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Helrixsian REVAMP
this is my 1st female moc REVAMPED FINALLY :D she is now a lot more sexy 4 my self moc Raymond ^^ heres da link 4 the drawing version of her http://sniperray213.deviantart.com/favourites/?offset=24#/d46xxe0
About this creation


THIS IS MY CUSTOM VERSION OF Helrixsian and if u want a how2 on her then ill make a vid of it


GIVE CREDIT IF U USE ANY OF MY DESIGNES
IF U STEAL ANY OF MY DESIGNES W/OUT GIVIN CREDIT THEN UR SELF MOC WILL BE TORN APART 4 OTHER MOCS



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 I made it 
  April 30, 2012
Quoting Jacob Manahan Your getting better, like stove top said female mocs are hard to pull off. But she still looks a tad blocky, and I think the shoulders and breasts are a tad out of proportion. But overall nice job!
Thanks :). and i was thinking that her upper body will need some work but overall shes trulyly finished.
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  April 30, 2012
Your getting better, like stove top said female mocs are hard to pull off. But she still looks a tad blocky, and I think the shoulders and breasts are a tad out of proportion. But overall nice job!
 I made it 
  December 15, 2011
Quoting StoveTop Creator I see much improvement in your building. Females are very difficult to build. But, as others have said also, you need to work on her hip structure, giving it a more curvey/womanly nature. Bionicle shoulder pieces help in this department. :)
thx and wut part is tht?
 I made it 
  December 15, 2011
Quoting StoveTop Creator I see much improvement in your building. Females are very difficult to build. But, as others have said also, you need to work on her hip structure, giving it a more curvey/womanly nature. Bionicle shoulder pieces help in this department. :)
thx and wut part is tht?
 I like it 
  December 15, 2011
I see much improvement in your building. Females are very difficult to build. But, as others have said also, you need to work on her hip structure, giving it a more curvey/womanly nature. Bionicle shoulder pieces help in this department. :)
 I made it 
  December 13, 2011
Quoting Bob že inconceivably invincible Really well done! 5/5!
thank you :) the design took me a few minutes probly an 1 or 2 to revamp her.
  December 13, 2011
Sorry, but I really can't give this a rating. Like Someone even less popular said, the proportians don't look good at all (very manly shoulders) and the chest is very awkward. You are 17? I can't believe that (and something on your YT page isn't a proof, you could have given false data). It looks like how very young children imagine a female person. Still, one good thing is the customess of the upper arm, but ther would fit on a male character more well. I hope that this helps you with future MoCs.
 I made it 
  September 20, 2011
Quoting Bob že inconceivably invincible Really well done! 5/5!
thank u i have worked hard 2 revamp her :) i also made the vid of her on youtube
 I like it 
  September 20, 2011
Really well done! 5/5!
 I made it 
  September 13, 2011
Quoting Toa Venom Hey! First, nice Moc (But I've already said that on Youtube I think XD). Second of all, I was wondering if you could help and make Bionicle Nation become more active? It's been really dead lately. You don't have to if you don't want to, though.
thx^^ and i completly 4got all bout tht group XD
 I like it 
  September 13, 2011
Hey! First, nice Moc (But I've already said that on Youtube I think XD). Second of all, I was wondering if you could help and make Bionicle Nation become more active? It's been really dead lately. You don't have to if you don't want to, though.
 I made it 
  September 12, 2011
Quoting Demontile the Demon god of Darkness and ? Demonon.Chose the one u think is the best because i got a whole file just him
ok
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  September 12, 2011
Demonon.Chose the one u think is the best because i got a whole file just him
 I made it 
  September 12, 2011
Quoting Demontile the Demon god of Darkness and ? can i be in yr story
sure wut is ur mocs name :) and i must see him/her so i can try 2 build him/her
 I like it 
  September 12, 2011
can i be in yr story
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  September 12, 2011
can i be in yr story
 I made it 
  September 9, 2011
Quoting Shadow Falcon Wow er...eh.....What is with the chest? Don't go for over kill. I mean the body looks good then....yeah. The yellow is out of place I suggest you remove it. The colors could be cleaned up too. 2/5 ,Shadow
i know about the neck its tht she was wounded there and had 2 get it replace(after battling a makuta) so she was given a yellow (also armor) neck part 2 replace her old 1
  September 9, 2011
Wow er...eh.....What is with the chest? Don't go for over kill. I mean the body looks good then....yeah. The yellow is out of place I suggest you remove it. The colors could be cleaned up too. 2/5 ,Shadow
 I made it 
  September 7, 2011
Quoting Sora Lerece hey man its me sorajel in yt and awesome moc on helrixsian its not good its great
HAY HOW R U :D and thx^^
 I like it 
  September 7, 2011
hey man its me sorajel in yt and awesome moc on helrixsian its not good its great
sniperray213 Ultimate Sniper
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  August 30, 2011
OMG Ho-Ta Alert XD !
 I made it 
  August 30, 2011
Quoting JPfan65 Studios OMG Ho-Ta Alert XD !
XD thx^^
 I made it 
  August 27, 2011
Quoting Someone even less popular Poses are allways good.They bring a creation to life. You could go her fighting something, or with raymond, I don't know.
XD ok :)
  August 27, 2011
Poses are allways good.They bring a creation to life. You could go her fighting something, or with raymond, I don't know.
 I made it 
  August 26, 2011
Quoting Someone even less popular I'm just going to say you have a lot more sets then me. Also, put her in poses!
yes i do have a lot of sets XD n i was tryin 2 figure out wut poses 2 put her in after revampin her
  August 26, 2011
I'm just going to say you have a lot more sets then me. Also, put her in poses!
 I made it 
  August 25, 2011
Quoting Someone even less popular Umm. I'm sorry but if you're seventeen then we'd be kinda expecting you to be at least as good as davix. I kinda thought you were ten or eleven...
davix? and i dont have tht many parts 2 make awesome mocs or so. and if u want proof tht im 17 look at the age on my utube channel www.youtube.com/user/sniperray213
  August 25, 2011
Umm. I'm sorry but if you're seventeen then we'd be kinda expecting you to be at least as good as davix. I kinda thought you were ten or eleven...
 I made it 
  August 24, 2011
Quoting Someone even less popular Whoa, whoa, no need to get angry, this is what the comments are for. Breasts can be big without being OTT like you did there,I mean you've got metru blue, classic blue and trans blue there,Well why is it yellow? Why do you need a second nokama set?I'm sorry but this is what the comments are for. Look, how old are you? If you tell me then I'll tell you if it's good for your age. I'm twelve and most people here are thirteen.
im 17 years old.
 I made it 
  August 24, 2011
Quoting Someone even less popular Whoa, whoa, no need to get angry, this is what the comments are for. Breasts can be big without being OTT like you did there,I mean you've got metru blue, classic blue and trans blue there,Well why is it yellow? Why do you need a second nokama set?I'm sorry but this is what the comments are for. Look, how old are you? If you tell me then I'll tell you if it's good for your age. I'm twelve and most people here are thirteen.
im 17 years old.
  August 24, 2011
Whoa, whoa, no need to get angry, this is what the comments are for. Breasts can be big without being OTT like you did there,I mean you've got metru blue, classic blue and trans blue there,Well why is it yellow? Why do you need a second nokama set?I'm sorry but this is what the comments are for. Look, how old are you? If you tell me then I'll tell you if it's good for your age. I'm twelve and most people here are thirteen.
 I made it 
  August 22, 2011
Quoting Someone even less popular I'm sorry, but there are several things wrong with this moc. #1: Breasts are not simply basketballs strapped to a woman's chest, those need work. #2: proportions. A woman's hips should be the same with as their shoulders and their feet are small relative to the rest. #3: coulors. You've combined three different tipes of blue here, in addition to black, grey and silver quite messily. Try to make a pattern with your coulors, like I do. And what's that yellow peice doing there? I'm not trying to sound mean, but it does need work. http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/282984
1 shes suppose 2 look like the pic on DA 2the only 2 blues shes suppose 2 have is the Guraak Rahski hands and Takadox tanslusint blue(see through blue) not Thok blue 3 the yellow piece is the replacement of her old neck cuz she was almost killed by a makuta when she was a matoran. 4 i didnt have a 2ST NOKAMA SET DUH 5 if u cant say nothin nice about this revamp then keep it 2 ur self and dont say a word of it >:3. I WORKED HARD 2 GET THIS RIGHT GOD AT LEAST GIVE ME CREDIT 4 MAKIN IT
 I made it 
  August 22, 2011
Quoting Wertman 8 that yellow piece kinda ruins the moc, but otherwise, very nice ;)
thx^^ and the yellow piece is a replace ment 4 her old neck
  August 22, 2011
I'm sorry, but there are several things wrong with this moc. #1: Breasts are not simply basketballs strapped to a woman's chest, those need work. #2: proportions. A woman's hips should be the same with as their shoulders and their feet are small relative to the rest. #3: coulors. You've combined three different tipes of blue here, in addition to black, grey and silver quite messily. Try to make a pattern with your coulors, like I do. And what's that yellow peice doing there? I'm not trying to sound mean, but it does need work. http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/282984
 I like it 
  August 20, 2011
that yellow piece kinda ruins the moc, but otherwise, very nice ;)
 
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