Thanks so much to Baron Von Ben for that epic main picture!
Terribly sorry for the delay, I just started school again... You lucky American's and your long Summer holidays... Anyway, now I can finally post something, one of (In my opinion) my best MOC's :D Hope you like my revamp of Makuta Crutible :D Oh and this is my entry to my MOC-off with Cody G, enjoy :D
About this creation
Elements: Shadow and Rock
Title(s): Makuta, Leader, Evil, Nightmare, The End Of Everything
Mask: Mask of Evasion, the ability to be unharmed by any storm or high/low temperature of any element.
Weapon(s): Large Shadow staff, Spining wrist blades and large claws
Story:Crutible is Atukam's brother, He was ordered by Makuta to rule over the ruins of Po-Metru, When Teridax ruled, He was later ordered to be the Leader of Makuta's team of elite Makuta, The Makuta Destro, The Makuta Destro's members are the best Makuta of each element, Makuta felt Crutible was the best for Stone and Shadow, (This will happen in A Story Reborn's sequel), Makuta considered him to be one of his best Men and figured he was the best person to rule the Makuta Destro, Before Crutible ruled over Po-Metru, he lived on Racta Magna, were he fought the most powerful Toa on that planet, a Toa of Ice named Trokan, Before he could kill this Toa it transformed into a Turaga and survived Crutibles wrath, He often boast that he killed the most powerful Toa on Racta Magna, Even though he didn't. When Crutible was picked to be leader of Destro, Makuta Infernike, who wished to be leader, tried to kill him and take Crutible's place, however Infernike's trap failed and Crutible actually became stronger! Crutible and Infernike have hated eachother ever since, but Crutible refuses to kick Infernike out of the team, he love to cause Infernike as much pain as possible! Crutible was again challenged to leadership of Destro by a Makuta of Ice, the Makuta of Ice failed, but was a fair fight for Crutible! Crutible was later killed by Toa, In his quest to bring back Teridax.
TO THE MOC!
Oh and here is the old one... it was so bad :P
Here he is, look at that smexy beast! XD
Like I said before he is easily one of my Best MOC's! Oh and big thanks to Clockwork for the inspiration for this awesome revamp :D
Crutible's back, so happy with this!
Ok, now for some detail, here are his legs, you may remember these from past teasers :)
A closer look at his lower legs :D
Upper legs and waist, a lot of this design came from Clockwork's Bonechill, one of the best MOC's I've ever seen, so I lots of credit to him, but I did change the designs a fair bit :D
The back of the legs, I'm quite happy with this part too :D
Another shot of the waist and upper legs.
The waist and lower torso...
And his cape/man skirt like thing :D
The beautiful back design, I just love it so much :D
All those yummy spikes!
A closer look at them... feel free to bask in the glory!
An epic back shot of his head and shoulders :D
The torso, a lot like Bonechill's but in my design :D
An even closer look at the torso.
His new head, it looked too much like Shadow the other way :P
And his arm design! Do you like how I used the Stronius armour?
And now for the worst teaser ever (because I show you all of him) The Makuta who's name I haven't thought of yet but he is the Ice Makuta from Crutible's bio!
Crutible: All Toa will fall!
Ok, that'll all :D I hope you like him :D
Next post will be the next Chapter of A Story Reborn :D
Hope you liked it ;)
Good luck to my opponent Cody ;)
Thanks for viewing!
Don't forget to rate and comment!
Till next time ;)
I guess it does look a lot like him now that I think about it! But like you said, I didn't copy you! Not at all!
A.D Lord of Darkness
September 20, 2011
I just realized this, but he looks an awful lot like A.D's older versions, the lower legs and feet especially, plus the upper arms look like A.D's old ones combined with his old upper legs, plus the cape, and the torso has the D shaped pieces sticking out like A.D's. I'm not saying you coped, I'm just pointing out the similarities.
mmmm, the orange mech is quite sweet! but, you lost a nice opportunity with the trans-piece, it shines with a blacklight! it must look terrific under the helmet...shining! you ought to try that some day ben!
Quoting Ben Cossy
Oh man this is so freaking cute! Love it mate ;) And about your comment on Dweller, sorry mate but you asked me at the worst possible time! I'm currently in a MOC-OFF with Gringat (I'm screwed :P) Anyway, how about when that's over, then we can fight to the death! *Eye of the Tiger starts to play*
No problem mate!As soon as you finish your moc-off with him,just give me a hint and I'll be glad to fight you to death!Very cool moc btw,the build is nice and so it's the design,but he's a bit messy at some places.Stils very good nonetheless!
I'll check it out Red Eye ;) That's a clever idea Daggeron, but I'm not sure, it's a group now, oh cool :D Can you invite me to it please :D Thanks ;) Um, I'm not sure if he'll be in it JP, When I post the next chapter you'll see why ;)
I like it
August 21, 2011
Dude...In Your Next The Legend Reborn Story Or In Whatever Story Jurassica Is Going To Be In...I'm Sorry If This Screws Anything Up...But Jurassica Is Evil Now.....Please Read His Bio On my Page For The Entire Story =D !
You were right! My contest got deleted. So I made it a group! Please join! This Crutible character of yours... it's AWESOME!!! This is just a suggestion, but it might be cool if you made an alternate Crutible that was good. Oh, and give him blue upside-down Whenua Mask!!
Ok, but here's the problem. Should I just change the main picture or almost everything? I mean I don't think I would like to post another Bonax on the internet, or I would have to ask everybody again to look at that moc. What do you think I should do?
AMAZING.I ant believe i havent commented yet.absolutely aamazing.I love the spikes and the new head is pretty cool too.I was a bit inactive because of school.All my pictures are gone.:( dont know what to do.anyways awesome work bro.you did very well on this:)
Thanks Red eye, I'll take a look at both, well it would be a good idea to do that, tell you what, I'll add you to my favourites if you get better lighting for your pictures, Not trying to sounds mean, it's just that would improve your MOC's so much! Hope you didn't take any offence with that ;)
You know Cossy, I have an idea. First please try not to take this as an act of selfishness. I will eplain. You told me to warn you when the next chapter(s) of the War of Darkness will come and I have to comment on your mocs to tell you about them. I would do the same for my mocs so you can look at them. So I have come to something. How about you add me as one of your favorite biulders? That way, you'll know when my mocs come up and they will come up on your activity. Again, please don't take this as a selfish act.
OK Ben, now I can see this and what do I have to say?: I'm impressed. What got my attention was the spikes on the back that went kinda curly. And all the other options are great too! Anyway, I mainly came to tell you about the last chapter of the War of Darkness. Here it is: http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/283624 Sadly, you'll know in the discription that there were no pictures because they had bad effect. Anyway, hope you at least like the storyline!
Thanks everyone! Yeah, pretty much what Legofreak said Cheesy :D Cheers Soap, glad you like him ;) I love your long comments Popcorn! It's cool about you being away for a while mate ;) I'm glad you like him, and I'm really glad you like his back :D Yes I do eat my spike pieces XD Nah it's just that they look so cool I'm saying they are "yummy" :P And sure, I'll change it to Popcorn ;) Thanks mate ;)
Wow, man!!!! This is truly AMAZING!!! Prepare for another LONG comment (sit back and grab some popcorn. Thank you). First I'd like to say that I'm sorry for not being active over the past couple weeks. I've been on a Fifty-mile hike for Boy Scouts (should've been called a Sixty-mile hike) and I've been tired from that. And I've also been away from home for a while. AND MOCpages crashed which kind of slowed me down. Ok, now that that's over with I'll get on to the MOC. I really like the whole MOC. There's nothing that I can really set aside that I like better than the rest. Except for his back. Now his back is just INGENIOUS!!!!! His torso is also quite spectacular. He kind of reminds me of a MOC that I'm working on right now. Except for the one that I'm making has all black colors. Btw why'd you call the spikes yummy? Did you eat one? I sure hope that you didn't. Um, maybe I should stop now. I've kind of written a LONG paragraph. Before I stop typing I want to ask a question. Could you possibly change my name on your homepage to Popcorn? Thanks. And great work, man!!!!! This is just EPIC!!!!!
I like it
August 17, 2011
I have a question, how does a MOC-off work?
I like it
August 17, 2011
Dang, He is so cool! :D I'm gettin' jealous! >:D Super great work, mate! :D You cannot go wrong with orang, and black! ;D Wonderful work! :D
I'll check it out MG, Sorry Evox, I didn't want too many pictures in this, so it'll have to be in the next :) I'm not sure JP, some will, some won't, it all depends if I can fit you in well or not, but my next post will be Chapter 10 :D Thanks again everyone!
I like it
August 16, 2011
Question....Is Jurassica In The Next A Legend Reborn Chapter? I'm Very Sorry To Sak, I'm Just So Excited! I Can't Wait! I'm Sorry But Still & BTW, Crutible Is A Epic Name =D !
Yeah, I agree with you on that mate :D Look, he is great! Fitting personality the other is better :P Anyway, I do agree with you on the fact that leaders should be taller, but still, I like him as he is :D Thanks again mate ;)
I can plainly see that you think he is a thousand times better than the old one and taht you put effort into him, because I must say it IS a thousand times better than the old one custom and look wise, I just really liked the old one's size, and it's look of power, and I personally think that the leaders need to be big. That's why I did what I did to Von Nebula, he was midjet before XD
Well thanks ;) The reason I wasn't so happy was just that I put lots of effort into him and I thought it was a thousand times better than the old one, so I felt kinda sad to here that, but now I know what you mean, the older one had like a proud Makuta look to himself, I see why you would like that :D Thanks mate ;)
Thanks everyone! Ok Red-Eye :D Thanks Ultra! Wait do you mean the mask Legobob? Like I've said a few times now, he looks way to much like Toa Shadow the other way. Thanks JP and Robin ;) Well Sharp, if you get the bohrok teeth and get a thin tub (You should be able to make the tube out in the pictures) put the teeth on the tube and then flex the tube. Then insert each end of the tube into the holes on the MOC :D Hope that helps ;) Will do M G! Thanks again everyone ;)
Unfortunatley it still won't show me the pics but i got good news. You know that "new account" thing I told you right? Well I can't post that moc yet, but I made my new homepage for the 2nd era. Here it is if you want to look at it. http://www.mocpages.com/home.php/68765 thanks! And my name is now Red-Eyes Rider.
OK i can't really see the picture cause it won't show it but i bet it's a really cool moc. Just came to contact u guys after the system crash that's all. War of Darkness will be over as soon as i post the final chapter of it and when mocpages is fine, i'll post one moc you will really like. It's even part of that "new account thing" i told you in that one message. Another reason i came to contact is because i don't think i got much activity in so yeah. Hope you're doing good in mocpages Cossy, and don't worry about my buddy icon. I was going to change that already.
Thanks guys ;) HAHA I'm glad you noticed that Wertman :P That's pretty much Infernike's main insult to him XD I'm glad you like Destro bro ;) Thanks Akara ;) And thanks MG, I'll take a look, sorry Archangel, as awesome as that sounds, I can't I've got school and I'm very busy, sorry mate! If I could, I would ;)
If you arent busy i was wondering if you could participate in a challenge to build a Character from Marvel Vs. Capcom 3, it will be a challenge for elite builders such as yourself. i have already invited Clockwork Tempest and will invite one more builder to this challenge, Phos or Gringat, maybe? I have an idea: Both.
Thanks a bunch guys! HAHA thanks Razorclaw! I'll try and use it :D Thanks Plague ;) Thanks Michelangelo! Um, I'm not sure how many, I'd say about 20 or so :D HAHA thanks Ben ;) I'd totally accept your offer... that is if you are offering it :P You think so Vandi? I guess, still, thanks ;) I'm currently doing one Nick, but I'm not accepting anymore requests, I will post a few Self MOC's soon though :D HEHE you found it before I announced it Keegan :P OH that sounds cool :D Can't wait to see it :D Thanks Legofreak! Well, he may be based off Bonechill, but there is still A LOT of him that is my design. Wait, was that a joke? Cody already entered his though :P and yes you are, just not sure when :P Thanks again ;) Thanks Lego Obsessionist, I don't really see how the spikes have been badly positioned, but ok, thanks ;) Thanks Owl ;) Cheers Owen ;) I'll be more active in the group S.T.S! Thanks Chopper ;) HEHE, it might just be Bonechill Pho :P Thanks Cody, but I still think it'll be a close one! I agree, it was SO fun! Good luck to you bro ;)
I like it
August 2, 2011
Man this is epic! One of your best MOCs! Just too epic for words! Ugh the epicness is overwhelming!
I like it
August 2, 2011
The waist is too thin for a MOC this tall, But I'm not going to complain too much about that. It's such a great MOC on it's own. When you showed the picture of deathchill, I had this strange desire to whistle. so I did. I'm sad because were in the LAST MONTH OF SUMMER BREAK!
Whoah, i agree, this is one of your best mocs! All the spikes on his back is creepy! I must say the use of skrall armor behind glatorian ankle guards is really clever! YOU BUILT BONECHILL, SIKK! Truly awesome indeed. 5/5
EPIC! Very much looks like Bonechill :P And I like the way you used the Stronius Armor! :D And the new Upper Arms looks like the New Destrin. Here's a Link http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/267724 Remember: You don't have to comment just telling you to see the comparison of relativity :P AND Can you start righting in The Private Chat Group of friends? There is 25 active member, adn most of them are active at least :P
Great! The orange spikes could be better positioned, the ones on the back almost seem loke overkill. Of course, overkill could be a good thing for a Makuta. The legs are very well-built, as is the torso. Excellent job!
I wonder who that teaser could be? :P Man, great job. I like him a lot better than the last one. :D The only things that really bother me is that you mostly based him off Bonechill, probably not a good idea for a contest, and that the orange pieces over his feet are a different shade of orange. He's still epic for what he is though. I'm sure you'll do good in the MOC-Off, it just depends on what Cody's entry is. :P BTW, Am I going to be in the Story Reborn? :/
I has been on youtube, lookin at ur channel MUHAHAHAHAHAHAH. anyways this is an awesome revamp a ton better than the last one, you've earned the re-vamp of my version of cossy that ive done, i should upload it soon.
nice job on this, the back is pretty glorious, I've wanted to try a design like that for a while now but have been to lazy too, and I think you made up for the worst teaser ever with one of the most vague, can't wait to see what it is, by the way when do plan on doing another selfmoc wave?
Very nice. I wish you would've given me a picture of the back to edit! That's a sweet technique there! Good luck in your MOC-off. Hmm...I should do one of those someday...BEN COSSY! I CHALLENGE YOU TO A MOC OFF! Lol, jk. Maybe after Cody, though. :P
Thanks Chaos, glad you like it ;) And thanks Cheesy, I'm glad that the torso is the only thing you don't like :P I do agree with you on that, I'll add to it :D Glad you really like him :D Anyway, you may be on your last month, but I'm back at school D: 2 tests in two days... lucky me! Enjoy your last month though ;)
Thanks a bunch guys ;) Glad you like him Wertman! I guess by short arms you just mean that they are stubby, cause they are pretty proportionate, anyway, thanks mate ;) Well thank you LMFAO :D Glad that this makes you like Bionicles more :D Thanks Robin ;) Glad you like him Callan, your comment means a lot ;) HEHE yes, but it's mainly the mask he is jealous of XD Glad you like him buddy! Thanks Hypershadow, well it is an epic MOC to base something off! Can't wait to see his brother look even more awesome :D
All the time iv been on mocpages iv hated the bionicale mocs,i used to like them there cool,but this WOW! This is the best makuta i have seen in years! Love the color,the cape the wepons the shape...Brilliante 5/5!
Nice work, mah pal! the Legs and chest are really effective, the skirt looks nice, but i think it would suit him better as a cape. the only thing is the arms, which look a bit short... but still, nice work :)
HAHA thanks so much mate! Coming from you that's probably the best comment ever! Thanks, it means so much :D I'm glad some of the greatest people here (you) like him just as much as I do :D Thanks mate ;)
Well, WOW! Really awesome revamp! Much better, especially the legs and torso. That back is BEAST! Nice arms and staff too! It's Bonechill's long lost distant cousin! Can't wait! Another brilliant work of art from the amazing BEN COSSY!
Thanks a guys ;) I'm glad you like him ;) I do agree with you about the legs Legobob, I had to change his torso because of that when I made him, but I thought they worked with his body. Anyway, about the mask, I changed it because I felt it looked better and like I said above, it looked too much like an orange and black Shadow :) Cheers Mos :D Your comment wasn't offensive at all, I totally agree :D Anyway, it might be Bonechill, I'm still thinking about it :D Thanks again ;)
awesome as, that is sick bro why did you give him a nexus and nexun mask also none of you r creations bad don't say that the former one was bad your only mad mocs were the wooden background ones sorry they where a bit generation 1 me but anyway hope that wasn't offensive and looking forward to bone chill i mean whoever is next i hope it is bone chill or it will feel like a fail