your Toa of Ice. :)

Great job! The upper legs look very good. I do think that the torso could be improved, but this is very good, especially for a first Bionicle MOC. Also, on the feet you could add a bionicle hand piece such as on this MOC: http://mocpages.com/moc.php/265031 Anyway Awesome MOC!

Thanx 4 taking time 2 comment! Letici’s thumbnail pic was looking pretty sad & desolate when surrounded by creation thumbnail pic’s of more seasoned, experienced, and popular MOCers with their hundreds of comments & thousands of views! I recall you are home-schooled? The teacher side of me compels me to give you (& any other home-schooled MOCers who read this) some advice. Science IS special. Just note...There is NO replacement 4 the skills/experience/knowledge one gains in a modern, and more importantly, SAFE science LAB class. So, if you do not feel comfortable w/your local high school. You can always take a LAB class at you local community college! THANX again for your comment! :)

Pretty good! But most female bionicle shoulders should be even with the hips. But what do I know? I've never built a feme-MOC. The hair is nice. And I know who she likes. It's Phosphorus, isn't it?

1stly, thanx 4 the helpful critique. You stated things that I was feeling myself. Indeed, I had begun a 2nd bionicle & was trying to work on torso issues…. shoulder width & breast size. It was nice to have my own feelings confirmed. Problem 4 me is that I have a limited supply of parts & I don’t have the experience some have had building bios as they grew up. Also, LEGO has not been helpful in tooling/molding female torso parts…have they ever made a female bio? 2ndly, thanx 4 the heads-up on the self-moc that uses the same mask. But, I never intended Leticia to be a self-moc...although she is an ultra-ego of sorts...my real 1st name being Patricia….Pat. No…I’m sticking w/the Belville good witch figure.

Not bad for a first bionicle. I love how you tried many different techniques on this moc which many people tend not to do on their first bio moc. The torso looks a bit awkward. I suggest changing the lower armour as it's a bit wide for the body. One other tip is to create a custom torso rather than use an inika torso. That would help with possibility and chest detail. Nice work on the legs and arms. I see that you put the lower arms on a different way to get the crossed arms possibility. a custom arm could give you that effect while still being able to move forward at the elbow. I know this has been long but I assume this is your self moc and Callan lord of fire's mask is the same as yours. Most people like to have a unique mask on their self moc and callan had that one first so you might consider changing the mask. Nice hair btw.