This is a revamp of an old MOC I had made, Zepar. Unfortunately I don't have any pictures of the original Zepar.
About this creation
Zepar was a Toa of Air but was infected by a shadow leech. Somehow though, he managed to retain control of his mind, only his body and powers were changed. Zepar went from being a Toa of air to a monster of Acid. He fled from the OoMN in fear that he would one day completely lose himself to the shadow. He ended up joining a Mercenary group and has worked as a mercenary ever since.
Zepar wears the Kanohi Negita, which allows the wearer to see into the future for 5 seconds.
This guy is very cool, I must say. However, I do have a few ideas that I think you might want to try.
For example, you could try and move the Inika leg armor down a peg, as well as flipping the Nuparu armor upside down and perhaps to slightly decrease the length of the lower arms.
Obviously you don't have to, and it's just a few ideas, and I hope I could help. But nonetheless, he is still a cool MOC.
Very well done! You've seemlessly been able to mix Bionicle and Hero Factory which I find somewhat of a hassle >:( Either way great job!
Would you take a look at my most recent MOC (Zenoron v5H) and review it? Id like to see how others view my combo of Bionicle and Hero Factory.